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Title: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 12, 2016, 12:46:07 PM
This is a discussion thread for my two parallel stories on HP Fanfic Archives.  The two start out very similarly and will have a number of parallel events, but they won't be mirror images by any means.  I hope to write enjoyable reading and include a few surprises along the way.  Fair warning, there probably will be some "tips of the hat" to various authors, both print and fanfic, that I especially enjoy.

This is response to Slyfer101's challenge (and the fact that my muse kept throwing out ideas fior the companion slave!Harry story) and I will, with permission, be borrowing ideas from both his story and T1p2's story (T1p2 graciously allowed to adapt large parts of his first few chapters) but the direction and events of my stories will be my own.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 12, 2016, 10:34:30 PM
Goblin Clans:
Starting from Slyfer's original work, I have the Hook, Wick, Rok, Tusk, Claw, Bite, and Tear clans, to which I'm adding the Stone clan.  I am open to suggestions as to further clans or if there should be further clans.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 12, 2016, 10:38:31 PM
Rend? (Tusk, Claw, Bite, Tear)
Boulder? (Rok, Stone)
Spear, Sword? (Hook)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 12, 2016, 11:00:16 PM
Rend? (Tusk, Claw, Bite, Tear)
Boulder? (Rok, Stone)
Spear, Sword? (Hook)
Definitely worth considering; I don't think I'd want more than 13 total clans as more get unwieldy from the story-telling PoV.  I'm thinking twelve plus a royal clan works well but I've not fully fleshed that aspect out.

Addendum:  I think I may go with Axe instead of Spear; the temptation for my punning side to name the Spear clans' Chronicler "Shakespear" would be intense.  ;D
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 13, 2016, 09:55:26 PM
First thoughts on a "birthday special" for Rose/Harry - spread and stretched vertically, birthday lashes (instead of the human tradition of spankings) from King Kilgrav, Director Ragnok, and the Head of each clan, the only concession to the occasion being the use of a soft flogger instead of a single-tailed whip or a "cat of nine tails".  This would be followed by a "special treat" for Rose/Harry; very intimate introduction to another sapient magical species.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 13, 2016, 10:39:37 PM
It's interesting, I find I'm expanding a fair bit on T1p2's second chapter because my Rose is being more deliberative and careful with respect to magical contracts (as she said, the whole situation with the Goblet has taught her caution when she has the time to exercise it -  you could also argue that her "inner Slytherin" is coming out to help protect her).  The reaction of the goblins will be interesting, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 13, 2016, 11:00:14 PM
interesting.

I'll admit I'm a little distracted since as I got Cities:Skylines yesterday and I'm having a blast with it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 13, 2016, 11:29:16 PM
*chuckle* Considering that I was in college when D&D first came out, computer games never really caught on with me (just as well, I've got too many other interests now).

I think one of the things that's going to catch the goblins' attention and respect about my Rose/Harry is that neither will beg or whine, but accept things straight up; nor will either attempt to evade responsibility for what they've done (I think the comment in the first chapter about "having done the crime and feeling honor bound to "do the time" covers that attitude) and more will show in Chapter 2.  Having said that, both will also be more deliberate in preparation for negotiations and the subsequent servitude.

Of course, the goblins will also get some surprises, too, along the way over those three years.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 07:17:17 AM
Okay, the second chapter of both stories is coming along, somewhat "talky", but that can't be helped as I'm still setting the stage.

Here's me current draft of the final contract Rose/Harry signs:
Contract of Servitude

I, the undersigned, in full possession of mental faculties, and free of any compulsions, charms, potions, or geass, agree to this contract and its stipulations.
1) I, the undersigned, will be an 'indentured servant' of Gringott's Bank, London.
2) For a period of three years.
3) During that time, I shall remain in the care of the Goblins of Gringotts, and will live in the goblin city of Tirith Ungul, which rests below London.
4) As an indentured servant, I will have no rights or privileges afforded any normal bank customer or person, and will swear to follow any and all commands I might be issued, save for anything that would be construed as illegal by Gringotts, the Ministry of Magic, and the International Confederacy of Wizards.
5) I will submit to any and all tasks, labours, punishments, etcetera, that I am assigned/will earn during my term of service.
6) I will suffer no permanent harm, including but not limited to phyiscal, mental, emotional, psychological, and financial damage and damage to my reputation.
7) During this time, control of the Potter vaults will be passed to the acting head of House Black that I may not have my heritage stolen.
8 )  will be allowed no contact with the outside world for the entire term except for one hour at the end of each year for consultation with the following trusted advisors: Andromeda Tonks, Luna Lovegood, and, if she chooses to accept, Hermione Granger.  In consideration of this, Gringotts has the right to display me as an anonymous slave on their steps for one day each year, the choice of day and means of display being solely their choice.
9) I will agree to never speak to anyone of any secrets I learn during said term.
10) I will agree to never seek retribution for anything that befalls me during this term, and will swear an oath to this effect.


Comments, critiques, or suggestions?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 15, 2016, 07:58:01 AM
Okay, the second chapter of both stories is coming along, somewhat "talky", but that can't be helped as I'm still setting the stage.

Here's me current draft of the final contract Rose/Harry signs:
Contract of Servitude

I, the undersigned, in full possession of mental faculties, and free of any compulsions, charms, potions, or geass, agree to this contract and its stipulations.
1) I, the undersigned, will be an 'indentured servant' of Gringott's Bank, London.
2) For a period of three years.
3) During that time, I shall remain in the care of the Goblins of Gringotts, and will live in the goblin city of Tirith Ungul, which rests below London.
4) As an indentured servant, I will have no rights or privileges afforded any normal bank customer or person, and will swear to follow any and all commands I might be issued, save for anything that would be construed as illegal by Gringotts, the Ministry of Magic, and the International Confederacy of Wizards.
5) I will submit to any and all tasks, labours, punishments, etcetera, that I am assigned/will earn during my term of service.
6) I will suffer no permanent harm, including but not limited to phyiscal, mental, emotional, psychological, and financial damage and damage to my reputation.
7) During this time, control of the Potter vaults will be passed to the acting head of House Black that I may not have my heritage stolen.
8 )  will be allowed no contact with the outside world for the entire term except for one hour at the end of each year for consultation with the following trusted advisors: Andromeda Tonks, Luna Lovegood, and, if she chooses to accept, Hermione Granger.  In consideration of this, Gringotts has the right to display me as an anonymous slave on their steps for one day each year, the choice of day and means of display being solely their choice.
9) I will agree to never speak to anyone of any secrets I learn during said term.
10) I will agree to never seek retribution for anything that befalls me during this term, and will swear an oath to this effect.


Comments, critiques, or suggestions?

That seems pretty good to me.

Perhaps though, Rose/Harry could request a Quid pro quo?

Rose/Harry leaving their period of "indentured servitude" in a better condition than they arrived in?
Ova/Sperm storage?
more favourable interest rates, etc?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 12:33:50 PM
Biggest thing I've found in re-reading is that it should read "...in full possession of my mental faculties...".  That will be corrected.

I'm not sure Rose/Harry would consider asking for any further quid pro quo, feeling that "doing the time for doing the crime" is only honorable.  I'll think on it and the goblins may offer something later if they develop a favorable impression of their slave.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 15, 2016, 08:11:18 PM
Before I go play some Cities:Skylines heres a few pictures I'd forgotten about until now.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/383163/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-1

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/390874/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-2

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/398838/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-3

It would be amusing if in the Harry Potter version when/if Hermione/other female was to join him that this occurred.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 09:11:15 PM
Before I go play some Cities:Skylines heres a few pictures I'd forgotten about until now.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/383163/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-1

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/390874/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-2

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/398838/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-3

It would be amusing if in the Harry Potter version when/if Hermione/other female was to join him that this occurred.
That may happen, though I can see the first and second happening with two gals and a double-ended dildo, too, while the third could just as easily be two gals.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2016, 09:14:09 PM
Before I go play some Cities:Skylines heres a few pictures I'd forgotten about until now.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/383163/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-1

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/390874/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-2

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/398838/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-3

It would be amusing if in the Harry Potter version when/if Hermione/other female was to join him that this occurred.

would be good but I don't ever see Hermione joining any of them as goblin slaves she is the poster child for muggleborns.


i could see it as harry and one of the slytherin girls
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 09:47:25 PM
Before I go play some Cities:Skylines heres a few pictures I'd forgotten about until now.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/383163/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-1

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/390874/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-2

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/398838/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-3

It would be amusing if in the Harry Potter version when/if Hermione/other female was to join him that this occurred.

would be good but I don't ever see Hermione joining any of them as goblin slaves she is the poster child for muggleborns.


i could see it as harry and one of the slytherin girls
Actually, I could see it if Hermione started feeling guilt over Rose/Harry taking the responsibility for the deaths due to the dragon she, Hermione, released; particularly if other events soured her on the wizarding world (covertly-given love potions and/or an overly insistent and overbearing Ron - especially if she finds out how few rights she'll have if she marries a pureblood).  I've had a few thoughts on how that might play out.  But you are correct in that I can see those as more likely with Rose/Harry and the daughter(s) of Death Eaters who end up as slaves to satisfy the blood debt accumulated by the marked member(s) of their family.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 09:56:53 PM
I'm planning on going with the purification/cleansing ritual I posted on T1p2's thread and I'm thinking that, if the goblins found evidence of potioning and/or bindings, they would want to do the ritual, at cost, for those Rose/Harry list in the contract as "trusted advisors" because not doing so would constitute a potential security breach.  I can see Andromeda arranging for House Black to pay for the ritual for all three.

For them, the ritual will be done one at a time and with more comfortable restraints than Rose/Harry had.  *wicked chuckle* Imagine how Hermione would feel if she got aroused by being bound, naked, on a St. Andrew's cross; I wonder if it would send her mind exploring some avenues of thought she hadn't before.  This could get real interesting if potioning and/or bindings were found on any of the three (I'd wager potioning of Hermione and Luna - loyalty potions by Dumbledore at Hogwarts at a minimum - and possibly some binding of Hermione - power reduction, perhaps).  OF course, if Hermione showed positive for love potion exposure, Ronald Weasley would not remain her boyfriend very long.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2016, 11:02:02 PM
Before I go play some Cities:Skylines heres a few pictures I'd forgotten about until now.

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/383163/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-1

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/390874/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-2

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SneakAttack1221/398838/100-Series-Harry-Hermione---Bound-to-Please-pt-3

It would be amusing if in the Harry Potter version when/if Hermione/other female was to join him that this occurred.

would be good but I don't ever see Hermione joining any of them as goblin slaves she is the poster child for muggleborns.


i could see it as harry and one of the slytherin girls
Actually, I could see it if Hermione started feeling guilt over Rose/Harry taking the responsibility for the deaths due to the dragon she, Hermione, released; particularly if other events soured her on the wizarding world (covertly-given love potions and/or an overly insistent and overbearing Ron - especially if she finds out how few rights she'll have if she marries a pureblood).  I've had a few thoughts on how that might play out.  But you are correct in that I can see those as more likely with Rose/Harry and the daughter(s) of Death Eaters who end up as slaves to satisfy the blood debt accumulated by the marked member(s) of their family.

what i mean is that kingsley will be using Hermione as a literal  poster child for the new Wizarding world and her relationship with Ron will be used to show that muggleborns and purebloods can get along.

Hermione can do more good for the wizarding world free. the whole point of harry/fem harry becoming golbin slave was to stop a war.

Hermiones importance will probably go to her head.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 15, 2016, 11:19:48 PM
Yeah, I could see Kingsley doing that and using that argument to persuade Hermione to stay with Ron; not sure it would work, though.  if the laws were as in Bomin356's The Fall of the House of Potter, I could see Hermione definitely breaking up with Ron (again, not sure I'd go this route, but it is an option).  Again, I could see Hermione definitely feeling some guilt about Rose/Harry taking the responsibility and punishment for something Hermione was a major contributor to; what that guilt might impel her to do is another question.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 16, 2016, 10:44:49 PM
Question, as I don't remember from Deathly Hallows, if the goblins were to interrogate Rose/Harry concerning their scars and got the tale of the basilisk from Second Year, how much of it would be left for them to salvage?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 16, 2016, 10:53:52 PM
I've seen everything from"It doesn't decay at all" to "it decays because being dead, it lost the magic sustaining its body".

An idea?

The basilisk decays normally, that is to say all of flesh is rotten/gone by the time Acacia defeats Voldemort.

When the Goblins return to collect it, the only parts of it worth salvaging are its bones.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 17, 2016, 08:59:00 AM
http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600021065

Staring two of my to five favorite dbz character eighteen and Videl
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 17, 2016, 09:48:44 AM
I've seen everything from"It doesn't decay at all" to "it decays because being dead, it lost the magic sustaining its body".

An idea?

The basilisk decays normally, that is to say all of flesh is rotten/gone by the time Acacia defeats Voldemort.

When the Goblins return to collect it, the only parts of it worth salvaging are its bones.
Given that basilisks have magically resistant skins (I'm tempted to go with the more resistant than dragon skin trope), I'm strongly thinking of having just the skin, and shed skins, and bones be the only salvageable parts (got ideas for the skin(s), possibly even portions held for Rose/Harry when they leave Gringotts (not much but enough for some "goodies" instead of the usual leather)).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 17, 2016, 05:32:12 PM
Interesting thought:  Rose/Harry generalizes "Three Laws for Gobin Slaves" that are similar/parallel to Asmov's "Three Laws of Robotics", how would the goblins react to that?

These would be something similar to:
1) A slave may not injure a goblin or, through inaction, allow a goblin to come to harm.
2) A slave must obey orders given it by goblins except where such orders would conflict with the First Law.
3)A slave must protect its own existence as long as such protection does not conflict with the First or Second Law.

I could see something like this coming to light as a consequence of the discussion on T1p2's thread about Acacia being set up by the Hook clan with a cave in and breaking her order to protect young goblins who would have otherwise been crushed - and then being punished for disobeying orders.

I'm thinking that, introduced at the right time, such could definitely make the goblins reassess their opinions of this slave.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:31:28 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/259913/Special-Treat
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:31:57 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/252131/January-Stream-Sale-Digi-rotica-Zoey
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:32:13 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/243589/Holly-Jolly-Stream-Sale-Property-of-Ashecroft
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:32:30 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/243422/Holly-Jolly-Stream-Sale-Mistys-Ponyta-Ride
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:36:21 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/294923/Fancy-Chandelier

a repost
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:38:39 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/307241/The-Chariot
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 07:43:49 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/326106/Feature-Item-May-Auction-Begin

How Rose/Harry should be auctioned
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:35:56 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/259913/Special-Treat
I could see something like that happening to Rose and/or Harry.  Looks like fun for the goblin.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:39:05 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/252131/January-Stream-Sale-Digi-rotica-Zoey
Rose, just before things get *real* "interesting".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:41:38 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/243589/Holly-Jolly-Stream-Sale-Property-of-Ashecroft
That could work for either Rose or Harry, though Harry would have his face smeared with the juices of goblin females (have to wonder if he would be loaned to females of other sapient species while he's indentured to Gringotts?).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 08:43:59 AM
I don't recall if you ever described Rose's appearance?

Redhead? Black hair?

Green eyes, surely?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:44:33 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/243422/Holly-Jolly-Stream-Sale-Mistys-Ponyta-Ride
That has possibilities for both Rose and Harry (albeit with different stimulation for Harry).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:45:51 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/294923/Fancy-Chandelier

a repost
No matter, I could see Harry or Rose in such a situation (Rose with either male or female goblins; perhaps even both).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:47:13 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/326106/Feature-Item-May-Auction-Begin

How Rose/Harry should be auctioned
Oh, definitely, and both would be posed so that their brands in intimate locations would be fully displayed.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 08:54:17 AM
I don't recall if you ever described Rose's appearance?

Redhead? Black hair?

Green eyes, surely?
Mahogany hair (essentially dark red, Lily's red blended with James' black) and green eyes.  I'll discuss the rest later in my story (likely when she disrobes for her surrender); though the purifying/cleansing/strengthening process is going to change some aspects of her physical appearance such as height, weight, bust size; for Harry this process will change height, weight, and "endowment".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 18, 2016, 09:39:13 AM
I don't recall if you ever described Rose's appearance?

Redhead? Black hair?

Green eyes, surely?
Mahogany hair (essentially dark red, Lily's red blended with James' black) and green eyes.  I'll discuss the rest later in my story (likely when she disrobes for her surrender); though the purifying/cleansing/strengthening process is going to change some aspects of her physical appearance such as height, weight, bust size; for Harry this process will change height, weight, and "endowment".

Ooooh, classic redhead! Me likely even more!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 18, 2016, 07:00:44 PM
Okay, next chapter of these is posted to both.  A bit talky but necessary to set the scene for the future.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 20, 2016, 12:58:46 PM
I'm working on chapter three and I find I will be giving a description of Rose/Harry before they go through the purifying/cleansing/strengthening process as well as one for after (a chapter or so later).  Too, they are going to have some attitudes and behaviors that will pleasantly surprise the goblins; neither Rose nor Harry will share some attitudes that are common among "wand-wavers".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 22, 2016, 11:09:52 PM
I'm also building on the foundation set in the last chapter to better prepare Rose/Harry for the three years of slavery; they will go in knowing that there will be folk awaiting them when they come out; events over the course of the three years may add to those awaiting them.

Too, I'm thinking that the purification/cleansing/strengthening process is also going to turn up a few things that, in the name of Gringotts' security, are going to resuit in at least the purification/cleansing ritual being offered at cost to the three trusted advisors.  I'm also considering some other things that will change some aspects of how the goblins view Rose/Harry (captured warrior vs. captured wand-waver with the warrior getting more respect); it won't effect the major aspects of treatment, but it will affect how Rose/Harry gets moved about.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 23, 2016, 08:49:10 AM
https://backsexy.com/images/OIP-M7a91695cd1543b1781eadc20811c75adH0.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 23, 2016, 08:50:12 AM
http://67.media.tumblr.com/8f81aefab15f2c42c307acf7d9d4530e/tumblr_nrvz93iZkK1urv7ulo1_500.gif
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 23, 2016, 06:25:07 PM
Yes, I can see both of those happening to Harry at least once and something similar happening to Rose (she might even get both males and females with strapons).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 23, 2016, 08:13:48 PM
http://i.smutty.com/media_smutty_2/h/o/t/a/b/hotattraction21-9gpno-89c146.jpg

I could definitely see something like this, with a strapon more the size of a large male goblin, being done to Harry, or to Rose with a vibe or dildo in the "unused" hole.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 23, 2016, 08:20:11 PM
http://i.smutty.com/media_smutty_2/p/o/r/n/b/porntrawler-zgabn-0f8e0d.jpg

Gagged Rose in a body harness.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on September 24, 2016, 01:57:37 AM
If rose is going to have goblin children like acradia's story then your show look at this game called violated heroine, it can give you some ideas about what to put in your story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 24, 2016, 06:36:12 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/456343/Reign-Restrain
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 24, 2016, 10:56:42 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/My_Pet_Tentacle_Monster/456343/Reign-Restrain
I could see that for before a formal goblin function; though Rose/Harry would have some "adornments" not seen here ;) (Rose has her piercings, Harry will have piercings on his nipples and other items applied to his 'block and tackle').
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 08:28:17 AM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 25, 2016, 08:35:52 AM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.

I would not recognise it by the way what do you think of my last thoughts in the other forum for t1p2s disscution

Especially about the part were the goblins should have put her threw the cleaning/healing rituals before haveing her sign the contract

Because she was not of sound mind body and soul when she signed the contract and swore the vow

Which puts the contract in a sort of leagal and magical limbo
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 10:41:17 AM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.

I would not recognise it by the way what do you think of my last thoughts in the other forum for t1p2s disscution

Especially about the part were the goblins should have put her threw the cleaning/healing rituals before haveing her sign the contract

Because she was not of sound mind body and soul when she signed the contract and swore the vow

Which puts the contract in a sort of leagal and magical limbo
I've not yet read that chapter (bit under the weather this morning, waiting until I feel better).

As for the name I mentioned, if I use it, I'll state where it's from in the author's notes.  It's from a long-running series of spy/action/adventure novels that came out from the late-1950's into the 1990's; a few of which were made into mediocre movies with a "Big Name Star".

I'm going to have a rather different Rose/Harry going into Gringotts, one fully sound in mind and doing what must be done (there's a bit of discussion about that in my chapter 3.  Then again, it will come out that my main character in either story was forged in a very hot fire and is a rather stronger person; there will be no begging for mercy on this one's part.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 25, 2016, 10:54:17 AM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.

I would not recognise it by the way what do you think of my last thoughts in the other forum for t1p2s disscution

Especially about the part were the goblins should have put her threw the cleaning/healing rituals before haveing her sign the contract

Because she was not of sound mind body and soul when she signed the contract and swore the vow

Which puts the contract in a sort of leagal and magical limbo
I've not yet read that chapter (bit under the weather this morning, waiting until I feel better).

As for the name I mentioned, if I use it, I'll state where it's from in the author's notes.  It's from a long-running series of spy/action/adventure novels that came out from the late-1950's into the 1990's; a few of which were made into mediocre movies with a "Big Name Star".

I'm going to have a rather different Rose/Harry going into Gringotts, one fully sound in mind and doing what must be done (there's a bit of discussion about that in my chapter 3.  Then again, it will come out that my main character in either story was forged in a very hot fire and is a rather stronger person; there will be no begging for mercy on this one's part.

I see them all as being like Sakura from fate stay night if you get what I mean

I also see the goblins takeing the not begging as a challenge to see who can be  the one that can break her

I think that there are some thing that the characters from all three stories would rather die than do so the goblins will probably give them a safe word that they are ordered to us Instead of haveing them kill them self from fighting the vow

After all as I said in the other thread I agree with canon dumbledore there are worse things than death

And as character that has just recently tried to kill themselfs her limit before she reaches a point were she decidedly death is better is proberly quiet low
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 11:18:56 AM
Actually, the path I have in mind will have them wanting to use, abuse and enjoy, to the maximum, Rose/Harry but not break her/him (it's a distinction among different types of slaves and Rose/Harry will have earned it by actions and attitudes).  I'm also thinking that the Hook clan may be in difficulty because Griphook's first betrayal, that of Gringotts' security, lead to the death of goblins and this is not being placed solely on Rose/Harry; it could make them further enraged and desirous of permanently ending her/him despite the contract.

Oh, and Rose/Harry will publically state the reasons for not begging for mercy and it will impress the goblins enough to be the final step to being given the distinction, as a slave, that I mentioned earlier.  As I've said before, I rather like the concept of the goblins being a blend of Klingon and Ferengi.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 25, 2016, 11:40:42 AM
Actually, the path I have in mind will have them wanting to use, abuse and enjoy, to the maximum, Rose/Harry but not break her/him (it's a distinction among different types of slaves and Rose/Harry will have earned it by actions and attitudes).  I'm also thinking that the Hook clan may be in difficulty because Griphook's first betrayal, that of Gringotts' security, lead to the death of goblins and this is not being placed solely on Rose/Harry; it could make them further enraged and desirous of permanently ending her/him despite the contract.

I agree on them not wanting to permanently break her

I actually like the idea of the time room from t1p2s story but instead of useing it as a training room they use it as an aftercare room were she goes in there with other goblin slaves to recover so even if they do something that would take years for her to recover from emotional they send her to the aftercare room and she is fixed the next day.

So the next goblin clan can have there go

I also don't see the goblin wanting her trained. I see them as wanting to be able to train her themselfs and also wanting to be able to punish her for getting stuff wrong.

I can see a sense were she does everything wright and then she still gets punished as she cries and asks them why they simply answer because they can.


I see all physical damage being healed by ritual

And all non-physical damage being allowed to heal in the aftercare room

So that each clan gets there go

I see her first and last clan being the most sought after

The first becaus she will be a newbie and "everyone" likes picking on the newbie
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 02:44:18 PM
I can see that training that gives the human slave a better understanding of goblin physiology and responses would be most useful.  Rose/Harry's upbringing with the abusive perverts called the Dursleys is going to reduce the amount of training required, but the practical training will still be needed (that it further breaks down inhibitions is a further good point to the goblins).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 03:28:32 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2797566

I could see Rose or T1p2's Acacia in this one.  With a few alterations, I could see Harry in something similar.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 03:31:02 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3289224

And this one looks like it could particularly painful for male or female; imagine a guy like this with a parachute ball stretcher, a weight hanging off the strap on each side of the wooden horse, pulling his balls down on that sharp edge.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 25, 2016, 07:50:51 PM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.

Who?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 08:10:47 PM
Odd thought came to me as I was writing.  If later on I was to introduce the Lead Unspeakable for the "Active Measures" section as Macgillicudy Borden, how many people would recognize the name and where it came from - and why it would be so appropriate?  How he would be introduced is any open question, but it might well be post-Gringotts.

Who?
*laughs* I think that answers that question.  Macgillicudy "Mac" Borden was the head of "Section W" (doubt that was its real name, but that's the name the mob used, with respect) in Donald Hamilton's "Matt Helm" books,  Mr. Helm was one of his main agents, code-named "Eric".  The books are far better than the mediocre, at best, movies made from them and starring Dean Martin.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 08:34:10 PM
Going to make an author recommendation, here.  White Angel of Auralon on FFN.  He writes good stuff, I don't think English is his first language, but it's still good reading and ingenious concepts.  Gabriel, WBWL story is a delight to read with some very nice touches to it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 09:16:15 PM
I'm interested in feedback here.  What do  y'all think of my response to the review from Lerianis of HP-STGD?  I tried to be polite and reasonable, but I'm writing my stories based on certain premises and you remove those, as he seems to want, and the story vastly alters.  I don't consider the premises to be that unreasonable, my take on the goblins is a proud,  honorable, warrior race forced to become excellent, and ruthless, business types (as I've said, a mix of Klingon and Ferengi) and this would be in keeping.  Rose/Harry will have challenging times, very interesting times, and painful times but will survive and thrive.  The one who walks out of Gringotts at the end will be more mature and have far better self-understanding; very likely, they will also be a switch, enjoying both sides of BDSM.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 25, 2016, 09:49:13 PM
I'm interested in feedback here.  What do  y'all think of my response to the review from Lerianis of HP-STGD?  I tried to be polite and reasonable, but I'm writing my stories based on certain premises and you remove those, as he seems to want, and the story vastly alters.  I don't consider the premises to be that unreasonable, my take on the goblins is a proud,  honorable, warrior race forced to become excellent, and ruthless, business types (as I've said, a mix of Klingon and Ferengi) and this would be in keeping.  Rose/Harry will have challenging times, very interesting times, and painful times but will survive and thrive.  The one who walks out of Gringotts at the end will be more mature and have far better self-understanding; very likely, they will also be a switch, enjoying both sides of BDSM.

Quote from: Lerianis

I am sorry but the whole premise of this story is bunk in the extreme.

Allow me to count off the ways:
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1. The goblins are trying to blame Harry for deaths of innocent done while trying to retrieve a very very forbidden object from Gringotts that they should not have had in Gringotts in the first place.

Did the goblins know that they had the horcrux in the first place?

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2. There is blame to go around: On Harry, on Hermione, on the Ministry, on Dumbledore (who as the "Chief of the Wizengamot" had to have known that Gringotts was legally required to hand over any Horcruxes), on the Ministry, etc.
Dumbledore, for all of his age and knowledge, missed or overlooked a lot of things. Why blame the Ministry of Magic?

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3. Yes, some 'innocent' goblins were killed. However innocents are always killed by both sides in wartime. It is a fact of life and a fact of the matter that I personally dislike but in some cases I have to accept. This is one of those cases.

Fair point but its the principle of things and really why complain? There would be less possible plot ideas for fanfics available.

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4. I cannot believe that Gringotts, as the Wizarding Secure Storage capital of the world, would not have wards that would alert them if certain classes of forbidden dark objects were brought into it. Therefore, they were not 'unknowingly' storing these things but knowingly storing them.

Maybe Gringotts did have something similar at some point in history and the ward/alarm was turned off because it was like a smoke alarm with a low battery charge( i.e. ringing/alarming constantly)?

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Those 4 points above alone make the theme of this story totally inconcievably impossible to me and I have five or six more if I wanted to continue to 'pick a bone with'.

Basically, Gringotts should just bare their teeth and take the losses, including the losses of lives, with a smile and learn from their mistakes.

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Cateagle's Response:
My first instinct was to just say "DL:DR" but I decided a bit politer response was justified.  I agree that there's enough blame to go around, but my reading of the goblin culture is that they are not about to accept any, save for Griphook (which angers his clan considerably).  I agree with your item 3, but, again, my readin gof goblin culture is that they are warriors and make a concerted effort to avoid injuring innocents (It's not honorable!) but the escape did not take innocents into consideration, so they have grounds to be unhappy.  As to four, I expect that Gringoots does have fairly effective surveillance and sensor woards in place, but I would expect that the item would not be detecatable once the vault was closed and if the item was brought into Gringotts in a suitably shielding container (I'm thinking a box of cold iron would work), it would only be detectable in that short interval between the box being opened and the vault-holder shutting the vault.  My own favorite method of dealing with "soul anchors" is the one showing up in Gabriel by White Angel of Auralon on FFN (t's a WBWL story with no pairing).

I agree with you on what Gringotts should do, if they were human, but they aren't and their culture views things differently (think pre-Opening Japan).

As to the story being inconceivable and impossible, I'm working from what JKR left us and the challenge set up by Slyfer 101; HP-STGD responds to it with a twist while RP-STGD responds to it more directly.

I do not wish to engage in a discussion here, but thanks for reading what you have and for your feedback.  I hope you find other stories more to your taste.

Its your fanfic, Cateagle, write it how you want to please yourself. If its something that others enjoy, well, you've gotten a bonus!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 25, 2016, 10:09:11 PM
Oh, I intend to write it my way and there will be some SF references thrown in among everything else.  Chapter 3 is coming along nicely and you will get physical descriptions of Rose and Harry as they enter Gringotts (there will be changes after the Purification/Cleansing/Strengthening rituals and treatments - both will need new wardrobes when they leave Gringotts and will have some different tastes).  I will say that King Kilgrave will be impressed by some answers he gets and Daggerok will find himself more conflicted as he gets to know the new slave better, his preconceived notions taking a beating.

I will also say that there will be some interesting fallout from the Purification/Cleansing/Strengthening rituals and treatment that will have effects outside of Gringotts.  That their, Gringotts', security combined with the contract will force the goblins to offer outsiders something at cost is going to bother some of them.  What comes to light in the aftermath of *that* is really going to cause ripples outside Gringotts.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 25, 2016, 10:56:50 PM
I'm interested in feedback here.  What do  y'all think of my response to the review from Lerianis of HP-STGD?  I tried to be polite and reasonable, but I'm writing my stories based on certain premises and you remove those, as he seems to want, and the story vastly alters.  I don't consider the premises to be that unreasonable, my take on the goblins is a proud,  honorable, warrior race forced to become excellent, and ruthless, business types (as I've said, a mix of Klingon and Ferengi) and this would be in keeping.  Rose/Harry will have challenging times, very interesting times, and painful times but will survive and thrive.  The one who walks out of Gringotts at the end will be more mature and have far better self-understanding; very likely, they will also be a switch, enjoying both sides of BDSM.

I think that Lerianis needs to give themselves an uppercut(so just ignore them) but you are politer than me. I think you shut them  down pretty nicely

The golbins blackmailed harry/acacia/rose into the contract with the threat of another golbin war

and in there emotional vulnerably state they feel for it

they also guilt tripped them pretty hard
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2016, 07:53:18 AM
Yeah, I'm sure tiredness and guilt-tripping played a part, but Rose/Harry also saw it as a threat that had to be honored.  This will be something of a change for Rose/Harry and different experiences, though I'm thinking that there will be more happening than expected (given that Rose/Harry seems to be 'fate's chew toy', that's almost a given), though I intend to have some of the happenings truly surprise the goblins - not a deadly surprise but very definitely a surprise.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 09:33:49 AM
I am still hopeing for the clit leash that she has to drag along behinde her unless a goblin picks it up
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 11:19:21 AM
I wonder if there will be any goblins that have a moral obligation to the fact that they are takeing there anger at wizards as a whole on a emotional  vulnerable  teenager.

On some level I think the hood is also for the goblins. With it on she becomes a faceless proxy that they can channel all there anger at wizards in general into.

I think the first goblins that will start empathising with her will be the ones that have to deal with her when she has the hood off

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 11:22:13 AM
I wonder what the goblins will do when they realise that she has PTSD


And what ever other mental problems she has from being a child soldier


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2016, 12:13:56 PM
I am still hopeing for the clit leash that she has to drag along behinde her unless a goblin picks it up
Yes, Rose will have that.  Harry will have something similar attached to a suitably sensitive portion of his anatomy.  Both will likely pick these up in chapter 4 or 5.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 12:30:38 PM
One of the reasons she might accept what the goblins are doing to her is survivors guilty. She accepts what the goblins are going as a sort of self induced punishment to punish her self for livening when so many other people died so she could live.

Not to mention all the people who died because she didn't finish the war fast enough (at least in her mind)


That could be one of the reasons she has not killed herself even though she is suicidal she is scared to face all the people that will blame her for there deaths(in her mind again)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2016, 01:45:44 PM
One of the reasons she might accept what the goblins are doing to her is survivors guilty. She accepts what the goblins are going as a sort of self induced punishment to punish her self for livening when so many other people died so she could live.

Not to mention all the people who died because she didn't finish the war fast enough (at least in her mind)


That could be one of the reasons she has not killed herself even though she is suicidal she is scared to face all the people that will blame her for there deaths(in her mind again)
I don't necessarily see Rose/Harry as suicidal; depressed and tired, yes, suicidal, no.  I'm tempted to provide some help in coming to terms with everything as part of the training sessions, goblin mores and philosophy might just be what's needed here.  That the goblins are going to see Rose/Harry as more than a "captured wand-waver" will also help here.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 02:06:48 PM
One of the reasons she might accept what the goblins are doing to her is survivors guilty. She accepts what the goblins are going as a sort of self induced punishment to punish her self for livening when so many other people died so she could live.

Not to mention all the people who died because she didn't finish the war fast enough (at least in her mind)


That could be one of the reasons she has not killed herself even though she is suicidal she is scared to face all the people that will blame her for there deaths(in her mind again)
I don't necessarily see Rose/Harry as suicidal; depressed and tired, yes, suicidal, no.  I'm tempted to provide some help in coming to terms with everything as part of the training sessions, goblin mores and philosophy might just be what's needed here.  That the goblins are going to see Rose/Harry as more than a "captured wand-waver" will also help here.

suicidal Might not be the right word I see acacia/rose as being people of low self worth they don't really put am value in there own life . I think at least part of the problem is that she was raised to die.

But I do agree that she is currently not actively seeking her death.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 02:30:05 PM
I can see the goblins working out something is wrong when she just lies there like a broken doll as they do stuff to her not fighting back.

A bit like Sakura in the worm pit on fate stay night

I can see a seen were A goblin is literally beating the crap out of her trying to get some sort of reaction. Eventually in frustration ordering her to say something the goblin has to get down on one knee to hear what she is trying to say because her ribs are broken from the beating and all she is saying/whispers over and over again is the word sorry. Mabye have the other goblins pull the one that is beating her off her and have a different goblin hear her whispering sorry over and over again


Or a goblin asking the question what the hell is wrong with you and have her start listening all the thing that she sees wrong with herself
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2016, 09:34:11 PM
In my stories, when the goblins find out what Rose/Harry has been through, without any support or help from Dumbledore, they are incensed and also impressed with what has been accomplished.  As a result, they classify her as "Captured Warrior" and see that she does get counseling as part of her training.  This is not altruism on their part, but it is a matter of honor to them and she's meeting their standards and they must needs respond appropriately.  I'll be covering this in more detail when I get there.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 10:57:58 PM
In my stories, when the goblins find out what Rose/Harry has been through, without any support or help from Dumbledore, they are incensed and also impressed with what has been accomplished.  As a result, they classify her as "Captured Warrior" and see that she does get counseling as part of her training.  This is not altruism on their part, but it is a matter of honor to them and she's meeting their standards and they must needs respond appropriately.  I'll be covering this in more detail when I get there.

I get what you mean although I do think that "captured warrior" might not be the best name for it. because if the goblins and wizards every went to war they would parade her broken body before the wizarding world to demoralise the wizards world

I think that the Gobins will probably  have an even lower opinion of wizards in general after finding out that they sent an self/untrained child to die instead of fighting the war against Voldemort themselves. after all the war with voldemort has been going for a long time before the prophecy was given
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2016, 11:07:25 PM
Ah, that should be "Captured goblin warrior", the implication being that they recognize Rose/Harry as a warrior after their own ethos (explaining how that developed in Rose/Harry will be fun- at least part of it will be an extreme reaction to the abusive perverts Dumbledore left Rose/Harry with and another part will be reading material in the public library).  They will also recognize that much of the untrained warrior being sent into the thick of things was Dumbledore's doing; it's probably a good thing he doesn't have descendants, they would have some real problems.  Since Rose/Harry did inherit, that eliminates one problem area for all concerned as the name of Dumbledore will be lower than composted dragon dung with the goblins (wouldn't be surprised to see his tomb suffer a mischief along the way; of course deniability would be complete).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 26, 2016, 11:31:44 PM
I think the goblins are going to be in for a nasty surprised they think they are getting a trained warrior as there prisoner but what they are really getting is as Snape put It a child raised like a pig for slaughter.

Who was only given the bare minimum it needed to survive  to the point were it was suppose to die

all round i think the golbins will fell a bit cheated

the question then goes to how long will they take the frustration and disappointment  out of the all ready thoroughly used punching bag that is acacia/rose
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 27, 2016, 01:11:55 AM
I think the goblins are going to be in for a nasty surprised they think they are getting a trained warrior as there prisoner but what they are really getting is as Snape put It a child raised like a pig for slaughter.

Who was only given the bare minimum it needed to survive  to the point were it was suppose to die

all round i think the golbins will fell a bit cheated

the question then goes to how long will they take the frustration and disappointment  out of the all ready thoroughly used punching bag that is acacia/rose

TO clarifie on why I thin the goblins will feel cheated.

They think they are getting dumbledore successor as there slave what they are real getting is a pawn that has all ready served it's purpose
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 27, 2016, 07:52:34 AM
My take is that they recognize the warrior spirit, not necessarily the training, and that the walk into the forest to meet Tom was taken out of a sense of duty, not just Dumbledore's manipulations. Duty to Rose/Harry's friends to do whatever was necessary to stop Tom, not duty to the wizarding world. 

Rose/Harry determined early on that being as unlike the Dursleys as possible was the correct path of behavior and various events injected concepts of duty and honor into her/his worldview.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 27, 2016, 09:31:56 AM
My take is that they recognize the warrior spirit, not necessarily the training, and that the walk into the forest to meet Tom was taken out of a sense of duty, not just Dumbledore's manipulations.

So the goblins will have a grudging respect rose/Harry because she is somewhat  competent in spite of dumbledore

For acacia I think it will be a bit different. I don't think the goblins will have/develope much  of any respect for her but it will depend of what t1p2 wants to do

I think that the goblins will proberly develope some lvl of sympathy/pity for acacia
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 27, 2016, 12:55:16 PM
Not just because Rose/Harry is somewhat competent in spite of Dumbledore, but because Rose/Harry is demonstrating the honor and integrity they respect (forthright, doesn't make excuses, and accepts responsibility) and expect of a warrior.  I think that scene in chapter 2 in King Kilgrave's office shows that in Daggerok's responses.  There will be more such as the story develops.

I don't know where T1p2 is taking his story, but I think that Acacia may have a more difficult time than Rose.  Still, I can agree that the goblins may develop some level of sympathy for her.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 05:35:00 AM
I wounder if a particularly vindicative goblin clan will make her fear the Clankers
Because she freed a dragon
And if they do how would they do it

http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Clankers
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 06:28:23 AM
I wounder if a particularly vindicative goblin clan will make her fear the Clankers
Because she freed a dragon
And if they do how would they do it

http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Clankers

Real waterboarding her to the sound of the Clankers is one of the tamer ideas I had to make her fear them

Making it so that when she is in the forge there is a sensory charm that makes it so ever time a hammer hit a piece of hot metal it feels like her clit was between the hammer and metal seems more a real vindicative goblin clans style

Either way it would not supposed to be erotic. It would be more a to show how much that goblin clan hates her
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 28, 2016, 12:20:15 PM
I wounder if a particularly vindicative goblin clan will make her fear the Clankers
Because she freed a dragon
And if they do how would they do it

http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Clankers

Real waterboarding her to the sound of the Clankers is one of the tamer ideas I had to make her fear them

Making it so that when she is in the forge there is a sensory charm that makes it so ever time a hammer hit a piece of hot metal it feels like her clit was between the hammer and metal seems more a real vindicative goblin clans style

Either way it would not supposed to be erotic. It would be more a to show how much that goblin clan hates her
For a guy, either his cockhead and/or his balls between the hammer and metal.  I could see the Hook clan doing this to Rose/Harry and requiring a lot of slave services in their forge.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 07:15:07 PM
I wounder if a particularly vindicative goblin clan will make her fear the Clankers
Because she freed a dragon
And if they do how would they do it

http://harrypotter.wikia.com/wiki/Clankers

Real waterboarding her to the sound of the Clankers is one of the tamer ideas I had to make her fear them

Making it so that when she is in the forge there is a sensory charm that makes it so ever time a hammer hit a piece of hot metal it feels like her clit was between the hammer and metal seems more a real vindicative goblin clans style

Either way it would not supposed to be erotic. It would be more a to show how much that goblin clan hates her
For a guy, either his cockhead and/or his balls between the hammer and metal.  I could see the Hook clan doing this to Rose/Harry and requiring a lot of slave services in their forge.

The effect that they would be trying to achieve is that when they hear the Clankers there body start acting like its drowning if they used water boarding.

Something similar To this happens in one of slyfer101 Naruto story but instead of the Clankers a type of music makes her body start acting like its drawing when she hears it
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 28, 2016, 08:16:09 PM
My reference was to the sensory charm for use in the forge.  I could see the waterboarding with clankers to be a very effective psychological conditioning, very similar to how they condition the dragons to them.  I'm not sure I'll take that up in my story, but the other forge sensory charm sounds delightfully wicked.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 08:21:54 PM
My reference was to the sensory charm for use in the forge.  I could see the waterboarding with clankers to be a very effective psychological conditioning, very similar to how they condition the dragons to them.  I'm not sure I'll take that up in my story, but the other forge sensory charm sounds delightfully wicked.

Haveing her Asosiate the forge sensory charm with the Clankers works to.

I sort of don't care what method they use as long as they use the Clankers as the trigger.

To use a slyfer101 quote"Irony can be the best torture of all"
And useing the Clankers against her is most definitely ironic
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 28, 2016, 08:57:51 PM
Definitely ironic and it would make visiting the Potter vault most difficult for Rose/Harry.  A fitting revenge for the Hook clan to take.  I may well use it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 09:31:27 PM
Definitely ironic and it would make visiting the Potter vault most difficult for Rose/Harry.  A fitting revenge for the Hook clan to take.  I may well use it.

I can see it being used in a assassination attempt. maybe lock Rose/Acacia in a room with fleur or some of the other goblin slaves and have the hook clan leave the Clankers playing outside of the room.so Acacia is drowning and the other girl realise that the only way they  can get her to breather nornaly is by kissing her . like how in a movie if some one is trapped underwater  another character transfers the air from there mouth to the trapped persons. If you get what I mean
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 28, 2016, 10:16:58 PM
Don't know that I'll necessarily go that route, but I do have ideas for the Hook clan to attempt to assassinate/"accidentally kill" Rose/Harry but I intend for it to backfire big time.  Even as Rose/Harry is entering Gringotts' servitude, there are some questioning why, since Rose/Harry freely admitted to ignorance, Griphook did not provide enlightenment on how the goblins regarding soul-anchors; upper levels are already suspicious that Griphook was intending from the git-go to obtain the sword (this won't necessarily come out in the story, at least not until they try their "big play" and it backfires spectacularly (hard to hide evidence from good, knowledgeable, and experienced forensic investigators).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 11:39:29 PM
Don't know that I'll necessarily go that route, but I do have ideas for the Hook clan to attempt to assassinate/"accidentally kill" Rose/Harry but I intend for it to backfire big time.  Even as Rose/Harry is entering Gringotts' servitude, there are some questioning why, since Rose/Harry freely admitted to ignorance, Griphook did not provide enlightenment on how the goblins regarding soul-anchors; upper levels are already suspicious that Griphook was intending from the git-go to obtain the sword (this won't necessarily come out in the story, at least not until they try their "big play" and it backfires spectacularly (hard to hide evidence from good, knowledgeable, and experienced forensic investigators).

yeah I was just putting the idea out there. the kissing to breath around the clankers idea it interesting thought . It would make going to her vault after she leaves her servitude interesting. the goblins would properly give her a free dragon vault guard just to be assholes. after all i doubt the potter vault has a dragon guarding it that would be something you have to pay extra for.

then again the idea of forge sensory charm with the Clankers would be even nastier

I actual hope you go with  the forge sensory charm instead of the waterboard idea.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 28, 2016, 11:48:30 PM
If you go the forge sensory charm with the Clankers  route I could see the goblins charging money to have the clankers used while while they have there dick in her pussy.


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 29, 2016, 10:31:41 AM
If you go the forge sensory charm with the Clankers  route I could see the goblins charging money to have the clankers used while while they have there dick in her pussy.
That would work for Rose, for Harry I could see it being done while he was being ridden (either his cock or mouth) or pegged.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 29, 2016, 12:55:49 PM
If you go the forge sensory charm with the Clankers  route I could see the goblins charging money to have the clankers used while while they have there dick in her pussy.
That would work for Rose, for Harry I could see it being done while he was being ridden (either his cock or mouth) or pegged.

The goblin that used the Clankers during sex could be trying to for fill a rape fantasy. And the reason they use the Clankers is because his dick is to small to get any type of reaction from her.

The fact that she is as broken as Sakura from fate stay night in the worm pit also probably contributes
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 29, 2016, 10:15:21 PM
Well, I see Rose/Harry as being more in the tradition of f&sf heroes and heroines that I've read for decades; like a true Damascus steel blade, strong and holding a very sharp edge yet very flexible and capable of bending considerably without breaking.  Examples, for me, would be, just using female characters, Jirel of Joiry, Belit of the Black Coast (didn't even let death stop her), Podkayne of Mars, up to Honor Harrington.

I could see the clankers being used by an under-endowed goblin for a rape fantasy to get that reaction, but I can't see Rose/Harry being broken in my conception.  There will be times that will come close to breaking Rose/Harry but won't.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 29, 2016, 10:25:53 PM
Well, I see Rose/Harry as being more in the tradition of f&sf heroes and heroines that I've read for decades; like a true Damascus steel blade, strong and holding a very sharp edge yet very flexible and capable of bending considerably without breaking.  Examples, for me, would be, just using female characters, Jirel of Joiry, Belit of the Black Coast (didn't even let death stop her), Podkayne of Mars, up to Honor Harrington.

I could see the clankers being used by an under-endowed goblin for a rape fantasy to get that reaction, but I can't see Rose/Harry being broken in my conception.  There will be times that will come close to breaking Rose/Harry but won't.

I think broken is the wrong word to use to describe  Sakura from fate stay night

Although castigated and humiliated on a daily basis, Sakura maintained her bearings with great stoicism.

which is how i see acacia/rose and harry becoming

putting up a front of being empty and emotionless shell resigned to her fate
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 29, 2016, 10:46:03 PM
Perhaps, though I will be working that more as I get into my stories.  My Rose/Harry will have been forged strong by what was endured before Hogwarts and what was endured in the summers between the Hogwarts years; there will also be guiding influences of the school librarian and the librarian at the Little Whinging Public Library.  A hint of this will show up in my chapter 3 when you hear described some of the physical damage done to Rose/Harry; there's still more to it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 30, 2016, 07:33:48 AM
Okay, I think I've got my chapter 3's ready to post.  If anyone wants to do a beta on them, PM me with your email address.

I now have someone doing a beta-read.  I hope to post on Sunday as my Rose story starts to diverge more from T1p2's Acacia story and the slave!Harry story moves with it.  The Rose and Harry stories will diverge much more with the next chapter and I hope to have the first secret Rose/Harry can not divulge (nothing major, but something goblins would just as soon the wizarding world as it is not know).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 01, 2016, 01:44:25 PM
I wan to thank rannorgana  for beta efforts on Chapter 3 for both stories, the text definitely reads better now and errors that my eyes missed multiple times were corrected.  He also found some peculiar phrasing I cleaned up.

My thanks to him, also, for agreeing to beta further chapters of my stories.  I'm still blocking out chapter 4 for both Rose and Harry, but both will find it challenging.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 01, 2016, 06:21:23 PM
when is the new chapter going to be posted
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 01, 2016, 09:55:38 PM
when is the new chapter going to be posted
It will be posted tomorrow for both stories.  I have the beta edits back and am doing a final review/cleanup (revising some awkward phrasing and doing some final "tweaking").  While it is similar to T1p2's third chapter, there's a lot that is different, too, and I reckon folks will enjoy these chapters.  The next chapter of each gets more challenging as the paths diverge yet run roughly parallel and there will be some surprises.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 02, 2016, 08:45:26 AM
This storys has an interesting take on goblins

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/7718942/20/Broken-Chains

To sum up the interesting part

1.goblin won the war and that is the reason they control the wizard economy. The goblins would have been happy to fight to the last so the wizard surrendered and gave the goblin what they wanted gold.

2.the idea they the names goblin give wizards are fake and they have a competition among goblins to see who can come up with the most outlandish
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 02, 2016, 05:42:48 PM
Yeah, Darth Marrs has some interesting takes on a lot of things.  I don't know that I'll be using either of these concepts, but the idea that the goblins actually won the last "rebellion" has turned up elsewhere and I might use that in my stories.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 02, 2016, 06:53:08 PM
And Chapter 3 of both stories is posted.  I hope it is enjoyed and I look forward to comments, criticisms, and suggestions.

Now on to chapter 4 where biological differences between Rose and Harry will make the stories diverge some, main events will parallel but exact details will not.

It is some chapters away, but the goblins have a very special birthday celebration planned, though it's going to yield some surprises for them, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 02, 2016, 09:00:48 PM
what tags,warnings or genre would you put on your stories?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 02, 2016, 09:20:44 PM
what tags,warnings or genre would you put on your stories?
I think what I have them listed as is pretty accurate, though the "Extreme Sexual Situations" will cover a lot and Rose/Harry will go through a lot.  I admit, there will be bits of my reading showing up here and there, with sources identified in the A/N.  I will be covering, later, how Rose/Harry came to be familiar with the works of Howard Pyle and Robert Heinlein.  Beyond that, I do have some events planned out and but not a fully worked out plot for the entire three years.  There will be some adventure, but I have no present plans for any romance,  Beyond that, I'm hope to have an enjoyable read out there and it will, of necessity, reflect some of my own attitudes and preferences.

Note:  If you have a more specific question, I'll be glad to answer it to the best of my ability.  Good feedback helps hone my work.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on October 03, 2016, 01:25:30 AM
Something for cateagle

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Aracne/458610/Kinktober-2-Linked-piercings
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 03, 2016, 06:31:25 AM
Something for cateagle

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Aracne/458610/Kinktober-2-Linked-piercings
Nice bit of kink there, could make for interesting times, especially if there was a matching link between his tongue ring and her clit ring.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 03, 2016, 10:29:00 AM
in T1p2 story it is said that acardia will be breeded(?), have goblin children is it going to be the same in your rose story? and father goblin children in the harry story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 03, 2016, 11:13:33 AM
in T1p2 story it is said that acardia will be breeded(?), have goblin children is it going to be the same in your rose story? and father goblin children in the harry story.
Some of Rose's eggs will be "harvested" for use in breeding goblin children but she won't carry any herself (something about human physiology not being suitable for carrying healthy goblin children through to birth).  Harry's seed will be used for goblin children, whether obtained by the normal, somewhat pleasurable, way or by "milking" him.  There are events coming which may see his seed spread a bit farther than one would expect, but I haven't decided if I want to go that way, though 'tis tempting.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 03, 2016, 12:13:00 PM
rose and harry should see other goblin slaves, they can be OC's or not .
like rose seeing multiple slave women pregnant (with goblin children or not)or men to reinforce what is going to happen to her.
(having trouble getting whats on my mind into words)

basically i'm saying make goblins having human/magical slaves a thing that still happens and that it isn't just special to rose and harry not that they aren't special being national hero's and having a contract that semi protects them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 03, 2016, 02:58:13 PM
I had figured to have other human slaves show up later (very tempted to have a captured Ludo Bagman slaving away shoveling dragon shit though the really hard work will be in the mines), after all, they do have a "Asset In-Processing" office so I have to assume it happens enough to make the office and facilities worth it.  I figure a lot of them will be magicals who fell too far behind on their debts to Gringotts,  The seed was planted back in chapter one for some of the Death Eaters and/or Death Eater spawn to become slaves, too, and some will be showing up later; I could even see Rose/Harry ending up as overseer to some with interesting implications of that authority.

I don't plan to have any female slaves pregnant with goblin children as that isn't viable (not sure if it's female humans not supplying everything a growing goblin fetus needs or if it's just that goblin fetuses are too active for human females to survive - rather leaning to the former, though, as it makes more biological sense).  Now, you may have female human slaves made pregnant by male human slaves and I'm not sure the status of the results of such pregnancies - sorely tempted to have them raised by goblins as a force equivalent to the Janissaries.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 04, 2016, 01:13:26 PM
I'm now getting into writing chapter 4 of both of these stories and one major difference between my stories and T1p2's story will be that Rose/Harry will be quite experienced when told to perform oral sex on a guard (female guard(s) in Harry's case, I male and I female in Rose's case).  The exact why will be explained later but Rose/Harry will let hints drop in answer to questions from the goblins.  I will be building on the Cleansing/Marking scene I posted on the thread for T1P2's story with extra fun and games.  it's going to get rather interesting and some additional properties of the collar will be demonstrated, to the actual relief of Rose/Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 05, 2016, 01:16:18 AM
another idea I had is for the goblins to replace all goblin slaves clit hoods with ones like Wormtails silver hand.


The reason I thought of that is slyfer101 latest story

If a female death eater were to use there clit hood as flesh of the servant in the ritual to give him a body would he give them a silver clit hood the same way he gave wormtail a silver hand and if he did what functions could he add to it?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 05, 2016, 06:37:34 AM
some function for the silver clit hood would be that it retract fully so she can fell every breeze across her clit

It would not let her touch her or any goblin slaves touch her clit if they try the clit hood would cover the clit and not let them touch it.(that include trying to rub it against things)

they could also control the temperature of the metal

one image I have in my mind is two goblin slave blowing air on each other clit trying to get each other to orgasm with the goblin guard watching in amusement.

I could also see  a goblin or fleur leaving her at the edge of orgasm only needing the lightest of touches to get her orgasm. and punishing her every time the silver clit hood is deployed because it mean she tried to touch her clit
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 05, 2016, 12:24:47 PM
Some interesting concepts, but nothing I'm currently looking to pursue in my story.  Still, I will keep these ideas in mind.  Rose will be getting some piercings and Harry will be getting some piercings and some other "adornments"; all intended to enhance and control sensations, particularly erotic/sensual ones as well as provide attachment for control chains and other things.

I should note that the marking as a Gringotts slave will occur during "Asset Processing" but will be exposed, most embarrassingly, to the Goblin Nation when King Kilgrave presents Rose/Harry and announces the auction.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 05, 2016, 10:06:10 PM
two types of training I could see the goblins putting her threw are

1.training her to only orgasm on command

2. faking an orgasm so well only a veela/part veela can tell the difference like fleur in the chapter linked bellow but only veela can tell the difference instead of just her master like in the story bellow
(http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/viewstory.php?sid=315&textsize=0&chapter=14)

for the orgasm on command training

step one: would involve two goblin slaves getting each other as close to orgasm as possible then the goblin slave would present there pussys to a goblin whowould whip her pussy with some sort of cane/strap or whip. if she orgasms she moves on to step two  if she doesn't orgasm she goes to find another goblin slave to repeat step one.

step two: a goblin whips her pussy while she holds back her orgasm. at any time they could order her to cum if she can cum on command  10 times in a row she moves on to step three if she fails that start the count to ten all over again

step three: the goblin give the slave no foreplay they just have to orgasm from the whipping the training continues till she will come on command just from whipping her pussy once

step four she learn to orgasm from a command alone

training is complete when the word cum/come alone is enough to trigger an orgasm

one  scene I could see after her training is she is kneeling at a goblin feet they need to go some were the goblin says "come slave" cause her to  orgasm she has to lick up her cum before quickly crawling to catch up to the goblin once she has licked u her cum.

if  the goblin was in a hurry he would use the command "follow" so she would follow without having to lick up her own cum.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 05, 2016, 10:08:38 PM
That may become part of her training, I've not decided yet.  She's going to have plenty of other training.  Now, the equivalent for Harry could get to be quite interesting.  For him, I could see Step 3 being a whipping/flogging of his cockhead alone.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 05, 2016, 10:16:08 PM
That may become part of her training, I've not decided yet.  She's going to have plenty of other training.  Now, the equivalent for Harry could get to be quite interesting.  For him, I could see Step 3 being a whipping/flogging of his cockhead alone.

as long as you give harry a female goblin slave to lick up the cum. him having to do it himself is not something i am interstate in reading.


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 05, 2016, 10:20:29 PM
That may become part of her training, I've not decided yet.  She's going to have plenty of other training.  Now, the equivalent for Harry could get to be quite interesting.  For him, I could see Step 3 being a whipping/flogging of his cockhead alone.

as long as you give harry a female goblin slave to lick up the cum. him having to do it himself is not something i am interstate in reading.
Hmm, that could be really mean, permanently assigning a Death Eater's daughter to that role, as well as any other way she might receive his cum.  Or be truly mean and assign a pair of Death Eater daughters to that role, as well as cleaning his cock afterwards.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 05, 2016, 10:26:44 PM
That may become part of her training, I've not decided yet.  She's going to have plenty of other training.  Now, the equivalent for Harry could get to be quite interesting.  For him, I could see Step 3 being a whipping/flogging of his cockhead alone.

as long as you give harry a female goblin slave to lick up the cum. him having to do it himself is not something i am interstate in reading.
Hmm, that could be really mean, permanently assigning a Death Eater's daughter to that role, as well as any other way she might receive his cum.

If its Malfoys daughter if you give him one in your story I could see a scene were the daughter is licking up harry cum with her father watching and the goblin makes the comment "that is the only source of protein she has had all week" whether he is messing with Malfoy senior or he is actually serious is up to you.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 05, 2016, 10:37:12 PM
*snicker* Oh, that's a temptation.  I'll have to think on that one a fair bit, but it is tempting.  Personally, I could see the goblins messing with Lucius' mind on that.

I don't know if I'll go the cum control route or not, but it's something I'll consider.  Both Rose and Harry will be getting considerable training between presentation and the auction.  I'm rather tempted to make it a sealed bid auction with the bids going directly to King Kilgrave's office without passing through any other hands to prevent tampering and to prior knowledge influencing a bid (espionage of one clan against another, though, is fully within the rules).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 06, 2016, 01:58:50 AM
One scene I images for male Harry is

that the purebloods girls complains about there food so Harry is dragged by his dick to each girls bowl And made to cum in it then the  girl are made to eat it. The goblin might decide to make it a meal time event for all female goblin slave. Or the girls might decide they like watching Harry inpain as he cums into there food so they keep makeing it happen

For rose/acacia I images a nutritional potion that allow them to live off cum.

The potion is from a story that has since been deleted



Another scene is a femal death eater daughter who has only been livening off Harry cum going "please sir can I have some more" after finishing sucking Harry dick
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 06, 2016, 02:27:20 AM
for female goblin slaves in the  male harry world  i would like them to be given two option to lose there virginity.

1.would be a auction  were it is sold to the highest bidder

2.would be in a colosseum  to harry potter were the goblins sell tickets  so goblins and guest can watch
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 06, 2016, 02:35:04 AM
for female goblin slaves in the  male harry world  i would like them to be given two option to lose there virginity.

1.would be a auction  were it is sold to the highest bidder

2.would be in a Colosseum  to harry potter were the goblins sell tickets  so goblins and guest can watch

for the Colosseum i could see the goblin putting on lots of potion induced acts;

 like giving a group of girl lust potion and then letting then lose on harry so they can revers gang bang harry maybe add fear and confusion charm targeted at harry so he will hide and run away till the girls catch him

or

giving a girl a de-ageing potion  and harry a lust potion and then have the show be about watching harry fight the lust potion so as not to hurt the girl


or a show with harry and a young death eater girl lock in with two potion  an ageing potion for the girl and a lust potion for harry but either both potion are used or neither. maybe also add a time limit in which harry has to take her virginity or one of the goblins get to do it

 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 06, 2016, 07:38:40 AM
Some interesting possibilities, I won't say "no" but I won't say 'yes", either.  I'm still working out a lot of the story in my head.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 06, 2016, 07:44:20 AM
Some interesting possibilities, I won't say "no" but I won't say 'yes", either.  I'm still working out a lot of the story in my head.

I just put ideas out there  for people to use

I think the main one to take from my last post is the idea of the girls getting the choice between there virginity being sold to the highest bidder or haveing Harry Potter take it Infront of thousands of goblins who have all brought tickets to watch
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 06, 2016, 01:12:47 PM
I can see that as quite a dilemma for the female slaves, particularly ones from prominent Death Eater families.

The idea of a coliseum for that does suggest another set of possibilities for both stories, wrestling between slaves, either two females or one male and one female, where the winner is allowed to do whatever they want sexually to the loser.

Too, the idea of a number of them being fed lust potions and being turned loose to gang-rape Harry/Rose has potential.

Lots of ideas, I'll have to see where my muse takes me.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 08, 2016, 04:18:04 AM
I hope the goblins give rose and other goblin slaves Buttplugs that they have to ask the goblins to take out like the ones in Harry Potter and the black sisters

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38304

Or the pussy plug like what cho Chang has
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 08, 2016, 11:57:57 AM
I hope the goblins give rose and other goblin slaves Buttplugs that they have to ask the goblins to take out like the ones in Harry Potter and the black sisters

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38304

Or the pussy plug like what cho Chang has
Well, when their ass and/or pussy are not in use, such as when they are resting by themselves, there will be something like that which also has a vibration and stimulation function.  In similar conditions, Harry will have something similar in his ass that "just happens" to have a bump that stimulates his prostate and a similar smooth sound slid up his cock.  These will likely be introduced in my Chapter 5 for both stories and will have other useful functions, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 08, 2016, 12:02:07 PM
I hope the goblins give rose and other goblin slaves Buttplugs that they have to ask the goblins to take out like the ones in Harry Potter and the black sisters

http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38304

Or the pussy plug like what cho Chang has
Well, when their ass and/or pussy are not in use, such as when they are resting by themselves, there will be something like that which also has a vibration and stimulation function.  In similar conditions, Harry will have something similar in his ass that "just happens" to have a bump that stimulates his prostate and a similar smooth sound slid up his cock.  These will likely be introduced in my Chapter 5 for both stories and will have other useful functions, too.


I hope the goblins use Buttplugs to get acacia ready for anal sex I am sure that there are spells to do it that Sirius will use in her training.

But acaci haveing to crawl around with a buttplug in  is so much more humiliating which I think the goblins would like. And her haveing to ask permission to romove it

Like the Buttplugs Draco mum ask Harry to use on her in the story
http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=38304


There is also the pussy plug that is in cho Chang. It's one thing to not be able to touch her pussy because the goblins Order it.but to not me able to touch it threw a plug is so much worse  I believe the saying is so close but so far
What do you think of the hovering buttplug seat idea or the enchament that makes it fuck her as she crawls
another  enchant for  a buttplug  would be  to make it so that the golbins can lock it into a place in the air so she has to use her hovering buttplug instead of a chair


another would be to make it so as she moves forward the buttplug gets caught in the air till it almost comes out then slides back in so as she crawling/walking around so  the buttplug would slide in and out fucking her
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 08, 2016, 12:07:20 PM
Well, the ones I have in mind will change shape, vibrate, and emit stimulating magical 'sparks'.  Beyond that, I'll need to think on it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 08, 2016, 12:23:33 PM
Well, the ones I have in mind will change shape, vibrate, and emit stimulating magical 'sparks'.  Beyond that, I'll need to think on it.

I think it should be able to at least get hot and cold and be able to shocker her

Mabye it should also be able to pump water into her bowls before vanishing the water along with any waste. I think that would be a weird sensation for her her bowls filling up with water then the water vanishing leavening her feeling empty only to fill her up again with it repeating till she is clean in which it will leave the last load of water inside her till a goblin realease it

Mabye have the goblin romove the plug and make her hold the water inside and punish her when she leaks while waiting for permission to realease the water
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 08, 2016, 09:43:57 PM
I don't intend to go with anything that complicated in my stories, all waste, solid and liquid will be absorbed and used for magical energy within the inserted devices (something of a magical equivalent of a very controlled E=MC**2).  They will need that power for morphing shape,  vibrating, and providing other sensual stimulation (possibly two such devices in one person could provide the equivalent of electro-stim play).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 08, 2016, 11:46:40 PM
update on the progress of the next chapter?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 08:38:56 AM
update on the progress of the next chapter?
Certainly, the next chapter of the HP story went to beta this weekend and the next chapter of the RP story will follow early this coming week (they are split because the stories are diverging now, even if the events are parallel).  Both definitely diverge from the other 'Goblin Debt' stories in that I throw a few other wrinkles in (yeah, I'll be playing with a few tropes, but hopefully from a different PoV).  I intend to keep my 'every other week' posting schedule if at all possible.  If that schedule slips do to other, higher priorities (such as work, I am rated a 'Senior Design Specialist'), I will post notice here and on the stories.  I don't intend to allow it to slip, but we aren't getting any more folk at work and additional work load is imminent.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 08:47:12 AM
Will the goblins do thing like give rose impossible tasks and the. Punish her when she fails
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 09:19:36 AM
Will the goblins do thing like give rose impossible tasks and the. Punish her when she fails
That might well happen, though I won't say for certain since I'm not that far along.  I will say that neither Rose nor Harry will be solely sex slaves; the goblins will keep them well exercised (perhaps including time in the mines wearing nothing but a basic harness and hardhat - with the right harness design, both could look quite hot in just that) and probably use them on occasion for various domestic duties.

I am strongly considering that 'staged tunnel collapse' scenario from T1p2's thread, it's lead to some interesting possibilities that beg to be used.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 09:53:16 AM
Will the goblins do thing like give rose impossible tasks and the. Punish her when she fails
That might well happen, though I won't say for certain since I'm not that far along.  I will say that neither Rose nor Harry will be solely sex slaves; the goblins will keep them well exercised (perhaps including time in the mines wearing nothing but a basic harness and hardhat - with the right harness design, both could look quite hot in just that) and probably use them on occasion for various domestic duties.

I am strongly considering that 'staged tunnel collapse' scenario from T1p2's thread, it's lead to some interesting possibilities that beg to be used.

For mine work I image. Them haveing rose pull cart with her arms  in a sleeve binder behind her back. I imagen that as she pulls the cart her clit chain  will he attached to the cart at a length that will tug her clit with each pull of the cart
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 10:25:36 AM
I was thinking more of a harness on her upper body, showing off her breasts, with her arms in an armbinder, with the rope/chain attached to the harness but running through a ring at her wrists.  Perhaps the clit chain could be attached to a "take up reel" that once it was pulled with a certain amount of force unwound and started again.  For Harry, something similar, obviously not needing to show off his breasts but perhaps the harness could go lower and frame his 'block and tackle' (something like an athletic supporter without the fabric of the cup?), but pulling either on a ring around his balls or one at his glans.

Of course, for Rose there is another cruel option, hands in stocks at shoulder height with a pulley at each end of the stocks.  A basket hangs from each pulley with the other end of the rope/chain tied around the base of one of Rose's breasts on the other side of her from where the basket is.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 10:38:42 AM
I was thinking more of a harness on her upper body, showing off her breasts, with her arms in an armbinder, with the rope/chain attached to the harness but running through a ring at her wrists.  Perhaps the clit chain could be attached to a "take up reel" that once it was pulled with a certain amount of force unwound and started again.  For Harry, something similar but pulling either on a ring around his balls or one at his glans.

Of course, for Rose there is another cruel option, hands in stocks at shoulder height with a pulley at each end of the stocks.  A basket hangs from each pulley with the other end of the rope/chain tied around the base of one of Rose's breasts on the other side of her from where the basket is.

I like the "take up reel" idea it seem like a safer idea of what I want to do with her clit clain being attached to the cart. That I think there was already a suggested enchantment for her clit chain that would make it get longer before it actually damaged her clit


I like the second idea with the stocks while she is in the stocks mabye add the "take up reel" to her clit chain and make it so that her clit chain is to short for her to fully extend her legs. So with each step she has to pull the "take up reel" chain attached to her clit.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 11:08:39 AM
*snicker* I can think of some 'nasty" ways of doing that which would quite limit how big a step she could take; the clit chain is connected to the middle of a chain between her ankle cuffs (how short the clit chain is before that connection ring is up to the writer) when she's standing straight and tall.  When she starts walking, there's going to be a constant pull on her clit chain that would vary and be all the more stimulating because of that.

I could even see a similar arrangement for a chain to Harry's balls or glans ring.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 11:30:55 AM
When working in the mines I would have them keep her hydrated useing a potion that has to be given as an enema that get absorbed by her body over time.

Mabye put enough potion up her ass that her stomach looks a few weeks pregnant
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 11:46:05 AM
*wicked chuckle* Yes, that could be quite uncomfortable.  Not sure I'll do that, was thinking of a body harness that framed her breasts and sex and held a butt plug, or something similar, in her ass.  This would work with that, but I was thinking of her being publically fed water and food from bottles that looked like large goblin breasts that she would have to suckle at.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 11:55:55 AM
*wicked chuckle* Yes, that could be quite uncomfortable.  Not sure I'll do that, was thinking of a body harness that framed her breasts and sex and held a butt plug, or something similar, in her ass.  This would work with that, but I was thinking of her being publically fed water and food from bottles that looked like large goblin breasts that she would have to suckle at.

 I don't see the appeal of the goblin breast idea but to each there own

Mabye give them hydration and neutrition threw the Enema potion and have her only oral food be other goblin slaves breastmilk and cum with fleur and Gabriellas pussy juice for desert/special treat
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 12:02:22 PM
I like the hydrating potion idea also because it mean that she  does not need to be give water so in order to wash the taste of goblin cum out of her mouth she has to eat out another goblin slaves pussy
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 12:09:02 PM
I think considering how often she will be forced to orgasm the hydration potion is actually needed because there is no way she could drink enough water to keep from getting dehydrated

Harry will probably need the hydration potion as well considering what they are going to do to his dick he will constantly be leaking cum unless the female goblin plan to plug his dick.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 12:13:09 PM
I was thinking of the goblin-breast-shaped containers more as a way to publically humiliate Rose/Harry.

Having had my share of enemas (required for colonoscopies and other medical exams of the lower body - getting older is quite the bother), I don't have any real taste for too much of that. 

The idea of Rose/Harry being force to orally pleasure someone else to get the taste of goblin cum out of the mouth could make for interesting situations.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 12:16:18 PM
I think considering how often she will be forced to orgasm the hydration potion is actually needed because there is no way she could drink enough water to keep from getting dehydrated

Harry will probably need the hydration potion as well considering what they are going to do to his dick he will constantly be leaking cum unless the female goblin plan to plug his dick.
I'll have to think on that one.  I'm thinking that having Rose/Harry forced to denied orgasms during the day and then allowed to release, all at once, at the end of the day might be used as entertainment for the clan with current rights to the slave. 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 12:24:26 PM
I think considering how often she will be forced to orgasm the hydration potion is actually needed because there is no way she could drink enough water to keep from getting dehydrated

Harry will probably need the hydration potion as well considering what they are going to do to his dick he will constantly be leaking cum unless the female goblin plan to plug his dick.
I'll have to think on that one.  I'm thinking that having Rose/Harry forced to denied orgasms during the day and then allowed to release, all at once, at the end of the day might be used as entertainment for the clan with current rights to the slave.

I think that they might save the orgasm denial Enchament for lead up tospecial occasions like feasts so they can punish them for orgasming without permission.

I like the idea of orgasm control training so that they can only cum with permission

With rose haveing to Lick up her own cum ever time the goblins tell her to come as in follow them and for Harry which ever female goblin that is near by having to lick up his
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 09, 2016, 12:27:01 PM
You can just see a room full in goblins slave hear the word come and then them all squirting all over the floor and then They all,have to lick there own up while trying to avoid makeing eye contact with each other
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 01:59:34 PM
Yes, that could get interesting.  I'll certainly consider this as my stories progress.  Be amusing for Harry to have a female slave permanently assigned to him for just that duty, and for him to clean her cum.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 09, 2016, 02:33:52 PM
It won't show up in this story, but I keep thinking that a gladius lucentus spell could disturb a lot of folk (though those familiar with the non-magical world would likely applaud it).  It could be rather useful for combat techniques the other side wasn't familiar with.

The other spell that intrigues me with possibilities is a lumos coherenus spell that would effectively give you a focused high-energy laser beam from your wand tip.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 10, 2016, 02:49:30 AM
To explain what I mean by mounted on Harry's dick


Harry would be made stand  than the goblin would make the girl stand Infront  of him with her back to his chest then they would lift the death eater daughter and put her on Harry's dick then they would attach Harry's balls to her clit ring so they were pulled threw her legs.


Then  there chest and arms would be trapped inside a Tube top that goes around both of them .Then a leash would be attached to the chain connecting there her clit and  his balls and then would be lead around the goblin city.

If Harry is shorter than the girls he has mounted in him he could be made to walk on his tip toes to avoid pain to the clit and balls

But I prefer the idea of a tiny death eater daughter that is shorter than Harry mounted on his dick with her feet not being able to reach the ground  so that Harry's dick has to hold her up. As Harry walks she would bounce up and down tugging the chain connecting her clit to his balls.
Ohh, that could be pleasurably nasty all around.  Perhaps he is her overseer and is getting punished along with her?  I'm thinking that rather than a tube top, his nipple piercings are tightly linked to her and the "Kali's teeth" function of the split collars on his cock and balls is activated at a low to medium setting.

I don't mind how you do it .


Although I would prefer it if the death eater daughter was younger /shorter than him.


Two slaves bound, one carrying the other with a U-shaped double-dildo in both: http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1107228 (I could see this one as a punishment parading, after they were flogged/whipped while bound together like this (but before the double-dildo was inserted).

This is close to what I mean when I said haves Harry carry around a death eater girls mounted in his. Dick

But there arms would be free and so would the girls legs

I think she would find it quit embarrassing to have Harry hold her as she is carried around mounted on his dick

this picture is how i image the death eater daughter  mounted on harry s dick as he carry's her around

http://imgur.com/a/gyWVi

the size differences would not be as big beween harry and the girl but the pic captures how i see the girl on harry s dick
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 10, 2016, 07:21:39 AM
I can see that happening.  I can also see it done with Rose using a long double-ended dildo.

To make it extra challenging, the Death Eater daughter has her wrists shackled behind Rose/Harry's back and Rose/Harry is in an armbinder.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 10, 2016, 09:53:17 AM
update on the progress of the next chapter?
Certainly, the next chapter of the HP story went to beta this weekend and the next chapter of the RP story will follow early this coming week (they are split because the stories are diverging now, even if the events are parallel).  Both definitely diverge from the other 'Goblin Debt' stories in that I throw a few other wrinkles in (yeah, I'll be playing with a few tropes, but hopefully from a different PoV).  I intend to keep my 'every other week' posting schedule if at all possible.  If that schedule slips do to other, higher priorities (such as work, I am rated a 'Senior Design Specialist'), I will post notice here and on the stories.  I don't intend to allow it to slip, but we aren't getting any more folk at work and additional work load is imminent.
Quoting yourself is probably bad practice, but it's the easiest way to do this.  I have the beta of the HP story back and I'm doing clean-up.  The RP story will go to beta on Tuesday.

So...everything looks good for the next chapters to be posted this weekend.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 11, 2016, 09:42:25 PM
Got an idea for a really nasty torture for Rose.  Hooks in her ass and pussy holding her up and separate ropes around the base of each breast stabilizing her upright - with weights on the other end of those ropes after they pass over a pulley.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 11, 2016, 10:20:15 PM
you said rose/harry will be seen as a fellow/fallen warrior would the goblins really do that to a fellow warrior.

also if there or so many slave children maybe rose should get stuck as the caretaker for awhile so that goblins make her produce milk (semi permanetly)?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 12, 2016, 07:22:16 AM
It was an idea I was throwing out, not necessarily something I'll use.  Being classified as a "captured warrior" will limit some forms of abuse/humiliation (though I could see the Hook clan disregarding this classification and doing this to Rose, anyway, and something equivalent to Harry, for punishment - actually, there's a sequence for later in the story where they just might use that on Rose/Harry in an attempt at revenge disguised as punishment, and not just revenge for Griphook), but Rose/Harry will still see plenty of bdsm situations within that classification as well as the other matters they'll be put to.

Yeah, I could see a lactation charm being used on Rose to produce milk for goblin and/or slave children (slave children and female slaves bearing goblin children will be addressed in Chapter 4 of Rose's story - basically, human slaves cannot successfully carry a goblin fetus to term for biological reasons and the goblins will be liberally using contraceptive charms to prevent human slaves from having children).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 12, 2016, 09:25:06 PM
Relative to Reply #157, I have the beta of the Rose Potter story back and I'm doing final clean-up bits to both it and the Harry Potter story and both will post new chapters this weekend.  The divergence from T1p2's story will increase as well as a certain divergence developing between these two stories (parallel in major arcs but differing, sometimes considerably, in details of events - OTOH, I do have some things firmly planned that will be the same in both stories, mostly in the background).

FWIW, Chapter 4 of each is entitled "Getting Down" and Chapter 5 of each will be entitled "Contemplations".  Tentative titles for Chapters 6 & 7 of each are "Investigations" and "Presentation", respectively.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 15, 2016, 05:47:25 PM
It's not at all raunchy, but allow me to recommend a good read:

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12168828/10/Harry-Potter-Lone-Traveler-God-and-Wizard

It's a most interesting work and the story it references is Dragon-Raptor's "Harry Potter and the Curse's Cure" (available on both FFN and hofanfictionarchives) which I can also very highly recommend as reading material.  It, along with kissinghollie's "Beginning to Question" (only on FFN AFAIK) and cloneserpents' "Not Go Gentle" (a good, but very disturbing read available again soley on FFN AFAIK) do somewhat encourage me toward a certain endgame situation in my two stories under discussion here.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 15, 2016, 05:52:59 PM
are your stories updating today cateagle?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 15, 2016, 06:15:55 PM
are your stories updating today cateagle?
Probably tomorrow or very late today as I've been a bit "under the weather" today.  I'll take one final polishing look tonight and then post tomorrow.  I'll be looking forward to reviews and feedback on the two chapters .

Good thing I am taking one last look as I'm finding a few things both my beta and I missed on earlier reads.  The new chapter of each story will be updated tomorrow.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 16, 2016, 08:52:39 AM
And both stories are now updated.  I hope the new chapters are enjoyable as I take things in a different way than the others (at least, I hope I do).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 16, 2016, 11:57:40 AM
Good chapters I hope you have the goblins interrogate rose about her past sexual history. And I hope it make some of the goblins at least start to have some sympathy for her.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 16, 2016, 03:11:28 PM
Good chapters I hope you have the goblins interrogate rose about her past sexual history. And I hope it make some of the goblins at least start to have some sympathy for her.
Actually, that's coming in Chapter 6 along with other interrogation subjects for both Rose and Harry.  As well as the goblins responding to what has the potential to be a security breach (touched on briefly in the just posted Chapter 4).  The results of the interrogation will definitely affect how the goblins perceive Rose/Harry, and in a positive way (well, except for the "Hook" clan).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 16, 2016, 03:23:04 PM
How long do you intent to make your stories?

how are you going to set up your chapters, as in are there going to be a certain amount of chapter (like 10 ) to a year?.

do you plan to make a epilogue or a certain amount of chapters showing her time after Gringotts releases her back in the wizarding world

It would be interesting to see how she acts to the goblins after she is released (IE: visiting her vaults when they are returned to her) and how the goblins interact with her.

I hope after her release years down the road when she goes to Gringotts she ends up unknowing or knowingly interacts with a clerk that is one of her goblin/human children (assuming you are harvesting some of her eggs or its Harry child).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 16, 2016, 03:40:36 PM
The stories will run at least through Rose/Harry's working out the full contract and regaining control over Potter vaults etc.  I have a few ideas for children among the goblins, and elsewhere - but that's another side of the story, that I need to flesh out.

Exactly how I cover the passage of time is something I'm still pondering, there are several possibilities.  I know some events I want to have occur but I need to work out a suitable time line (some things are fixed, others can happen anywhere in the three year period).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 17, 2016, 04:42:18 AM
I wounder if they might rent her out to vampires magical blood is properly hard to come by for vampires so being able to pay goblins to drink from a helpless witch would, be quite the turn on for goblins to watch
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 17, 2016, 06:15:40 AM
I wounder if they might rent her out to vampires magical blood is properly hard to come by for vampires so being able to pay goblins to drink from a helpless witch would, be quite the turn on for goblins to watch
I'll take that under consideration for both Rose and Harry (Harry has some erotic possibilities with the bite being on his engorged cock as part of some erotic play/torture - Rose on a nipple/breast in the same kind of play?), but I won't/can't give a definite answer now.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 17, 2016, 10:04:12 AM
People seem to be getting on your case because of the no permanent harm .so mabye have a goblin. In univers explain that it was a trap after all there is not much that magic cant heal and mental or emotional damage will heal with time even if it takes 100 years to heal its still not permanent.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 17, 2016, 10:11:04 AM
I may have one of them say something, we'll have to see.  I've already answered Bouncygirl in that it was no permanent harm, not no permanent marks, especially if Rose/Harry considered the brands the equivalent of battle scars (I can see Rose/Harry having that mindset, already having a number of those).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 17, 2016, 06:23:55 PM
Okay, I find I need some info and I don't have a copy of Chamber of Secrets immediately to hand.  On what day did Dobby ruin the dinner party?  Who was the other couple at that party?  On what day did the three youngest Weasley boys rescue Harry?

Help on this would be appreciated as it helps me sort out some background information that will show up.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 17, 2016, 06:55:20 PM
Okay, I find I need some info and I don't have a copy of Chamber of Secrets immediately to hand.  On what day did Dobby ruin the dinner party?  Who was the other couple at that party?  On what day did the three youngest Weasley boys rescue Harry?

Help on this would be appreciated as it helps me sort out some background information that will show up.

Dobby dropped a cake/puddingon the wife of miss mason although in the books I think he just dropped it on the floor . The wife was also afraid of birds
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 17, 2016, 06:58:28 PM
Okay, that gives me a starting point and I reckon I can google hunt a pdf copy of Chamber of Secrets to verify timing.  You'll see where this shows up when chapter 5 comes out.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 17, 2016, 07:02:51 PM
I wounder if they might rent her out to vampires magical blood is properly hard to come by for vampires so being able to pay goblins to drink from a helpless witch would, be quite the turn on for goblins to watch
I'll take that under consideration for both Rose and Harry (Harry has some erotic possibilities with the bite being on his engorged cock as part of some erotic play/torture - Rose on a nipple/breast in the same kind of play?), but I won't/can't give a definite answer now.
Had a thought, a vampire, or vampires, bringing a restrained and bound Rose/Harry to the very brink of orgasm via erotic torture, and then taking their blood, without turning them, from an especially sensitive and exposed erogenous zone (say, Rose's very erect and engorged nipples and/or clit, and Harry's cock - and perhaps his nipples, too) and triggering an orgasm (denial charm turned off at opportune moment).  I could see the goblins enjoying watching that.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 04:18:05 AM
I was not thinking of anything that complicate.

I was just thinking they would pimp her out to special vampire customers.

A bit like how a normal hotel leaves mints On the pillow.

I think if they were going to do a show with a vampire they would let her lose in and then let the vampire hunt her.

So the goblins can have the thrill of watching her get hunted and the. Because of the collar stoping her magic from protecting her the vampire gets to drink magic blood from a witches neck instead of threw blood packs if they can get hold of magic blood at all.

I had the vampire idea after reading this story: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11552218/1/

In that story magical blood is impossible for all but the most powerful vampire to get because a witch/wizards magic protects them from being drunk from unwillingly. the goblin collars stop the magic from protecting the wearer
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 04:49:45 AM
Another way I could see her used is if a vampire is meeting an important goblin they will offer refreshments if the vampire says yes rose/acacia is lead in with her in a bondage hood with a enchament activated so she can't understand spoken language.

The vampire then spends the rest of the meeting with rose/acacia in There lap playing with her body and drinking her blood. Maybe after the meeting the vampire inquires about renting a few goblin slaves for a party they plan to have with other high ranking vampires.

The goblins can make money off not only supplying the neutral ground for the meeting but also the food/entertainment.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 18, 2016, 10:09:40 AM
The hunt might be interesting, particularly if the magical is given fight training and a sharpened wooden sword to make for more even odds.  I could see the bit with a magical slave, either male or female depending on the vampire's preference, as a source of refreshment for a VVIP vampire client.  I still think that the hormones coursing through the bloodstream of an aroused magical, through erotic torture, would add some extra flavor for the vampire.  I may use all or none of these.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 10:19:39 AM
The hunt might be interesting, particularly if the magical is given fight training and a sharpened wooden sword to make for more even odds.  I could see the bit with a magical slave, either male or female depending on the vampire's preference, as a source of refreshment for a VVIP vampire client.  I still think that the hormones coursing through the bloodstream of an aroused magical, through erotic torture, would add some extra flavor for the vampire.  I may use all or none of these.

I think different vampire would enjoy different things. Some might enjoy the fear others might want there prey to fight back.some might enjoy submission and trust from there prey.

I think they would only give the goblin slave a false hope when it comes to fighting back against the vampire clients.



Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 18, 2016, 01:07:09 PM
If there was going to be a hunt in The Pit, I could see any vampires interested being like big game hunters and wanting to stalk dangerous prey that had an equal chance of getting them.  As I see the goblins, I can't see them going for a rigged hunt either (it's simply not honourable!).  Now, I can see other vampires wishing for different types/styles of victims, but I won't swear to use any of theses ideas.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 01:11:49 PM
The vampires could be an interesting background story mabye during the war with Voldemort young vampires bred out of control and now the clans and older vampires are forming an alliance to cull the young "feral"vampires that ran wild under Voldemort.

That could be interesting mabye one of the slytherin girls acacia/rose went school with could be a young vampire turned by one of the feral vampires under Voldemort that has been adopted into a vampire clan. and she could feed from rose often to make her power rise faster like the vampire in the story I linked.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 01:14:07 PM
If there was going to be a hunt in The Pit, I could see any vampires interested being like big game hunters and wanting to stalk dangerous prey that had an equal chance of getting them.  As I see the goblins, I can't see them going for a rigged hunt either (it's simply not honourable!).  Now, I can see other vampires wishing for different types/styles of victims, but I won't swear to use any of theses ideas.

I just put the ideas out there it's up to you and t1p2 or any other authors that takes up the challenge to decide if they want to use them or not.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 18, 2016, 01:19:03 PM
And in the pit I just mean that the goblins would make sure it is impossible for the vampires to be killed by any of the slaves.

The pits would be a place for the vampires that want to play with there food.

And a place for young vampires to learn now to not kill when they get caught up in the thrill of the hunt.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 18, 2016, 02:50:48 PM
As I said, I could see some vampires willing to chance death for a challenging hunt, much like big game hunters do.  I could see the rest as possible, too. 

Again, I don't know how much, if any, of this I'll use. 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 20, 2016, 06:14:45 AM
As I said, I could see some vampires willing to chance death for a challenging hunt, much like big game hunters do.  I could see the rest as possible, too. 

Again, I don't know how much, if any, of this I'll use.

I put some ideas in the other tread that would be more fitting for t1p2 story. on how he could get vampires involved


I trimmed out the stuff that might not be relivant to your story if you want to read the full idea check the otehr thread
A way to get vampires involved could be to have had Voldemort giving the daughter of a death eater to a upstart young feral vampire as his "vampire queen". and then in the war the vampire dieded and the girl in question is taken back into her family only to be  given to the goblins instead  of the lord or heir of her family  like Dhalia.

a Vampire being enslaved by goblins because of a wizard law is sure to piss some magical beings off even if is just because of the principle of it


The vampire,goblin alliance could also work together to hunt down the younger feral vampires because there number would have exploded under Voldemort.

the young feral vampires would be given three options:

1-die
2-find a vampire old enough and willing to take them as there fledgling till they have lived there first 50 years as a vampire.
3-slaver to gringotts for a 50 years were they will be taught all the thing that they would have under a vampire as a fledgling .


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 20, 2016, 10:03:53 AM
There were reviews of Chapter 4 of each story complaining about formatting problems.  I didn't see any but I went back and reformatted both chapters.  Will some one please take a look at these using different browsers and let me know if there is still a problem.

Thank you very much.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 20, 2016, 10:11:38 AM
There were reviews of Chapter 4 of each story complaining about formatting problems.  I didn't see any but I went back and reformatted both chapters.  Will some one please take a look at these using different browsers and let me know if there is still a problem.

Thank you very much.

I can't see any problems in safari
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 20, 2016, 03:24:10 PM
I can't see any formatting problems in chrome
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 20, 2016, 05:27:10 PM
Good!  Then hopefully I've got that cleaned up now.  I never did see any problems in IE, but a couple different reviewers did, so I tried reformatting and it seems to have worked.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 20, 2016, 08:53:12 PM
yeah and when you uploaded the chapters originally there wasn't any formatting errors on chrome.
it most be related to that persons internet browser.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 20, 2016, 10:28:40 PM
yeah and when you uploaded the chapters originally there wasn't any formatting errors on chrome.
it most be related to that persons internet browser.
And I didn't see any in IE, but I'm not going to get in a urinary olympics over something easily remedied.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 20, 2016, 10:30:43 PM
Just as a teaser for the next chapter of each story, you'll get a quick run-down on the sexual history of Rose and Harry in their respective stories and the reasons for some of the comments each made in chapter 4; it's not been all goodness, but not all badness, either.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 24, 2016, 07:06:53 AM
I hope none of the goblins know how the malfoys and those like them treat house-Elfs.

Because if they do I can just see one treating rose like malfoy treated Dobby at the end of the second book.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 24, 2016, 12:53:18 PM
Well, I could see the Hook clan behaving like that, and worse, to Rose/Harry.  As I see them, I don't see the goblins in general treating their slaves that badly unless given provocation either before the slave entered their service (purebloods can be such asses) or if the slave tends to be highly disruptive and under-performing; Beginning to Question on FFN has Ron and Molly falling into that latter category.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 28, 2016, 12:01:09 AM
I'll be posting an Author's Note to my stories on Friday night, but I figured to post here, first.  Due to work load and work schedule at my place of employment, I'm going to need to skip this weekend's posting and resume in two weeks.  I'm working on chapter 5 for each story and have bits and pieces started on chapters 6 & 7.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 31, 2016, 11:52:29 AM
Since I don't have "Deathly Hallows" immediately to hand, a question for y'all.  Was Griphook aware of exactly what they were going after in the Lestrange vault?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 01, 2016, 05:19:49 AM
Since I don't have "Deathly Hallows" immediately to hand, a question for y'all.  Was Griphook aware of exactly what they were going after in the Lestrange vault?

i don't think he knew from memory not even bill knew they were hunting a Horcrux
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 01, 2016, 07:40:55 AM
Hmm, I may have to tweak canon a bit so that he does know, and helps with the plan rather than tell Rose/Harry how goblins view such abominations and that they would be willing to deal with it.  I want to build a case that he was so fixated on gaining the sword that he didn't supply proper information.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on November 02, 2016, 08:43:23 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/465466/Dipped-in-Lace-and-Leather
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 02, 2016, 09:32:31 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/465466/Dipped-in-Lace-and-Leather
Yeah, I could see Rose like that, likely with a second chain or tie from one nipple piercing, through her clit piercing, to her other nipple piercing and made taut.

I may contact the artist about a commission of Rose like that.  Got an idea for something the Hook clan might do to her, too.

Update: I have contacted her and while her present commission books are full, we will definitely be doing business in the future.  I definitely want to get pics of Rose as described above as well as bound and suspended and ready for punishment by the Hook clan.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on November 10, 2016, 05:10:39 AM
is the update still on track?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 10, 2016, 07:23:25 AM
Pretty much, though it will likely be updated on Sunday, possibly late that day,  If it gets delayed beyond that, I'll post here and in the reviews on the site.  I am finding that I need to revise some of what I've got to make more sense, so that might delay matters a bit.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 13, 2016, 09:00:07 AM
I was mistaken, between illness and writers' block (trying to get the first half of each chapter to flow without choking on extraneous material), I won't make posting on 11/13.  I do have the latter half of each chapter completed and beta-ed but the first portion is becoming something of a struggle to do and get reasonable right.

If I'm honest, I'm going to say another two-week slip in posting as that will give me the Thanksgiving Holiday to, hopefully by then, finish the polishing of the first half of each chapter.

Circumstances permitting, I would love to post on 11/26 as it's my birthday and I'd love to give instead of receive gifts.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on November 13, 2016, 11:25:23 AM
when you update how many chapters will there be ?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 13, 2016, 01:29:05 PM
when you update how many chapters will there be ?
I will be updating one chapter to each story, but they will both be fairly good-sized and provide background for later story developments.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on November 20, 2016, 01:29:10 PM
is the update still on schedule
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 21, 2016, 07:46:44 PM
is the update still on schedule
At this time, I'll have to give a "definite maybe" on that.  Got laid off last Thursday, so a lot of effort is going into job-hunting.  Still, I will do my best to get something out this weekend.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on November 21, 2016, 07:48:13 PM
is the update still on schedule
At this time, I'll have to give a "definite maybe" on that.  Got laid off last Thursday, so a lot of effort is going into job-hunting.  Still, I will do my best to get something out this weekend.

For reasons not related to writing adult fiction I hope?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 22, 2016, 05:30:20 PM
No.  Nothing related to that.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 25, 2016, 06:04:59 AM
I wounder if the goblin would make the girls play the sport from keijo  the anime.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 25, 2016, 03:23:20 PM
I wounder if the goblin would make the girls play the sport from keijo  the anime.
Not familiar with that one, what is the sport?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on November 25, 2016, 04:15:02 PM
The series centers around the fictional women-only sport of keijo, where players stand on floating platforms and aim to incapacitate or push their opponent into the water, using only their breasts and buttocks.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Keijo!!!!!!!!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 25, 2016, 09:50:25 PM
At such time as they have sufficient female slaves to form a couple teams, I could see the goblins going for something like this with the females wearing only their piercings.  I reckon they could see memories of the games to wizards (likely some witches, too) for a pretty penny.  What could get interesting would be a co-ed version that was allowed to get as raunchy as it could.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 26, 2016, 08:21:35 AM
Another perverted game they could make rose play is clit chain tug of war.

So it would be tug of war but with the chain attached to the slaves clit rings with them being made to crawl. Mabye have a weight in the middle of the  chain that gets heavier the longer the game goes on and both slave being punished if the weight touches the ground.

With the loser being punished by the goblin who lost money betting on her.

Any update on when we can expect the next chapter?


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 26, 2016, 10:56:53 AM
I expect the next chapter of each story will be delayed more, simply because job search is taking up a large chunk of my time.  Still, I am getting writing done.

The clit chain tug of war could be rather interesting; something to consider for later (not promising anything, though).

Edit: Yes, it has been delayed; writer's block and Real Life have conspired to slow my writing.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 02, 2016, 12:10:41 PM
Even thought it's a week late I just sore it happy birthday

I hope it went well
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 11, 2016, 05:47:10 PM
It went fairly well for a "milestone" birthday (65).  The job search continues apace and I'm getting some writing done, but not as much as I wish.

12-24-16 Addendum:  I'm getting writing done, but it's slow with all the job search efforts.  I'm roughly 2/3's of the way through the chapter (with the last third already beta'd).  The chapter after that will be interesting as we learn a number of things including what shaped Rose/Harry's views of duty and honor (hint: It was a reaction to the Dursleys that sent her/him looking for something better and he found it, starting with the works of Howard Pyle).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 25, 2016, 06:27:03 AM
http://imgur.com/lzDDDo8

a use for nipple rings
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 25, 2016, 09:52:01 PM
http://imgur.com/lzDDDo8

a use for nipple rings
An interesting use for them.  I'll probably use it somewhere in the story, perhaps even in the training of Rose/Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on December 26, 2016, 09:59:40 PM
what is the status of the update?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 28, 2016, 01:21:17 PM
what is the status of the update?
12/24 addendum to my 12/11 post is still accurate, being ill with sinusitis since then has not helped.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 10, 2017, 06:21:19 AM
http://i.imgur.com/eozugna.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/IE720uZ.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 10, 2017, 07:00:27 AM
http://i.imgur.com/eozugna.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/IE720uZ.jpg

Pics are good. Now all we need is Cateagle to get well and update.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 10, 2017, 06:38:02 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=205937

A simple method of display for one of her 'outside' days or just in Tirith Ungol proper.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 01:04:29 AM
http://bleach.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600012025
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 11:36:26 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3282471
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 11:53:26 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2923126
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 12:08:26 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3505805
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 12:10:52 PM
One thing that will be interesting to read is her humiliation from being naked when every one else has clothes on
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 11, 2017, 12:12:49 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2202523

What Rose might expect if Clan Hook takes ownership for a time.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 12:26:18 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3288734
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 12:28:51 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=674653
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 11, 2017, 12:55:14 PM
http://img1.reactor.cc/pics/post/full/Anime-sexy-armor-677359.jpeg

The mention of 'captured warrior' status reminded me of this oldy-but-goody...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 01:01:32 PM
One thing that crossed my mind is that if acacia/rose thought Snape was bad when it came to punishing her for no reason the goblins will be worse.

And the goblin won't just be taking house points

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2017, 01:36:54 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=205937

A simple method of display for one of her 'outside' days or just in Tirith Ungol proper.
More likely for some events inside Tirith Ungol proper.  What I have in minde for her "outside" days is far more embarrassing and intense for Rose, with something similarly intense for Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2017, 01:39:02 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=674653
That might show up in conjunction with the weighted chain through her piercings for at least one bondage scene.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2017, 01:41:33 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2202523

What Rose might expect if Clan Hook takes ownership for a time.
Worse could be done to her, and will be; though Clan Hook will be the last clan to get her.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 01:55:48 PM
I think the goblin will look for the smallest things to punish her for and that is not even getting into stuff were there is no right answer.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 11, 2017, 01:59:49 PM
So, Cat. Like Call, we're all wondering how the next chap is coming. Any chance on an update maybe tomorrow? Be a nice birthday gift from you if you did. (Hint Hint, wink wink, nudge nudge).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2017, 02:40:39 PM
So, Cat. Like Call, we're all wondering how the next chap is coming. Any chance on an update maybe tomorrow? Be a nice birthday gift from you if you did. (Hint Hint, wink wink, nudge nudge).
I'm afraid Real Life (like looking for a new job) has rather gotten in the way of writing.  I'm 3/4 done with the chapters and moving along, albeit slowly.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 02:58:07 PM
One scene I could see is the goblins giveing her a large buttplug and telling her it has a shrinking charm on it that will realise in 5 mins so she better put it in quickly because its going in even if she can't get it in before the shrinking charm releases.


once it's in and the shrinking charm has been released it should be so big that the only way to get it out is for the shrinking charm to be done on it again. So she can never get it out with out the goblins help
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2017, 06:45:19 PM
Commisioned Pics:

Rose:
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470075/COMMISSION--Open-Display

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470327/COMMISSION--Pulled-in-Place

Harry (though the goblins would use a magical dildo in place of the vibe):
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470720/COMMISSION--Plugged

I've got some black and white commisioned works coming that I'll have to post to a suitable site when I get them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2017, 07:58:59 PM
Commisioned Pics:

Rose:
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470075/COMMISSION--Open-Display

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470327/COMMISSION--Pulled-in-Place

Harry (though the goblins would use a magical dildo in place of the vibe):
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470720/COMMISSION--Plugged

I've got some black and white commisioned works coming that I'll have to post to a suitable site when I get them.

Cool
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 02:51:55 AM
So, Cat. Like Call, we're all wondering how the next chap is coming. Any chance on an update maybe tomorrow? Be a nice birthday gift from you if you did. (Hint Hint, wink wink, nudge nudge).

Happy birthday I hope you have a good day
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:37:23 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3085203
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:44:06 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2890367
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:56:12 AM
how harry should carry a death eater daughter

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3071311
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:58:38 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2550509


The last comment on this pic is what makes it interesting
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 01:53:50 PM
how harry should carry a death eater daughter

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3071311
Perhaps, but with the upper chain going to both her collar and nipple piercings (and/or clit piercing) to make the ride more stimulating.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 12, 2017, 02:57:27 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1513782

Both humiliating for public display, and a potential punishment given how she's being hung...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 04:21:21 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1513782

Both humiliating for public display, and a potential punishment given how she's being hung...
Perhaps with arms behind in an armbinder and with weighted chain through pierced nipple rings and clit ring; possibly with extra chains from pierced nipple rings to ring on her collar.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 04:55:04 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1513782

Both humiliating for public display, and a potential punishment given how she's being hung...

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1516153

A follow up pic to the one you posted
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 05:00:25 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1513782

Both humiliating for public display, and a potential punishment given how she's being hung...

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1516153

A follow up pic to the one you posted
I could see that done with the modification I mentioned, too.  As for something similar for a bound Harry, perhaps the large insertion being anal but a vibrating urethal sound slid up his hard cock for full stimulation.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 05:08:07 PM
One thing the goblins might do is a public flogging
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 12, 2017, 05:21:35 PM
One thing the goblins might do is a public flogging

Well in Acacia they were already doing that when taking her to the training room, and in both versions (I count Rose/Harry as one in this case, referencing the challenge in general), it could be argued that they were already doing it when Crowhook started in on Acacia/Rose/Harry.

Is it a sign of just how twisted we all are that a public flogging just doesn't seem that interesting at this point? Hmmm...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 05:31:49 PM
Public floggings will happen as appropriate to the story, particularly for certain "anniversary" dates (Rose/Harry's birthday, anniversary of the start of captivity, etc.).  What else will happen on those dates is something else, too; the flogging will just set the stage.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 05:46:45 PM
Is it a sign of just how twisted we all are that a public flogging just doesn't seem that interesting at this point? Hmmm...
Well, I suppose it depends on how skillfully the public flogging is administered; extra points for curling the whip, or cat of nine tails, around to hit especially sensitive areas.  I have a few ideas that will appear later...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 05:48:36 PM
Public floggings will happen as appropriate to the story, particularly for certain "anniversary" dates (Rose/Harry's birthday, anniversary of the start of captivity, etc.).  What else will happen on those dates is something else, too; the flogging will just set the stage.

I think true public flogging with a car o nine tails should be only used for punishing her for goblin lives that were lost. But other time they could flogg her with softer leather floggers.  After all the other time they are flogging her more to set the stage for other things


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 06:10:47 PM
I could see that possibility, though I could also see the cat of nine tails, with or without barbs, for offenses deemed particularly egregious (likely something the Hook Clan would do).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 06:16:10 PM
I could see that possibility, though I could also see the cat of nine tails, with or without barbs, for offenses deemed particularly egregious (likely something the Hook Clan would do).

I think the barbed cat should not be able to be used with out a decree from the goblin king.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 06:21:45 PM
After each day flogging with the barbed cat o'nine tails as they walk her threw town to show off the injures before the heal her so she is ready for the the next days flogging the goblin in the crowd around town should pelt her with Water balloons full of salt water.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 06:42:27 PM
After each day flogging with the barbed cat o'nine tails as they walk her threw town to show off the injures before the heal her so she is ready for the the next days flogging the goblin in the crowd around town should pelt her with Water balloons full of salt water.
Or other equally irritating salty liquids (I can think of a few).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 06:53:06 PM
I could see that possibility, though I could also see the cat of nine tails, with or without barbs, for offenses deemed particularly egregious (likely something the Hook Clan would do).

I think the barbed cat should not be able to be used with out a decree from the goblin king.
I could see that.  A normal leather flogger for most purposes, a cat of nine tails for punishments, and, with approval, a barbed cat of nine tails as punishment for egregious offenses (though I wouldn't put it past the Hook Clan to use it anyway, that would work with that part of the plot, and then really get nasty with Rose/Harry to where she/he need to be taken to the main goblin healers afterward).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 06:57:57 PM
I could see that possibility, though I could also see the cat of nine tails, with or without barbs, for offenses deemed particularly egregious (likely something the Hook Clan would do).

I think the barbed cat should not be able to be used with out a decree from the goblin king.
I could see that.  A normal leather flogger for most purposes, a cat of nine tails for punishments, and, with approval, a barbed cat of nine tails as punishment for egregious offenses (though I wouldn't put it past the Hook Clan to use it anyway, that would work with that part of the plot, and then really get nasty with Rose/Harry to where she/he need to be taken to the main goblin healers afterward).


I think that she would need to see healers after the barbed cat of nine tails no matter what.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 06:59:02 PM
After each day flogging with the barbed cat o'nine tails as they walk her threw town to show off the injures before the heal her so she is ready for the the next days flogging the goblin in the crowd around town should pelt her with Water balloons full of salt water.
Or other equally irritating salty liquids (I can think of a few).
. Vinegar to name one

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 07:13:59 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1251749
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 07:22:59 PM
I could see that possibility, though I could also see the cat of nine tails, with or without barbs, for offenses deemed particularly egregious (likely something the Hook Clan would do).

I think the barbed cat should not be able to be used with out a decree from the goblin king.
I could see that.  A normal leather flogger for most purposes, a cat of nine tails for punishments, and, with approval, a barbed cat of nine tails as punishment for egregious offenses (though I wouldn't put it past the Hook Clan to use it anyway, that would work with that part of the plot, and then really get nasty with Rose/Harry to where she/he need to be taken to the main goblin healers afterward).


I think that she would need to see healers after the barbed cat of nine tails no matter what.
uite probably, it depends on just how much protection that collar gives her; if she gets all the pain without the physical damage...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 07:24:23 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1251749
Now that is quite extreme.  I don't know that I'd have occasion to use that bit of torture.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 12, 2017, 07:33:42 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1251749
Now that is quite extreme.  I don't know that I'd have occasion to use that bit of torture.

A spiked dildo, a urethral vibe, and chemical injections to clit and nipples...all that would be missing is an enema bag and it'd be the complete sexual torture package.

If you want to limit it to true humiliation (probably something that would suit Daggerok and his clan quite well), I'd suggest this.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1828952
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 07:42:49 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2550509

Coffee  or some sort of potion that is given by enama to keep her awake as one of her master sleeps peacefully.

Acacia getting coffee pumped into her ass Since chemicals absorbed by the rectal walls enter the bloodstream extremely quickly. that means she would probably been hopped on caffeine all night.

Utterly exhausted, staring with bloodshot eyes looking at the cruel master/mistress who won't let her sleep as she rests comfortably in a luxurious bed. Long hours spent dreading the humiliations she willsuffer tomorrow, and wondering how she will ever make it through...


Maybe that could be acacia and daphne while Astoria sleeps in the bed
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:13:39 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=444940

The pear of anguish is something only the hook clan might use if. The have heard of it from the muggle world
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:24:22 PM
Fleur thinks that acacia is moveing to slow so gives her a cunt punt

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=632093
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 08:26:15 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3051999

I don't think a goblin would be able to get there foot this high mabye if the made her kneel
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 09:41:08 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1251749
Now that is quite extreme.  I don't know that I'd have occasion to use that bit of torture.

A spiked dildo, a urethral vibe, and chemical injections to clit and nipples...all that would be missing is an enema bag and it'd be the complete sexual torture package.

If you want to limit it to true humiliation (probably something that would suit Daggerok and his clan quite well), I'd suggest this.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1828952
Perhaps an enema bag feeding through a vibrating butt plug?  Yeah, I could see that complete sexual torture package for certain circumstances but that humiliation scene looks more probable to be employed.  Not saying I'll use either, though; just have to see how some things evolve.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 10:54:29 PM
I think the idea for keeping her awake watching her mistress or master sleep  while contemplating her humiliation past present(coffe enama)and furture would be interesting to read.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2017, 10:59:48 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2200281

As a pose for a punishment session?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 11:37:17 PM
Or having Acacaia  be feed by enema feeding tube while she has to sit and watch someone like fluer eats her favourite meal  in front of her. or having the goblins have her favourite meal prepared and then have it in front of her while they feed her by enema and then have the golbins throw it out because they have no interest in human food.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2017, 11:41:15 PM
I think the general theme of my last few post it the idea of  Acacia being made to suffer and be humiliated while the goblins live in comfort. and make sure she knows it
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:01:35 AM
Could the goblin make a special version of a humbler to use on Acacia mabye have the goblin pull her clit chain  back threw her legs and connect The end to a metal bar and then Shorten the chain so that the bar is pulled taut against her thighs just under her ass so when she even tries to stand up it or started her legs it pulls painfully on her clit.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:34:39 AM
Another Gryffindor themed one they could do is put a buttplug with a golden lions tail in ass, put a set of god laden fake cat ears on her hood.spank her ass till its Crimson and then lead her around the goblin city as the "proud"Gryffindor. With goblin in the crowd spanking to make sure her ass stays Crimson as she is walked past them.

For her pussy use her Clit chain And a metal bar to create a makeshift  humbler so she can't crawl very fast so all goblins can get some spankings in as she is crawling past

For her tits mabye a chain that connects her tits that goes around her back to pull then out from under her so that goblins can flogg then as she crawls past

I don't really feel what they are doing to her tits quite Fit in with the rest.

For her pussy I think it's ok because as she crawl past the goblin can have ago at trying to whip her pussy when her clit is completely exposed
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 02:44:51 PM
If I went with this scenario, I'd have chains hooked between the ring in her clit and each ring in one of her nipples so they would be continuously pulled by the chain on her clit ring.  I'd probably have the bases of her breasts bound to make them stand out and be more available for flogging or whatever.

I could see some, but not all, goblin clans doing this when they bring her into the clan area of the city.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 13, 2017, 03:15:33 PM
If I went with this scenario, I'd have chains hooked between the ring in her clit and each ring in one of her nipples so they would be continuously pulled by the chain on her clit ring.  I'd probably have the bases of her breasts bound to make them stand out and be more available for flogging or whatever.

I could see some, but not all, goblin clans doing this when they bring her into the clan area of the city.

Something like these then?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=597773

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=67857

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=16888

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3354900
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 08:43:04 PM
Yes, something of a mix of elements from all of those four pictures.  I could definitely see that for when Rose/Harry becomes servant of the Hook Clan and I could see a few others being equally nasty to her/him.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 08:53:41 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2510560
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 08:54:49 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=396742
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:04:05 PM
bondage mittens so she cant use her hands

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=987063
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:12:11 PM
mabye the hook clan

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2591330
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:27:14 PM
definitely hook clan

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2618397
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 09:34:29 PM
mabye the hook clan

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2591330
Probably with a few more twists to add to her sensations; like inserting a butt plug or anal vibrator after she's spanked cherry red.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 09:36:09 PM
definitely hook clan

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2618397
Actually, one of the black and white commissions I have coming has them doing worse to her, and that's just for starters.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 09:37:12 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2510560
Combine with vibrators in her pussy and ass for extra stimulation.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 09:53:39 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2718012

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2718010

magic would proberly  be used for easier insertion say a five min shrinking charm and if she doesn't get it in before the charm ends a golbin will put it in  any way.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 10:08:22 PM
using a kid broom the golbins could make this after all it is well know that Acacia likes flying

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3366794
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 10:13:07 PM
for some goblins birthday 

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2538876
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 10:13:44 PM
using a kid broom the golbins could make this after all it is well know that Acacia likes flying

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3366794
Now that could get interesting, particularly if the rider was pressed and held down on the sharp edge, much as on a bondage horse.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2017, 10:15:20 PM
for some goblins birthday 

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2538876
Now that would just be wicked and I could see some of the more wizard-hating clans doing that.  I'd use that for Rose/Harry's birthdays while under goblin control, except I have something else planned for those events.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2017, 10:32:26 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1554118
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 12:23:57 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1100341
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 12:24:59 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1046154
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 12:29:16 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1023675
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 12:35:48 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1007970
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 12:37:56 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=970000
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 08:33:56 AM
look at these these in order

maybe a female goblin clan that want acacia to experience what it it like to carry a goblin child

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887989
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887990
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887991
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887992
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887993
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887994
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887995
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888001
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888007
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888009
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888010
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888011
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888013

I wounder if any clan would do this to rose/acacia
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 08:45:52 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887115
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2017, 08:53:27 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1007970
With a few variations, I can see this happening to Rose and/or Harry; the weights on the nipples would definitely be also connected to the slave's genitalia in some form.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 09:02:08 AM
I think this set is a prequel to the other set of images i linked

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887115
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887116
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887119
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887121


there all by the same artist
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=lol_%28artist%29
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2017, 09:12:51 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1046154
I could see the goblins doing something like this to Rose/Harry, possibly using magic rather than electricity; for Harry the power probe would likely be applied to the head of his cock with electrodes on his nipples, as here, and curled around his balls instead of the gal's pussy lips.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 09:43:12 AM
I wonder what rose would have to do to have this done to her
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012&pool_id=42939

Can you imagen her haveing to wear that for the duration of her stay with one of the clans
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 10:04:32 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887121
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 10:10:52 AM
The hook clan grip her clit in memory of griphooks and give her a memory she won't forget
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1551430
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 14, 2017, 11:21:35 AM
For when Rose is given her first ride from King Kilgrav

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2130597
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2017, 11:26:31 AM
I don't know about rose but I think that acacia will be happy she gave birth after all no matter how big the Kings dick is it can't be as big as a baby's torso
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2017, 01:42:06 PM
For when Rose is given her first ride from King Kilgrav

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2130597
It won't quite be that way, she's not going to have that much freedom of movement (yes, I have that planned) when he takes her.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2017, 01:57:52 PM
The hook clan grip her clit in memory of griphooks and give her a memory she won't forget
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1551430
I could see them considering something like that, and treating Harry's cock and balls in a similar manner, but I don't believe they intend to be that gentle with Rose, or Harry, when they have the opportunity.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 14, 2017, 02:20:13 PM
For when Rose is given her first ride from King Kilgrav

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2130597
It won't quite be that way, she's not going to have that much freedom of movement (yes, I have that planned) when he takes her.

Looking forward to seeing what you have planned. Is life treating you any better in regards to the job search/writing situation?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2017, 07:50:25 PM
Both are proceeding apace (though the writing seems to take forever to get what I want).  I suppose I'm fortunate in that I'm old enough to be semi-retired (SSI et al.); that eases the job search pressure.  I will promise that the next chapter will contain a (comparatively) brief history of Rose/Harry's sexual life before servitude; Rose particularly has not had it that easy but she hasn't seen some of what T1p2 has Acacia seeing, either.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 07:07:14 AM
Both are proceeding apace (though the writing seems to take forever to get what I want).  I suppose I'm fortunate in that I'm old enough to be semi-retired (SSI et al.); that eases the job search pressure.  I will promise that the next chapter will contain a (comparatively) brief history of Rose/Harry's sexual life before servitude; Rose particularly has not had it that easy but she hasn't seen some of what T1p2 has Acacia seeing, either.

I get what you mean about the writing. i tried to write a small challenge fanfic like how Slyfer101 did with Goblin Debt but i am not very happy with it .
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even thought I edited a few time the spelling and grammar are not very good.

still i think its ok considering I  had to turn this
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into this
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not to mention the i can work out how to add multiple character to the story discription

and  the version of Goblin debt I tried to write. I will properly get back to it i am just having writer block about start of the story
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 07:19:22 AM
and know i am trying to to this into chapter 2

Spoiler (click to show/hide)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 08:39:10 AM
My biggest problem if that i keep telling the reader what is happening instead of showing but i am not sure how to fix that

and it seems to be a problem in everything i write
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 09:01:46 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=207040&pid=10

Daphne special trunk compartment that she is saving for
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 10:11:32 AM
a goblin admiring the result of over Acacia/roses time with his clan thanks to increasing  butt plug size over her time there she is now off to undergo a healing ritual so she doesn't literally need a plug like they promised she would when she first came to him clan.
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3243063
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 10:53:17 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2154619
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 10:56:16 AM
a goblin on Acacais back useing her useing her tit to change direction

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=864029
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 10:57:57 AM
a trip to the markets

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1017446
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 11:24:04 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2015773
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 02:01:22 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2963011
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2017, 02:04:46 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3015830
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 15, 2017, 02:13:41 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2963011
Hmm, as a basis for a punishment for Rose, or Harry, no sensations from other than their piercings or their genitalia, along with a variety of stimulation for both?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 16, 2017, 03:59:43 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=209450
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 16, 2017, 04:00:00 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=864030
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 16, 2017, 04:03:52 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2058260
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 16, 2017, 07:12:00 AM
for harry


http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3018929
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 16, 2017, 08:25:55 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=864030
I could see something like this for Rose, possibly with chains pulling on her nipple rings, too.  For Harry, chains on his nipple rings and one pulling on the split rings serving as a glans ring on his cock or one pulling on the split rings stretching his balls (or add a chain separating his balls and pull on that).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 16, 2017, 08:26:45 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2058260
That's definitely something nasty to do to Rose/Harry if the really misbehaved.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 16, 2017, 09:08:11 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2958956
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 16, 2017, 04:07:56 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2958956
Well, that's a bit much for the goblin environment, though I could see elements of that applied if they really wanted to humiliate and punish Rose/Harry.  I would expect Harry would get a very large diameter vibrating urethal sound slid up his cock; though I could see a long, large diameter electrode for electro-stim, particularly one that also covered the head of his cock, being slid up there instead.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 17, 2017, 09:59:45 AM
Bathing Your Slave, by Senior Teller Daggerok.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1845062

How Slipknot washes a slave's potty mouth.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2693482

When some of the DE Daughters are enslaved, Rose will have some company on display days.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2764796
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2017, 10:14:39 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=271617
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2017, 11:57:33 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2192295
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 17, 2017, 02:08:13 PM
Proper safety gear for when Rose/Acacia/Harry are working the mines...

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2346631
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 17, 2017, 07:02:41 PM
Proper safety gear for when Rose/Acacia/Harry are working the mines...

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2346631
Needs some work, that body harness really needs to wrap around her breasts more.  That and a hard hat would complete the ensemble.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2017, 01:41:45 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2880021
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2017, 01:45:41 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2199327
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2017, 01:51:33 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3288734
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2017, 02:00:03 PM
the hook clan
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1321085&pid=10
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2017, 02:08:54 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2530530
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 18, 2017, 05:20:28 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2530530
That one has potential, especially when combined with some other means of stimulation.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 18, 2017, 05:21:09 PM
the hook clan
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1321085&pid=10
Actually, that's too gentle for what I see them trying to do to her/him and then doing to Rose/Harry when that fails.  Unfortunately, that will only set them up for a greater fall as they were not as discrete as they thought.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 02:59:17 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2880594
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 10:46:18 AM
I think this one might but a repost but it is just so Fitting

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2220409
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 10:53:54 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2199328
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 11:02:44 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2806514

A Goblin  wants a Hot Chocolate milk shake
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 11:04:34 AM
I goblin get rose with Itching powder

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1782194
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2017, 11:49:10 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=773651
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 19, 2017, 01:49:05 PM
I goblin get rose with Itching powder

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1782194
Vaginally applied, of course.  It could get interesting, though, if it was also applied, either as a powder or a liquid, to her nipples, particularly if those nipples were clamped.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 19, 2017, 10:05:48 PM
I'm still working on the next chapters, but what I have completed has been beta'd, so that should speed matters up when I finish.  I'm already working on elements of the following chapters.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 02:34:40 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887114

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887121
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 05:11:16 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1661041

The smell of roasted meat, while touching someone with a cold bar you told them to be scalding hot, gives them the sensation of being burned even when they're not.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 05:13:07 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=749951
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 21, 2017, 11:28:55 AM
I'm still working on the next chapters, but what I have completed has been beta'd, so that should speed matters up when I finish.  I'm already working on elements of the following chapters.

So does that mean we can expect an update in the next few days? I'm eager to see what you've come up with.

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3469276

A new kind of spit roast
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 01:07:03 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=950121
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 01:09:28 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1017448
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 21, 2017, 01:27:20 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1914109
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 21, 2017, 02:16:55 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1914109

Ah, Seikon no Qwaser. One of the Great Classics...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 21, 2017, 04:08:53 PM
I'm still working on the next chapters, but what I have completed has been beta'd, so that should speed matters up when I finish.  I'm already working on elements of the following chapters.

So does that mean we can expect an update in the next few days? I'm eager to see what you've come up with.
In about a week, I need to finish the last bits off and get them beta'd.  I'd say I'm at least 3/4's done and progressing steadily, if not quickly.  The fun part is wrapping my mind around the changes I want to introduce and how to best do those.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 10:36:21 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2669477
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:02:15 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2645469
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:04:48 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2547663
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:05:55 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1554118
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:08:29 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3345694
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:15:50 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2447561
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:17:07 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2276715
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:22:36 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2945941
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:24:28 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3363592
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:27:10 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1514184
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:27:23 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1574302
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2017, 11:35:10 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=396742
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 23, 2017, 05:54:10 AM
Would a goblin  fill her ass and pussy/uterus with coins so that when he fuckes her he can hear the coins jumping around like when you shake a piggy bank.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 23, 2017, 05:21:26 PM
Would a goblin  fill her ass and pussy/uterus with coins so that when he fuckes her he can hear the coins jumping around like when you shake a piggy bank.
I could see that for a witch they completely disrespected (some of the Death Eater daughters come to mind) but I don't see them treating Rose that way.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 25, 2017, 01:14:01 PM
Would a goblin  fill her ass and pussy/uterus with coins so that when he fuckes her he can hear the coins jumping around like when you shake a piggy bank.
I could see that for a witch they completely disrespected (some of the Death Eater daughters come to mind) but I don't see them treating Rose that way.
On top of that, the coins would hurt their own cocks just as much as much as the intended slaves.
As a punishment for some foolish slave sneaking gold (Pansy or Hestia/Flora Carrow for example)? I could see them doing that, minus the fucking.
How goes the writing cateagle? Still on track for an update this week?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2992503

Another possible means of display for one of Rose's 'viewing' days.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 25, 2017, 07:48:38 PM
Given the progress I've made since that last posting, let's make that two weeks  :(  I know how and where I want to take the chapter, but getting the words to flow is something else entirely.

Oh, and what I have in mind for the viewing could be more mortifying; particularly since 'twill be the day after the birthday of Rose/Harry and they will be somewhat sore from the "festivities".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 26, 2017, 06:11:13 PM
Given the progress I've made since that last posting, let's make that two weeks  :(  I know how and where I want to take the chapter, but getting the words to flow is something else entirely.

Oh, and what I have in mind for the viewing could be more mortifying; particularly since 'twill be the day after the birthday of Rose/Harry and they will be somewhat sore from the "festivities".

I get what you mean about writing i feel a bit stuck when it comes to writing. this story
http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/viewstory.php?sid=1776

now that the girls actually have harry i don't really know what I want to have them do to him. iI have stuff planed for later but the time in which they have him leading up to the Yule ball has me a bit stuck.

I guess I will just concentrate on the interlude chapter that covers harry first two years of school that i have going till I get some ideas.

In of you have ideas to give on what the girls will do to harry just say and i will make a thread for that story

Edit: heres the thread link
http://www.ficforums.com/index.php/topic,58161.0.html
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 31, 2017, 10:58:34 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=871572

Slave got dirty in the mines, needs to be cleaned up for King Kilgrav tonight.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 31, 2017, 11:41:34 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=871572

Slave got dirty in the mines, needs to be cleaned up for King Kilgrav tonight.
That's a possibility that might get used, though likely not to prepare Rose/Harry for King Kilgrav or his senior wife but rather for the head of some clan (not Hook, they wouldn't be that nice).  No promises, though.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 04:38:57 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3052000
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 04:40:43 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2880021
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 04:42:00 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=632093
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 05:48:11 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=206261
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 05:48:42 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=244873
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 01, 2017, 10:30:42 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=632093
Mayhaps something similar from one of the clans more antagonistically inclined toward Rose/Harry.  I make no promises.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 01, 2017, 10:35:36 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=244873
I could see this in the mines, possibly Rose/Harry as overseer of a couple female slaves; responsible for their performance and receiving any punishments along with them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 01, 2017, 12:28:10 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=206261
I could see this for Rose/Harry digging in the mines with hardhat and body harness; possibly as overseer of a couple of other witch slaves and suffering any punishments they earn with them.  I can't see the goblins needing to fuel any kind of large furnace, though.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 01, 2017, 03:32:51 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2702438

Something one of the other clans might come up with perhaps?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2694611

I could see Daggerok using this as a training method...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 04:41:18 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2702438

Something one of the other clans might come up with perhaps?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2694611

I could see Daggerok using this as a training method...

The buttplug  in the first one that vibrates in responses to the humiliation of the person wearing it  could also be used with a cursed that makes it  so she can only orgasm from the plug.

 so the golbins could train her to  achieve orgasm threw Humilation.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 06:01:25 PM
A activatable feature of the collar could be a mode were she can only achieve  Orgasm threw Humiliation.

So as a Punishment The goblin could make it so she has to achieve 20 orgasm threw humiliation.

and as train have them use A buttplug that Vibrates in response to the wearer humiliation and then have the goblins swapping it for one that she has to want to vibrate with out telling her. so she starts to want to be humiliated.

during the train they would keep switching between plug so she could not catch on to the fact they were swapping them
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 06:14:55 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1868437

i think that this one and the ones Slyfer101 linked come from Vanquished Queens which is an ova of Queen's Blade
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 01, 2017, 07:37:44 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2702438

Something one of the other clans might come up with perhaps?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2694611

I could see Daggerok using this as a training method...
What kind of files are these?  My computer shows them as unsupported files or invalid ones. :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 08:34:20 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2702438

Something one of the other clans might come up with perhaps?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2694611

I could see Daggerok using this as a training method...
What kind of files are these?  My computer shows them as unsupported files or invalid ones. :(
i am not sure but both are from this anime which is surprising not a hentia
https://myanimelist.net/anime/16363/Vanquished_Queens
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 08:40:22 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2111162
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 01, 2017, 11:14:05 PM
here is part of what Slyfer101 like in gif form from the same sight

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2235694

its Buttplug tail that reaches around to the clit that vibrates in responses to the wearers humiliation and slowly transforms to vibrate when they feel pleasure serving


http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=queen%27s_blade_vanquished_queens
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 01, 2017, 11:29:55 PM
Hmm, might be an interesting DVD to acquire.  Some of these might show up with some of the clans, I'm not certain yet.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 02, 2017, 06:42:45 AM
http://queensblade.wikia.com/wiki/Warrior_Slavery

The relevant part

a nether world parasite, the Swamp Witch tells her that she will now be her servant. Against her will, the other servants force Leina to clean a plate with her mouth, but she fights back. In response, the white parasite attached to her begins to vibrate. The servants, who also have parasites attached to them, began to clean the plates, as Leina helplessly watches on. Deeper into the ship, Leina walks on all fours, tethered by a collar to the Swamp Witch, who notes that, the harder Leina resists, the more humiliation she is subjected to, which in turn powers her parasite. Even through the vibrations, Leina tries in vain to attack the Swamp Witch, but is thrown back to the ground and consequently whipped in front of the skeletal pirates by one of the Swamp Witch’s servants. The Swamp Witch informs Leina, whose parasite has now turned black, will no longer sense humiliation and will now sense the joy she has to serve her master, and converting that joy into pleasure.


I have been referring to the  Parasite as a buttplug in  posts above

the goblins could add a similar effect like the  Parasite as a feature of the collar.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 02, 2017, 10:57:10 AM
I can see some of that being attempted by some of the more hostile clans, but I don't expect the majority of them to treat Rose/Harry that way.  Now, I can see some of the Death Eaters, or Death Eater offspring, in indentured servitude being treated like that for reasons I've already made evident.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 02, 2017, 03:38:45 PM
Idea for somewhere in the story, a female goblin gets Rose/Harry off with a "foot job" and then makes her/him lick her feet clean; could also be multiple female goblins.  Conceivably, could also be male goblins doing Rose.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 02, 2017, 04:19:33 PM
Idea for somewhere in the story, a female goblin gets Rose/Harry off with a "foot job" and then makes her/him lick her feet clean; could also be multiple female goblins.  Conceivably, could also be male goblins doing Rose.

So rose would be polishing the goblins boots with her pussy?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 02, 2017, 04:52:01 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2694611

I could see Daggerok using this as a training method...
I finally downloaded the viewer for this particular format and had a chance to watch this and the other one.

Not Daggerok or his clan, but I could see some other clan using something like this on Rose, or on Harry.  It would probably be a clan that strongly disliked wizards and their ilk for some reason.  Daggerok will have his own reasons for not using something like this.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 02, 2017, 04:53:00 PM
Idea for somewhere in the story, a female goblin gets Rose/Harry off with a "foot job" and then makes her/him lick her feet clean; could also be multiple female goblins.  Conceivably, could also be male goblins doing Rose.

So rose would be polishing the goblins boots with her pussy?
Possibly, if I write this one in.  No promises at this point.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 03, 2017, 05:03:04 AM
If you're interested in getting some more ideas from Queen's Blade, cat, here's a link to a site with all of the various OVAs/series/specials to date.

https://9anime.to/watch/queens-blade-grimoire.n4jm

BTW, how goes the chapter? Are we any closer to a release date yet?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 03, 2017, 05:22:08 AM
Queens blade has a character that is a goblin slave in it
http://queensblade.wikia.com/wiki/Branwen
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 07, 2017, 12:24:24 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=67857
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 07, 2017, 04:49:42 PM
Had a thought about Rose/Acacia receiving 'captured warrior' status. As time goes on, she might earn some respect from a few of the more moderate clans, and be taught goblin ways of fighting. Maybe even entered in some kind of gladitorial event, with prizes to the winning clan and maybe some small creature comforts for her as a reward for doing well.

Of course, if she's fighting other seasoned warriors, she'd need 'armor' of some kind, so given the constant reminders of 'Queen's Blade' we've been getting, I thought this would be appropriate.

http://lisa-lou-who.deviantart.com/art/Leina-Queen-s-Blade-Cosplay-509659709

Sexy, revealing, and protective. With no need for underwear of any kind, so when its over she'd not waste her master's time getting naked again.

Thoughts?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 08, 2017, 08:55:28 PM
Had a thought about Rose/Acacia receiving 'captured warrior' status. As time goes on, she might earn some respect from a few of the more moderate clans, and be taught goblin ways of fighting. Maybe even entered in some kind of gladitorial event, with prizes to the winning clan and maybe some small creature comforts for her as a reward for doing well.

Of course, if she's fighting other seasoned warriors, she'd need 'armor' of some kind, so given the constant reminders of 'Queen's Blade' we've been getting, I thought this would be appropriate.

http://lisa-lou-who.deviantart.com/art/Leina-Queen-s-Blade-Cosplay-509659709

Sexy, revealing, and protective. With no need for underwear of any kind, so when its over she'd not waste her master's time getting naked again.

Thoughts?
I could see that from some of the more moderate clans (given how I intend to portray Daggerok's son, more of a slacker than Ron Weasley, that clan might side with the moderates) doing just that.  That will be a ways off, though, but I can definitely see that possibly happening (much the same for Harry as for Rose, too).  I need to move things through several more chapters before I get to that, though.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 08, 2017, 11:20:20 PM
BTW, how goes the chapter? Are we any closer to a release date yet?
Getting there much more slowly than I'd like; seems like "two steps forward, one step back" but I am making progress.  Both Rose and Harry will have a somewhat different history than canon and I'm showing some aspects of that in this chapter; more will be shown next chapter.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 09, 2017, 06:15:29 AM
If you want a back storie to show that there was already a female goblin slave there before Rose/ harry you could use this.

The Tragic life of pansy Parkinson

Pansy naive girl that was from a young pureblood family looking to climb the social  ladder. she as a child dreamed that when she got to Hogwarts thought some young handsome pureblood prince would sweep her off her feet and they would life happily ever after it was not to be.In her first year she thought she got her wish when she fell into Draco Malfoy group of associates. For her first year she was living the dream apart from what happened at the end of year feast.

In her second year Pansy was so enamoured  with the Malofy heir that she allowed her family and Malsoy Sr to put her up as collateral for Draco in order for him to get onto the Slytherin team she had that much faith in him.After they lost she got Gangbanged by the team to teach Draco a lesson.She thought Draco or her family would protect her but after the whole of Slytherin watched the quidditch team make her air tight the bride price family's were offering for her went up.

In third year she got knocked up but that was just taken as prove that she could produce healthy heirs. The child was adapted by another pureblood family that was struggling to conceive. In her fourth year she is put into a marriage contract with a Slytherin alumni   who was know to be a bit of a sadistic who loved hearing about how Pansy was humiliated and degraded.


threw the rest of her years at Hogwarts she would go on to produce 3 more children that were all adapted by Pureblood family's she would have lots of degrading and humiliating things done to her for her betrothed amusement  she would  go on to get married before her seventh year . she would produce an heir with in her seventh year. and then afterwards her husband would begin whoring her out again for flavors and for his amusement.
Her Husband would go on to die in the battle of Hogwarts Pansy thought her nightmare was over and she would be able to have a nice quiet like living off the rest of her dead husbands fortune raising her child but she would later find who that her Husband had been in debt with the goblins. she would be taken as a goblin slave to cover his debts.

No one would come to her add in paying off the debt so she would give her child to her Parents to raise and would go and begin her servitude to pay off her Deceased husbands debts that would take her 60 years.


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 09, 2017, 07:18:29 PM
That's a possibility and I'll think about it (be amusing if Rose/Harry encountered such a Pansy inside goblin territory).  One thing I won't do is make such a slave one of Rose/Harry's trainers (they will all be goblins to properly train her/him), that would be a bit much IMHO.  It could be interesting if Rose/Harry had a higher ranking among the slaves than Pansy did, that would really drive Pansy's humiliation in.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 09, 2017, 08:34:34 PM
That's a possibility and I'll think about it (be amusing if Rose/Harry encountered such a Pansy inside goblin territory).  One thing I won't do is make such a slave one of Rose/Harry's trainers (they will all be goblins to properly train her/him), that would be a bit much IMHO.  It could be interesting if Rose/Harry had a higher ranking among the slaves than Pansy did, that would really drive Pansy's humiliation in.

Pansy by the time that Haryy/Rose ran into her would probably be quite broken.

Mabye when rose first see what's happened to Pansy she fell satisfaction but as she finds out Pansys story she starts to feel sympathy.

In the books it was said that pansy had a pug like nose so maybe the goblins will make her bark like a dog

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 10, 2017, 03:30:53 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1970960
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 10, 2017, 03:38:16 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1554056
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 10, 2017, 03:42:03 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=812690
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 10, 2017, 03:48:23 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2147890
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2147888
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 10, 2017, 04:49:25 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2147890
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2147888
This could be done with Harry, using the split collar glans ring to hold the head of his cock out of the hole.  Not sure if any clan will do it, though, but it is an idea.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 10, 2017, 06:02:34 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1554056
Now that is intense.  I may have the female goblins from one clan do that with Harry; the split collars on his cock and balls would make that all the more intense.  I could also see something similarly intense being down to Rose, though I'm not yet sure of just what would be done to her (got ideas, though).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 10, 2017, 06:41:40 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1554056
Now that is intense.  I may have the female goblins from one clan do that with Harry; the split collars on his cock and balls would make that all the more intense.  I could also see something similarly intense being down to Rose, though I'm not yet sure of just what would be done to her (got ideas, though).

For Rose I would say something like this would be possible with magic
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012

the goblins could put an enchanted golem instead of something mechanical
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 10, 2017, 11:04:58 PM
I was thinking more of Rose being similarly bound and spread horizontally and giving oral pleasure to one goblin (male or female) while her sex and ass are similarly being worked over as well as the whip and wax seen in this picture.  It would be an open question as to whether implements are being used on her sex and ass or male members.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 11, 2017, 01:50:29 AM
I was thinking more of Rose being similarly bound and spread horizontally and giving oral pleasure to one goblin (male or female) while her sex and ass are similarly being worked over as well as the whip and wax seen in this picture.  It would be an open question as to whether implements are being used on her sex and ass or male members.

what about the triple penetration device that they are using to hold it in?

http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887113&pool_id=42939
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1887116&pool_id=42939
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888009&pool_id=42939
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 11, 2017, 04:49:04 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1603056

A different kind of 'sexy armor' for Rose in the arena...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 11, 2017, 05:12:55 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1603056

A different kind of 'sexy armor' for Rose in the arena...
The groin armor is a possibility, I'd want better protection for the breasts, though.  I wonder  how she'd fight with the groin armor holding vibrators in her sex and ass?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 11, 2017, 08:39:21 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1603056

A different kind of 'sexy armor' for Rose in the arena...
The groin armor is a possibility, I'd want better protection for the breasts, though.  I wonder  how she'd fight with the groin armor holding vibrators in her sex and ass?

that is why she is doing the funny dance in the gif the person who has the remote turned on the vibrators
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 12, 2017, 02:27:09 AM
Here is a scene that u thought up that you could adapt for Harry.

In the wizarding world virgin sacrifices are. A real Thing so when Harry is a Virgin in his  fourth year his virgin blood boosted how strong Voldemort was.thanks to an old law Harry gets arrested for boosting the power of a ritual by being virgin and as punishment the ministry auction off his virginity to the highest bidder. At the auction were Harry is in on a stage naked Infront of the crowd the girls start bidding eventual the hogwarts girl team up together to win and then they work out who gets him first.

To make it fair for all girls that put him in cockring that won't allow him to orgasm because according to the law he is still a Virgin till he cums in a girl.then they move to a stage in the centre of diagon alley were each of the girls take turns fucking Harry to they feel satisfied with the crowd watching. Eventually after each girl has had there turn they send forth the girl who they are going to let him orgasm in Daphne greengrass. As Harry is fucking Daphne one of the girls get up of stage and says that they will now be selling a turn with Harry for a sickle.

Harry uses accidental magic to make it so they the head of his cock won't leave Daphne makeing it so  her and Harry to have go threw there fifth year connect together.

Threw the time the girls have been fucking Harry he has undergone mind break . At night Harry's naked. Body would be left hanging chained on the stage in the diagon alley town square.

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 12, 2017, 08:21:34 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1603056

A different kind of 'sexy armor' for Rose in the arena...
The groin armor is a possibility, I'd want better protection for the breasts, though.  I wonder  how she'd fight with the groin armor holding vibrators in her sex and ass?

that is why she is doing the funny dance in the gif the person who has the remote turned on the vibrators
Ah, I think I'd leave them at one setting at first, only going to varying the setting once she's trained on the fixed ones.  Having gone through that in training, I daresay anything there won't affect her much, if at all, in actual combat.  For Harry, I'd think a codpiece with vibrators on his cockhead and balls as well as one up his ass.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 13, 2017, 09:18:54 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1056755

For harry
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 13, 2017, 02:41:16 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1056755

For harry
Might use something like this for the actual auction of Harry after training.  Likely will do something similar for Rose (perhaps a double hook in her pussy and ass tied up the back like this).  Instead of rope, I might also consider a body harness of some kind on the torso with straps/chains to the hooks in Rose or the split collars at the base of Harry's cock and balls.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 14, 2017, 09:23:34 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1131669
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 14, 2017, 09:30:01 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1453285&pid=10
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 14, 2017, 04:30:18 PM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1131669
*chuckle* I could see one of the goblin clans that didn't care for wizards doing this to Harry; not certain what the equivalent for Rose would be (perhaps with her tits through the wall and getting hit while a goblin takes her ass and forces her down on an overly large dildo?).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on February 14, 2017, 07:27:51 PM
when is the update going to be.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 15, 2017, 09:42:26 PM
when is the update going to be.
*sigh* Whenever my muse hangs around long enough for me to finish the chapter.  It's getting there, but slowly as my muse seems quite flighty.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 16, 2017, 02:13:32 AM
What seems to be holding you back the most? Maybe we can offer some inspiration.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 16, 2017, 01:49:50 PM
What seems to be holding you back the most? Maybe we can offer some inspiration.
No one thing; I've got plenty of inspiration and I know where I'm going, it's more a matter of time and mood for writing after a day of job hunting.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 18, 2017, 06:54:18 PM
Just as a bit of a hint of what's in the chapter, I'm taking some inspiration from Andrew Joshua Talon's That Boy Is Trouble on FFN and Seel'vor's Harry's Notebook which is available in the files of his Yahoo Group and in the files of the 3_or_4_Part_Harmony Yahoo Group.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 08:31:12 AM
If a group of witches were to get hold of canon Harry in his fourth year and they were s&m inclined what do you think they would do to him?

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 08:53:31 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1659052
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 08:54:46 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1667153
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 09:03:15 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1323952
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 19, 2017, 05:19:17 PM
If a group of witches were to get hold of canon Harry in his fourth year and they were s&m inclined what do you think they would do to him?
It depends.  Are they doing an interrogation or a punishment?  I can see distinctly different s&m actions for each purpose.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 06:06:14 PM
If a group of witches were to get hold of canon Harry in his fourth year and they were s&m inclined what do you think they would do to him?
It depends.  Are they doing an interrogation or a punishment?  I can see distinctly different s&m actions for each purpose.

I think punish him for perceived wrongs against them.

What sort of makeover spells would you have the, do on him so far I plan for them to wax all hair bellow the neck after they shave his public hair by hand.a spell for nails and a spell for his skin to fix any blemishes and non curses scars.



Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 19, 2017, 08:41:58 PM
For punishment?  An enchanted cockring at the base of his cock and balls to give him a permanent, but physiologically safe, straining erection and also prevents an orgasm, a humbler, an armbinder, weighted clover clamps on his male nipples, a vibrating, or otherwise stimulating, butt plug that works on his prostate and either a ball gag and blindfold or a full hood.  Once he's fitted out like that, leave him for a few hours before coming back to taunt him or otherwise have fun with him.

If they were feeling really vindictive, they'd brand both ass cheeks.

An interrogation, on the other hand, would involve a lot of other activities and positions.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 19, 2017, 09:40:20 PM
For punishment?  An enchanted cockring at the base of his cock and balls to give him a permanent, but physiologically safe, straining erection and also prevents an orgasm, a humbler, an armbinder, weighted clover clamps on his male nipples, a vibrating, or otherwise stimulating, butt plug that works on his prostate and either a ball gag and blindfold or a full hood.  Once he's fitted out like that, leave him for a few hours before coming back to taunt him or otherwise have fun with him.

If they were feeling really vindictive, they'd brand both ass cheeks.

An interrogation, on the other hand, would involve a lot of other activities and positions.
this is the first three chapters
http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/viewstory.php?sid=1776

If I ever rewrite the the story will probely merge the first four chapters into one

the plan for the story is to make it a F+/mf story with harry and one of the Slytherins being the subs two and two of the Slytherin girls being the Doms.

I would eventual get the groups of girls from the different houses and the french student involved but keeping the core group as Astoria, Tracey, Daphne and Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 20, 2017, 06:49:59 AM
I think this story has a very good aftercare seen in it. Shame it was only a oneshot
https://archiveofourown.org/works/3585918?view_adult=true

Makes me want to rewrite my story to have Harry accidentally watch the girls under his clock and then Be caught and the agree to be there sub for a period of time as punishment with safe word and the like but then to the girls and Harry's surprise he really gets into it and becomes and permanent part of the Slytherin girls a polyamorous relationship.

Maybe have it that him start off as a voyeur that watched the, for a time under the cloak and then have him get caught in fourth year. leading to him letting himself be caught by Astoria with Gabrielle being there by accident bringing in the French girls when it was only supposed to be the Slytherin girl that caught him
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 20, 2017, 05:03:35 PM
I agree on that story, I have it marked as a favorite on AO3 and I love the name of the club in that story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 21, 2017, 09:45:38 AM
If harry were to be a voyeur wandering the castle at night under his cloak accidentally or otherwise what are some of the things you think he might see?

I need some idea on what Harry might see wandering the castle at night of hogwarts underground sex seen.

Mainly for second year because I plain for him to in third year start useing the map to watch a specific group that then catches him leading to them blackmailing him into being sub for them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 21, 2017, 10:13:54 AM
If there was a prostitution corridor in hogwarts what house do you think most of the students would be from I am thinking Ravenclaw to get money to by more books?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 21, 2017, 10:41:48 AM
Lol I wounder if filtch has a business were he rents the unused Hogwarts dungeon equipment out to people and that is why he is alway doing maintenance on it?



Could there be students who should really be expelled but they bribe flitch to look the other way.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 22, 2017, 08:46:53 AM
make rose do that but in a Hogwarts uniform
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/597143
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 22, 2017, 03:33:52 PM
make rose do that but in a Hogwarts uniform
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/597143
Perhaps even a smaller than appropriate Hogwarts uniform, say, that of a second year?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 22, 2017, 10:40:46 PM
make rose do that but in a Hogwarts uniform
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/597143
Perhaps even a smaller than appropriate Hogwarts uniform, say, that of a second year?

Yep mabye have fleur make her wear a really small hogwarts uniform that has been edited to make sure it leave her pussy and ass half uncovered and then even thought they are uncovers some one like fleur make her hold it something like in this picture.

Mabye also have fleur while she is in it refer to her as the tri-wizard champion
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 24, 2017, 10:37:13 PM
I could see that, though I could also see Rose spread-eagled vertically and bound with these signs around her, including the notice of being the winner of the Tri-Wizard Tournament.  If she and Hermione were to side with Ginny prior to the wedding, I could see that adding to the animosity (though, to be fair, the way the story is trending now, Ginny will not be on the "favored people" list of either Rose, Harry, or Hermione (in either story)).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 25, 2017, 01:54:52 AM
I could see that, though I could also see Rose spread-eagled vertically and bound with these signs around her, including the notice of being the winner of the Tri-Wizard Tournament.  If she and Hermione were to side with Ginny prior to the wedding, I could see that adding to the animosity (though, to be fair, the way the story is trending now, Ginny will not be on the "favored people" list of either Rose, Harry, or Hermione (in either story)).

I am looking forwards to what you make Fleur do to her
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 25, 2017, 10:12:47 AM
I am looking forwards to what you make Fleur do to her
I have some ideas that should make for good entertainment; Fleur will definitely be taking out her issues with Rose when the time comes (on the flip side, the same events with Harry will be good entertainment and not allowing him to fall into the hands of a veela who really hates, with just cause, wizards).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 25, 2017, 12:58:07 PM
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9149038/1/

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9287174/1/Pansy-s-Pet
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 25, 2017, 01:03:59 PM
https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9817651/1/A-Little-Extra-Help
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 26, 2017, 10:31:52 PM
Interesting trio of stories; though I'm not at all certain I'll take that route.  In any case, that's well into the future of either story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 28, 2017, 04:47:48 AM
I don't suppose you can give us an update as to where you are in the chapter can you?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 28, 2017, 10:14:40 PM
I don't suppose you can give us an update as to where you are in the chapter can you?
Making progress slowly (real life keeps getting in the way).  I'd put it at 85% done with some 2/3 already beta'd.  It covers a lot of background as well as setting up some things for the next chapter.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 01, 2017, 12:37:23 AM
http://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=862281
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 03, 2017, 06:26:56 PM
http://badatsports.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/cata7.jpg

Rose during a rare private moment, looking at one of the many keeps of her masters deep in the caves of Tirith Ungol.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 04, 2017, 09:59:54 PM
http://badatsports.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/08/cata7.jpg

Rose during a rare private moment, looking at one of the many keeps of her masters deep in the caves of Tirith Ungol.
Perhaps looking over the main city from the keep, high on the outside wall of the main cavern, of the clan currently in control of her?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 09, 2017, 08:51:37 PM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/2239092

The goblin could also use a buttplug that is small enough that rose has to always consentrat to make sure it doesn't slip out like the story above
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 10, 2017, 06:06:23 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/CoaX/491676/Fetish-Model-Sheet
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 10, 2017, 06:06:43 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/xxoom/493514/Slaves-in-Dungeon
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 10, 2017, 06:07:01 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/grandchaosSR/494807/Commission-Michelle-X-Heather
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: raw666 on March 10, 2017, 11:22:21 PM
Though on plot:
1) Since the goblins are calling into debt of Death Eater survivors for what happen to the goblins, how many will be pleasure slaves and others be just slaves doing jobs Goblins don't want to do are extremely dangerous? Where the females like Pansy or Necassa (though given Malfoy's can pay off their debt, maybe not her specifically) are used as pleasure slaves on worst levels then Rose/Harry while rest are workers that are too demeaning for pleasure slave, or extremely dangerous (working in establishing/unstable mines or around dangerous animals)? I ask for they truly the worst of the lot the goblins would take out their harsher punishments plans out on over Rose who wins their respect, and some of their sympathy as seen in earlier chapters, though she wouldn't get out of sex but it would be more pleasurable for Rose then painful with some/most clans and seeing the other would make her a bit greatful. While the more ugly ones or those that have little, well anything in the way of sex I don't see the goblins waste time other then work them until they drop. An example is Lucus Malfoy in a story called Harry Potter and the Champion's Champion https://www.fanfiction.net/s/5483280/1/Harry-Potter-and-the-Champion-s-Champion

2) Another is through confidential agreements, the Goblins sell the rights to breed Rose (and Harry) with another magical race to gain an alliance, specifically with one race that would want her for saving one of their own and sensing her power. I mean we don't know exactly a full blooded veela since they are an all female race, so what if they are created by one or both ways?. Through magical connections of joining, they impregnated compatible powerful females (humans or others) which lead to very fast, multiple at once pregnancy (a few months or more with as many children her body can handle with one per veela) which goblins/veela still play her with some care and make sure she keeps producing milk preeminently, and/or if the veela is part of another other species, make her a full veela through such an act, which are two favorite French Witches do Gabriel/Fuer. If its Harry, possibly Hermonie to fulfill the contract with Harry watch or just make the requirment it has to be someone magical powerful. Another is to have Harry with another magical creatures that are always born a certain species like the Asari from Mass Effect, possibly Merpeople or Harpies as a choice.

3) How big will the goblin population be? In original story, they made them out to be highly populated which doesn't make sense for such a large population that could easily crush the Wizarding World, it makes me wonder why don't they and claim the survivors as slaves as they could do it easily, if they even care as the death of six goblins would mean little, unless one was a high ruler or king? A smaller population with low fertility rates, or just limited space to force a control population would make more sense and why it such a big deal to get Rose/Harry must pay the price to save face for the Nation and not to appear weaker then Wizards that just went through brutal Civil War, which lead to an interesting story interaction and why the Secret Clause added.

4) What is your ultimate plan for the Crowwork's Hook Clan and will you take a suggestion about them? Because I was thinking, what if the Hook Clan knew about Horcux but due to a promise help to take over the Goblin Nation as their new leaders, and to be warriors again instead of bankers the wizards finally declare war on Muggles as valued front-line troops (cannon fodder in reality but they didn't know that at the time)? So they helped the Dark Lord Voldemort with Griphook a double agent to get Rose/Harry there to turn the Goblin Nation pro Voldemort and eaiser to make the King to die at that time, or later through muggle treachery. Hence why they are angry that Rose/Harry spoiled years of planning that day and killed their best operative. It would lead to a interesting plot where Rose/Harry is help uncover the plot or told when the goblins find out on their own through Death Eater slaves, and Harry/Rose is used to perform a sing like operation for the Goblin Nation to expose the traitors and due to her efforts is given the choice of ending her/his service early for her aid, which she protests at first before leading to three conclusions:
1. She/he is convinced to leave after a year and a half of service, hooks up with Hermonie and the story ends on a happy note, maybe even given a gift by the Goblins that allow Rose to have childern and keep control of her family's bloodline and head of family, leading to Potters being only females for a couple of generations.
2. She insist she to complete her service due to her sense of honor of completing a contract and story continues until her time is up or future plots and eventually lead to similar to first.
3. She/he leaves to find out about the marriage clause made Marriage Clause made by Dumbledore to the Weasly Clan that Molly conspired with and Ron/Ginny, who one or both without potion treatments given by Dumbledore to push such thought is revealed to be a Pureblood menace worst then Draco, tries to implement it to gain the Potter Family while claiming Hermoine as mudblood slave while Kingsly fight desperate new opsition from hidden Purest and those that escape justice. This ends with her appealing the Goblins to either help in getting both out through being made a slave to escape (female), to help escape the clause for the price of a certain betrayers as slaves (creative is the key of payment), or plan get rid of them hitman style.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: raw666 on March 11, 2017, 12:20:24 PM
Also three more perverse but not plot driven ideas:
1) When it comes to feeding, Rose/Harry are bound behind their back and told to eat the food (mostly pie or pudding) they have to eat like a seated animal within a small time window that will be taken away if she/he doesn't finish in time and left hungry. It also lead to more perverse as his/her master would then clean their face with their tongue while fondling their body and/or whipping them for causing a mess.

2) Rose/Harry a living plates that goblins or animals eat off slowly with Rose breast made to lactate to drink with goblins meal.  Imagine how he/she feel as living furniture as it goes further as made into a goblin's sitting chair as well while being petted sexually.

3) With some clans with Death Eater or other slaves, Harry/Rose is forced to punish them. With them being gentle charcters, it would be torture or pleasure if the right target is presented. For Rose, the chance to torture Malfoy would probably fill her delight. If they fail their task, then they are punished if Harry/Rose is too soft, or go too far as a clan or several train Harry/Rose to be not just a slave, but a head slave.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 17, 2017, 09:11:59 AM
My apologies to raw666 and everyone else.  I've been fighting a nasty bug the last two weeks and haven't really been able to write, let alone reply here. 

Once I'm feeling better, I will address raw666's comments as best I can without giving too much away.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 19, 2017, 10:39:43 AM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1892908
Edit:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=47971925
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 19, 2017, 10:40:04 AM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2619260
Edit:
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=61265521
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 19, 2017, 08:02:32 PM
Can you please give alternate URL's for those danbooru posts?  When I go there I get "this page cannot be displayed" and even going to the basic danbooru.donmai.us gets me the same result. :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 20, 2017, 05:04:27 AM
Can you please give alternate URL's for those danbooru posts?  When I go there I get "this page cannot be displayed" and even going to the basic danbooru.donmai.us gets me the same result. :(

there you go i hope the new links work
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 20, 2017, 10:55:34 AM
Thank you, those new links work much better.  Not sure I'll use either idea, but I'll keep them in mind.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 28, 2017, 05:55:45 PM
I can't remember if I mentioned it, but the new chapter of each story owes some inspiration to Andrew Joshua Talon's "That Boy is Trouble" and Seel'vor's "Harry's Notebook".  The first can be found on FFN while the second is in the files of his group on Yahoo as well as the "Three- or Four-Part Harmony" group on Yahoo.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:19:52 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Packaged-and-Caged-03-569498346
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:20:10 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/The-Secretary-Trap-19-532708832
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:20:25 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Packaged-and-Caged-02-569498338
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:20:42 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Packaged-and-Caged-09-574907560
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:22:27 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Tortured-Screaming-Women-39-475807697
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:28:18 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Wendy-Punished-By-Naughty-Nuala-1-576220488
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:28:37 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Packaged-and-Caged-05-570012209
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:31:00 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/They-Call-Me-Spanky-3-555906727
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:31:22 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Yulia-Gets-Used-08-555879612
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:31:49 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Halie-Helpless-1-534471467
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 02, 2017, 08:32:05 AM
http://forcemasterr.deviantart.com/art/Halie-Helpless-2-534471481
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 02, 2017, 09:18:10 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SanePerson/411009/A-different-kind-of-detention
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 02, 2017, 09:22:50 AM
any up date on how close you are to finishing the next chapter
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 02, 2017, 09:36:27 AM
Some interesting ideas there, especially the last two pictures.  We'll see whether I can incorporate something like that at some point (likely one of the more hostile clans).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 02, 2017, 09:42:46 AM
any up date on how close you are to finishing the next chapter
*Sigh!* Not really, that bug I had for most of March slowed things down considerably.  I've made progress, but then had to go back and clean up things that just didn't fit.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 02, 2017, 09:46:14 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SanePerson/411009/A-different-kind-of-detention
That could be an interesting way of punishing a slave Rose, or Harry, was overseeing.  Alternatively, if Rose/Harry did something wrong, being punished like this by either female goblins or female slaves could get "interesting".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 03, 2017, 01:23:13 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Disarten/499512/Twins-for-fun

A reason for the Goblins to enslave the Patil twins! (or any other pair of females).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 03, 2017, 01:25:51 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/BenMorbez/496848/Dwarven-pillory

a position for Rose or Harry while on the Auction Block!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 03, 2017, 01:27:19 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/xxoom/493514/Slaves-in-Dungeon
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 03, 2017, 01:31:38 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/499073/Suspended
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 03, 2017, 08:43:19 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/BenMorbez/496848/Dwarven-pillory

a position for Rose or Harry while on the Auction Block!
I think that might work very well, indeed.  I'll keep it in mind.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 03, 2017, 10:40:52 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/BenMorbez/427370/Sisters-on-sale-colored-by-HotTap

The Greengrass sisters on the Goblin auction block?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 03, 2017, 10:50:45 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/499073/Suspended
I saw that one when she posted it (I do follow her there) and thought that it might be the basis of a good goblin punishment scene, though with the base of each breast bound to the hanging rope, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 03, 2017, 10:51:55 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/BenMorbez/427370/Sisters-on-sale-colored-by-HotTap

The Greengrass sisters on the Goblin auction block?
I could see that.  Be amusing if the clan that got them already had Rose/Harry; the interactions could get rather interesting.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on April 05, 2017, 10:45:51 PM
is there any progress on the story?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 06, 2017, 09:16:53 AM
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=46320473
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 06, 2017, 11:22:11 AM
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=46320473
Interesting!  If I didn't already have festivities planned for birthday celebrations for Rose and/or Harry, I might consider that.  The planned festivities will be just as much fun, though.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 05:06:55 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/theironmountain/500096/Darkness-and-Goblins
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 05:08:47 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Kaihlan/489662/Reyn-green-bomb
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 05:14:19 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Xenium/462387/COM---Giddiyup-2
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 05:15:59 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Kataaoyoc/441887/Laila---The-Prisoner
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 05:18:57 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Squiggle/407578/Jinxie-Slutshine
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 07:08:20 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/tuhis/215363/New-ride-in-Faire
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 09, 2017, 07:09:06 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/Xenium/184905/Total-Invasion
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 09, 2017, 01:55:04 PM
Nice selection there, I haven't browsed HF near as much as I'd like to.  I don't know if I'll incorporate any of these ideas, though some seem more likely than others.

I should also take this opportunity to note that I missed a nod to an inspiration for parts of the chapters in work.  In addition to those I mentioned earlier, I need to thank Red Jacobson for the use of something from his Harry's Felix Felicis Holiday which can be found on this site and on Ficwad.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on April 09, 2017, 05:15:39 PM
So, can we infer from your acknowledgement of Red's fine works that an update is coming soon? We're all quivering in anticipation...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 09, 2017, 11:53:23 PM
Well, it's closer than it has been (I've had to go back and tweak things more than once).  I'm probably going to have the initial draft completed within the next couple weeks, or less - depending on muse's whims, and then off to a final round with my beta (he's seen 2/3-3/4 of it already, so that should be quick). Once I have it back, a final polish and the updates will be posted.  My acknowledgement of Red's works came when I realized where I had obtained one concept from, much as I've borrowed some concepts from the other works I've mentioned.  This update will include a lot of back history for Rose and/or Harry; there will be rather unflattering portrayals of the Dursleys.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 15, 2017, 07:13:36 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/Dood424/23979/The-Master/62996/Chapter-0/The-Master

Some sex acts towards the end that may not be to everyone's taste.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 15, 2017, 06:43:19 PM
Thanks for that, interesting story and interesting writer (his other story was an interesting read, too).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 15, 2017, 09:13:14 PM
I did read the other story but I wasn't sure how well it would be received over here.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 15, 2017, 11:56:40 PM
http://humite-ubie.deviantart.com/art/Commiss-Edolas-Traitors-to-the-Kingdom-510119755

If they attached rose to the table like the one in the bottom left they could use he ass or pussy as a candle holder. for some goblin feast they could bind goblin slaves to the table and use them as candle holders.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 16, 2017, 04:02:31 AM
http://redpill333.deviantart.com/art/Drag-216529824
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 16, 2017, 04:02:45 AM
http://redpill333.deviantart.com/art/Open-Air-Market-539647490
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 16, 2017, 04:02:56 AM
http://redpill333.deviantart.com/art/Bondage-Madness-CHAMPION-214804816
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 16, 2017, 04:05:44 AM
http://redpill333.deviantart.com/art/Waiting-99896321
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 16, 2017, 04:11:19 AM
http://redpill333.deviantart.com/art/Training-Camp-Preparation-149665235
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 16, 2017, 04:39:45 AM
http://plasma-dragon.deviantart.com/art/Techno-Slave-collar-Mk2-652652162

the tilt feature could be something that her collar could do
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 17, 2017, 10:36:57 PM
http://plasma-dragon.deviantart.com/art/Techno-Slave-collar-Mk2-652652162

the tilt feature could be something that her collar could do
I'll take that under consideration, though nothing I'm currently contemplating requires it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on April 18, 2017, 12:04:30 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/stories/user/devil001/14569/Korra-bdsm-Bender
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on April 19, 2017, 02:41:09 AM
To use her love of quidditch against her they could use a golden snitch.

Golden snitches have flesh memory's that makes they try to get back to the first person that touches them. If the goblins were to have fleur/someone touch the snitch so it will try to get back to them and then the goblin insert the snitch into roses uterus. It would fly around inside her trying to get back to the person that touched it first. But would be stuck inside her unable to get past the cervix.

Sort of like this but with a golden snitch instead.
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 24, 2017, 10:41:10 AM
Still working on the chapter(s) but jury duty did delay matters.   I'll see if I can bind my muse down and finish them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on April 26, 2017, 11:17:13 AM
I noticed the subtle 'chapter(s)' bit there. Are we in line for a multiple update anytime soon?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 26, 2017, 07:10:22 PM
I noticed the subtle 'chapter(s)' bit there. Are we in line for a multiple update anytime soon?
Was more a reference to a chapter each of Rose's story and Harry's story; they start to diverge more here as the backstory will show, though in both cases the Dursleys will be vicious amoral bigots.

Amendment: You'll see more about them in the following chapter as well as some other interesting bits, including at least one item that is a "Gringotts personnel only" item but which is made available for a high priority transport of a witch.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 01, 2017, 10:37:02 AM
When it comes to the dursleys I would say petunia would be the one that would be the most toxic towards accacia/rose. After all petunia hated Lily and that hate would be more easy for petunia to transfer to a girl.

On top of that hate petunia would hate rose even more because she survived when lily didn't meaning that she will never be able to make up with her sister. And Rose will be a constant reminder of that fact.

Any update on when the next chapter/s will be ready?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 01, 2017, 04:26:34 PM
Petunia and Vernon will both be fairly nasty in different ways.  Vernon's abuse is physical, very, while Petunia's is a bit more subtle and undercutting.

Can't give a date regarding ready chapters, damn muse seems to excel at slipping out of bonds; a very knotty muse.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on May 02, 2017, 04:34:58 AM
How much of the chap(s) are actually done? Do you need some help with closing them, or resolving some plot points?

We're all eager to help finish it off so we can see what comes next.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 02, 2017, 09:10:34 AM
Bit over 80% done with about 2/3's beta-d.  It's more a matter of constructing a backstory that fits what I have out there already but takes things where I want to (hint: Molly Weasley does get bashed, heavily).  I've had to go back and research a number of things to get the right feel for what I'm writing.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on May 04, 2017, 05:28:25 PM
This one was a suggestion I made with the Acacia Potter version, but I think you might like it as a possible scenario.

http://www.imagebam.com/image/aa39a3500435285

I'm putting a bit more faith in your version of the fic over T1p2's. I just re-read what he has - aside from the genderswapping of Draco and the Sirius, Goblin Trainer, bit, the rest is pretty much exactly as my initial prompts were written, and there are some continuity/consistancy errors.

I hope you don't fall into the same hole.

Hope to see the new chaps soon.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 05, 2017, 11:55:08 AM
Something like that will happen, likely more than once, after Rose (or Harry for the other story) gets trained and auctioned off.  I have some interesting ideas for certain events, like the birthdays, while in goblin servitude, of Rose/Harry; they will be quite memorable.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 05, 2017, 02:19:35 PM
I'm putting a bit more faith in your version of the fic over T1p2's. I just re-read what he has - aside from the genderswapping of Draco and the Sirius, Goblin Trainer, bit, the rest is pretty much exactly as my initial prompts were written, and there are some continuity/consistancy errors.

I hope you don't fall into the same hole.
You may rest assured that I have my own vision for the story and while I may borrow some details, the path of the story is my own concept and ideas (leavened by a lot of reading over the years).

As a teaser, the surprise for Rose's (and Harry's) birthday derives from North American mythology and the sf works of James Schmitz (particularly his first "Telzey" story) and David Weber (one of his main non-human intelligent species).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 06, 2017, 01:31:23 AM
http://imgur.com/63WNOTa
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 07, 2017, 10:35:45 AM
http://imgur.com/63WNOTa
An interesting way to keep multiple female slaves.  I can't say whether or not this will find its way into the story, but I'll keep it in mind.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 11, 2017, 05:12:27 AM
http://www.asstr.org/files/Authors/C_Lakewood/Stories%20by%20Joe%20Doe/Padme%27s%20Perspective.txt
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 04:58:52 AM
http://imgur.com/4e3gUSp
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:01:54 AM
http://imgur.com/qKyTkN3
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:03:53 AM
https://www.reddit.com/r/hentaibondage/comments/65j0fw/riding_a_horse/
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:16:32 AM
https://i.imgur.com/2tRNmbL.gif

https://i.imgur.com/2VkacCt.gif

https://i.imgur.com/zjILKYC.gif

https://imgur.com/a/MWwMC#2tRNmbL
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:18:11 AM
http://imgur.com/qxxOUEY
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:21:40 AM
http://i.imgur.com/pE0BKyt.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:22:02 AM
http://i.imgur.com/toG0tqZ.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on May 16, 2017, 05:37:53 AM
http://imgur.com/a/H1Jxq
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on May 16, 2017, 08:47:10 AM
http://imgur.com/lXPlwBF

A zipper I think!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on May 16, 2017, 09:08:52 AM
http://31.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_mbc91fVnRm1qf0ndvo1_500.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on May 16, 2017, 09:09:04 AM
http://imgur.com/40kvPGx
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on May 19, 2017, 03:09:28 AM
We've got a lot of good pics and ideas with these last posts (the zipper one is particularly inspiring), now we just need the chapters to be finished.

Any word on that front, cateagle? Last count was something like 80% with 2/3 beta'd, right?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 23, 2017, 06:06:08 PM
Pretty much still at that point as I work to plot from where the backstory is to where the main story starts; especially since both Rose's and Harry's stories have deviations from canon in the backstory.  I'm getting there but hammering out the details takes time.

5-25 Addendum:  I am getting there, but some things in each back story have changed significantly from canon and I have to work out how those affect later developments before finishing this chapter of each.  Harry and Rose will both be thinking over just how they got to where they are now, bound and suspended inside Gringotts as they recover from being "in-processed" and awaiting their presentation to the goblin nation on the morrow and then we see the goblins puzzling over anomalies they find.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on June 05, 2017, 11:17:22 AM
Time for the bi-weekly check in, to see how the battle rages cateagle? Has there been any new movement on the front lines?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 11, 2017, 10:33:40 AM
Sorry for the delay, I was travelling this past week.  I am advancing, not as fast as I'd like, but I am advancing,  I can guarantee the backstory for both stories will not be the same as canon and, while they will be similar, they will not be identical.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 20, 2017, 08:05:55 PM
I continue to make progress, albeit slowly, and there will be a very definite divergence from canon in the background of both stories.  They will parallel a fair bit at this point but not be completely identical.  Based on what I have so far, the end of Sixth Year will have distinct differences from canon, with Harry & Dumbledore arriving back much earlier and Dumbledore in better shape despite the effects of the ring's curse, and that will affect some of the secondary characters.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on June 27, 2017, 03:27:45 PM
So, how goes the battle, cateagle? Has any progress been made on the western front?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 27, 2017, 09:18:58 PM
My June 20th posting still holds, I am making progress, though slowly.  It will be a different Sixth Year from canon, let alone what the ostensible Seventh Year will be.  I don't think I'm going to have the "camping trip from Hell" but I will have other events for an equally bad year.  It's going to take a bit of doing to sort some things out (the chapter of each story in work has contemplations on the part of Rose, or Harry, on just how each got to where they are, suspended from a horizontal St. Andrews cross in an annex of the Processing Section.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on June 27, 2017, 09:57:07 PM
Perhaps, in order to speed things up a little, you could break up/spread out the backstory/exposition over multiple chapters rather than trying to put it all out at once.

Further to this,

1. Summarize the first two/three years/until major sexual activities start occuring.

2. Don't try to go into too much detail about any sexual encounters unless it pertains to the current plot.

3. Unless Rose/Harry have been involved in/exposed to Bdsm during their schooling(before/during/after school hours during the day) She/He should be interested/aroused by but not entirely knowledgeable about it.

4. Try to keep moving along. Nothing burns interest/arousal as quick as boring plot/details. Even a few short paragraphs spread around during the backstory/exposition where the main character makes a few ill-advised movements and gets distracted from a train of thought can break up an otherwise dull section.

5. Perhaps a change of scene would help; why not try writing a sex scene needed later in the story?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 28, 2017, 10:54:24 AM
https://archiveofourown.org/works/1168642?view_adult=true
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 28, 2017, 11:06:38 AM
Perhaps, in order to speed things up a little, you could break up/spread out the backstory/exposition over multiple chapters rather than trying to put it all out at once.

Further to this,

1. Summarize the first two/three years/until major sexual activities start occuring.

2. Don't try to go into too much detail about any sexual encounters unless it pertains to the current plot.

3. Unless Rose/Harry have been involved in/exposed to Bdsm during their schooling(before/during/after school hours during the day) She/He should be interested/aroused by but not entirely knowledgeable about it.

4. Try to keep moving along. Nothing burns interest/arousal as quick as boring plot/details. Even a few short paragraphs spread around during the backstory/exposition where the main character makes a few ill-advised movements and gets distracted from a train of thought can break up an otherwise dull section.

5. Perhaps a change of scene would help; why not try writing a sex scene needed later in the story?
I'm not going into any great detail for the most part and trying to keep things moving.  Actually, sexual matters start after first year (especially for Rose), but I am trying to keep it light on detail for the background story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 29, 2017, 11:05:38 AM
I wonder if Rose has any experience with Freeuse because around goblins that is pretty much what her life is going to be.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 29, 2017, 11:39:35 AM
I was thinking back on my school day and remembered something called a frostie which was were some one would Use an airisol deodorant right against your skin. The reason I mention it is because I could see it as being something that Dudleys gang would do to Harry.

On an other not getting deodorant on your privates stings like a bitch( :o links body spray never again).I wonder what roses reaction would be if Dudleys gang gave her a frostie on her clit.



Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 29, 2017, 11:25:55 PM
I wonder if Rose has any experience with Freeuse because around goblins that is pretty much what her life is going to be.
No, but she's going to get that kind of experience with some clans; not all, but some.  Same thing for Harry on the flip side of things, really.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 29, 2017, 11:28:07 PM
I was thinking back on my school day and remembered something called a frostie which was were some one would Use an airisol deodorant right against your skin. The reason I mention it is because I could see it as being something that Dudleys gang would do to Harry.

On an other not getting deodorant on your privates stings like a bitch( :o links body spray never again).I wonder what roses reaction would be if Dudleys gang gave her a frostie on her clit.
Or, on the other hand, if they pantsed Harry and did his cock?  I don't see either happening, at least as currently written, but I could see the goblns doing something similar using just a compressed gas and a suitably neutral fluid (be right painful if they used alcohol, though).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 30, 2017, 04:18:00 AM
Another thing they could do would be to use chilli and hot sauce on her pussy and clit.or on her buttplug.

I wounder if goblins like spice food if they do they might have something more spicy  than what we have in the muggle world. If it goes the other way and there food is to bland and she says something about it there is always the ghost pepper to really make her squeal.(if goblins don't do it there is always fleur)

Edit:the ghost pepper is no longer the hottest chilli in the world its Eather the carolina reaper or mabye the new  dragon breath chilli which fits the magic theam much better

Edit2:Depending on the year this is set in up until the year 2000 the recond for hottest chilli was apparently the Habanero.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 30, 2017, 04:31:32 AM
Looking back it my last few comment they seem to be on the sadistic side  I must have read a fic about a particularly useless Harry that I have since perged from my memory.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 30, 2017, 05:31:59 AM
Another feast entertainment they could do to her in not let her orgasm for a week before the feast while keeping her constantly aroused then at the feast the goblin put her at the front of the feast were she begs to cum all,threw dinner.

When desert comes round they put her in her bondage hood but leave her mouth uncovered cover her hands in the hottest chilli they could find and then give her permission to try and rub her self to orgasm with her chilli covered hands. While they eat desert she would be fighting between the overpowering felling of arousel and the felling from the chilli with the arousel eventually winning out.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on June 30, 2017, 05:48:50 AM
The goblin could also use a really potent goblin after shave on her pussy.  Or tiger bam or some sort of magical equivalent.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 30, 2017, 03:49:34 PM
Some possibilities in your last few posts for actions to be taken by various goblin clans who intensely dislike wizards and witches.  I don't know if any will be used, but I will keep them in mind.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 30, 2017, 03:51:26 PM
Another feast entertainment they could do to her in not let her orgasm for a week before the feast while keeping her constantly aroused then at the feast the goblin put her at the front of the feast were she begs to cum all,threw dinner.

When desert comes round they put her in her bondage hood but leave her mouth uncovered cover her hands in the hottest chilli they could find and then give her permission to try and rub her self to orgasm with her chilli covered hands. While they eat desert she would be fighting between the overpowering felling of arousel and the felling from the chilli with the arousel eventually winning out.
Similar situation for Harry but forced to use a mix of lube and the hottest chili the goblins can find to manually stroke himself off.  For both Rose and Harry, perhaps chili-coated clamps on the nipples as added stimulation?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 02:25:02 AM
Another feast entertainment they could do to her in not let her orgasm for a week before the feast while keeping her constantly aroused then at the feast the goblin put her at the front of the feast were she begs to cum all,threw dinner.

When desert comes round they put her in her bondage hood but leave her mouth uncovered cover her hands in the hottest chilli they could find and then give her permission to try and rub her self to orgasm with her chilli covered hands. While they eat desert she would be fighting between the overpowering felling of arousel and the felling from the chilli with the arousel eventually winning out.
Similar situation for Harry but forced to use a mix of lube and the hottest chili the goblins can find to manually stroke himself off.  For both Rose and Harry, perhaps chili-coated clamps on the nipples as added stimulation?

For a male Harry mabye cover Harrys junk in the chilli then make him put his dick to the hilt in a female slave then while they are standing face to face mummify them together and then leave them in a box that they both just fit in. And then have the goblin leave them in total darkness pressed up against each other for a week. The goblins would probably take away there abilty to talk to each other while they were in the box.so they would have to nuzzle each other to try to comfort each other. Being lulled to sleep by the sound of the others heartbeat.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 02:32:32 AM
By mummified I mean something like what they do on the TORE! - Japanese Mummification Game Show  which was what I had just finished watching when I made that post.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 05:29:59 AM
Another girl that could have a bit of a grudge against  Rose like Fleur is Cho Chang  unlike Harry Rose probably had more of a rivalry with cho on the quiddich pitch.So when hermione cursed Marrieta it would have been one girls friend cursing another girls friend so cho would be less likely to forgive rose as Easly for being ok with hermione curesing p(permanently scaring)her friend.

And Fleur and Cho could have also bonded during the tri-wizard torment over there dislike of rose.(A scene were Fleur and Cho team-up to Dom Rose would be hot to read).

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 06:05:20 AM
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Inevitability-656998982
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 06:10:48 AM
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Walker-3-458793241

Dress rose up like that attach her to a wheel that she has to push/pull  around in circle to pump the bellows in the forge like the poor donkey at the start of the first pirates of the Caribbean film
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 06:13:21 AM
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Suspension-Bondage-Animation-673861598
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Suspension-Bondage-2-673859426
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 07:17:50 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=ha_ku_ronofu_jin

This artist has some interesting predicament bondage that rose could be put in
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 07:27:22 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3316785

Rose being made to give goblins rides
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 01, 2017, 09:46:40 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3316785

Rose being made to give goblins rides
Perhaps hooded instead of just blindfolded?  For Harry, he'd be bent back from a kneeling, legs spread, position with his wrists bound between his ankles, a hood on his head, and available for any female goblin to ride - or Rose in a similar position for any male goblin, or female goblin with a strap-on, to ride.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 01, 2017, 05:09:38 PM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 01, 2017, 08:37:43 PM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Lily as the chief Overseer for all of the slaves in that location?  It's a different idea and I'll have to think about it.  I won't say "yea" or "nay" at this point.  *wicked chuckle* Perhaps Lily as one of King Kilgrave's most treasured wives, goblin or not (could be one reason the traditionalist Hook clan dislikes him)?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on July 01, 2017, 08:58:12 PM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Lily as the chief Overseer for all of the slaves in that location?  It's a different idea and I'll have to think about it.  I won't say "yea" or "nay" at this point.  *wicked chuckle* Perhaps Lily as one of King Kilgrave's most treasured wives, goblin or not (could be one reason the traditionalist Hook clan dislikes him)?

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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 02, 2017, 04:47:02 AM
On the subject of other goblin slaves Rose is probably not going to be very popular among them for raising the Anti-human sentiments among the goblins.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 02, 2017, 07:41:42 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3265153
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 02, 2017, 06:52:47 PM
On the subject of other goblin slaves Rose is probably not going to be very popular among them for raising the Anti-human sentiments among the goblins.
The goblins need reason(s) to increase anti-human sentiments?  In any case, such sentiments are primarily among certain Clans that don't care for humans under any circumstances and barely tolerate them as slaves.  It will affect Rose, and Harry, when any of those Clans wins the quarterly rights to their indentured servitude.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 02, 2017, 07:42:40 PM
On the subject of other goblin slaves Rose is probably not going to be very popular among them for raising the Anti-human sentiments among the goblins.
The goblins need reason(s) to increase anti-human sentiments?  In any case, such sentiments are primarily among certain Clans that don't care for humans under any circumstances and barely tolerate them as slaves.  It will affect Rose, and Harry, when any of those Clans wins the quarterly rights to their indentured servitude.

Not really not really but for the other slaves rose would make a good scapegoat. And Rose escape from Gringotts has probably made the goblins even worse.

Quick question was Bellatrix killed in the battle of hogwarts in your story or was she captured and the handed over to the goblins because she is to dangerous to be held in azkaban?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 02, 2017, 08:41:05 PM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Lily as the chief Overseer for all of the slaves in that location?  It's a different idea and I'll have to think about it.  I won't say "yea" or "nay" at this point.  *wicked chuckle* Perhaps Lily as one of King Kilgrave's most treasured wives, goblin or not (could be one reason the traditionalist Hook clan dislikes him)?

Lily was know as one of the best of her generation and the favorite student of Professor Flitwick even if he did not pull some strings to help her magical talent would have been to good to waste as just a sex slave. I could see lily working in R&D were she helped create and improve a lot of the tools that the goblins are useing on Rose.

That would be an interesting if the R&D department of Gringotts were to get Rose for a time and then have rose find Lily livening and Almost normal life more employee than slave .and have Lily be one of the ones that likes testing new thing of rose the most.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 02, 2017, 11:07:12 PM
On the subject of other goblin slaves Rose is probably not going to be very popular among them for raising the Anti-human sentiments among the goblins.
The goblins need reason(s) to increase anti-human sentiments?  In any case, such sentiments are primarily among certain Clans that don't care for humans under any circumstances and barely tolerate them as slaves.  It will affect Rose, and Harry, when any of those Clans wins the quarterly rights to their indentured servitude.
Not really not really but for the other slaves rose would make a good scapegoat. And Rose escape from Gringotts has probably made the goblins even worse.

Quick question was Bellatrix killed in the battle of hogwarts in your story or was she captured and the handed over to the goblins because she is to dangerous to be held in azkaban?
Yeah, I can see her being treated as a scapegoat by slaves within some Clans.  With the set-up the story has, Bellatrix was killed in the Battle of Hogwarts, though I'm thinking of having a different person kill her; I rather like the idea of her going after Neville after he kills Nagini, and it hurts Riddle, and she finds out that the Sword of Gryffindor also reflects spells and makes the mistake of closing to where Neville takes her out, too.  That would seem to add a bit of symmetry to all the events of his life.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 02, 2017, 11:09:58 PM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Lily as the chief Overseer for all of the slaves in that location?  It's a different idea and I'll have to think about it.  I won't say "yea" or "nay" at this point.  *wicked chuckle* Perhaps Lily as one of King Kilgrave's most treasured wives, goblin or not (could be one reason the traditionalist Hook clan dislikes him)?

Lily was know as one of the best of her generation and the favorite student of Professor Flitwick even if he did not pull some strings to help her magical talent would have been to good to waste as just a sex slave. I could see lily working in R&D were she helped create and improve a lot of the tools that the goblins are useing on Rose.

That would be an interesting if the R&D department of Gringotts were to get Rose for a time and then have rose find Lily livening and Almost normal life more employee than slave .and have Lily be one of the ones that likes testing new thing of rose the most.
That has potential for both stories, with Lily doing intimate "testing" with Rose and/or Harry.  A truly twisted bit would be if an experiment by the Lily of each story ended up bringing Rose and Harry together for some mutual intimacy.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 03, 2017, 02:06:10 AM
Any chance that rose could run into her mother as a goblin slave.

The reason she could be alive is that James died for her and rose. So she might have gotten some sort of protection as well. Mabye have it so that just like canon Harry she had the choice to come back.only her comeing back put a spanner in Dumbeldores plan so he made her disappear into Gringotts were she has been a Goblin slave for the last  17 years. So Rose will run into her mother who has worked her way up them food chain to the highest rank she could become while still being a slave.
Lily as the chief Overseer for all of the slaves in that location?  It's a different idea and I'll have to think about it.  I won't say "yea" or "nay" at this point.  *wicked chuckle* Perhaps Lily as one of King Kilgrave's most treasured wives, goblin or not (could be one reason the traditionalist Hook clan dislikes him)?

Lily was know as one of the best of her generation and the favorite student of Professor Flitwick even if he did not pull some strings to help her magical talent would have been to good to waste as just a sex slave. I could see lily working in R&D were she helped create and improve a lot of the tools that the goblins are useing on Rose.

That would be an interesting if the R&D department of Gringotts were to get Rose for a time and then have rose find Lily livening and Almost normal life more employee than slave .and have Lily be one of the ones that likes testing new thing of rose the most.
That has potential for both stories, with Lily doing intimate "testing" with Rose and/or Harry.  A truly twisted bit would be if an experiment by the Lily of each story ended up bringing Rose and Harry together for some mutual intimacy.

For Harry Lily could do something like this with the scene being Lily testing out some new potions and a cage on harry: https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3624467

For Rose Lily could do something like this with the scene being Lily testing out the R&D new equipment on Rose
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 03, 2017, 02:13:23 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3010720
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 03, 2017, 02:15:37 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2973735
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 03, 2017, 02:29:01 AM
Rose in a cage while Lily and Fleur talk
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Danna-and-Maya-and-Aoife-4-494812223
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 03, 2017, 02:31:13 AM
A way rose could be used as a lamp
http://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Valentine-s-gift-timeout-591630460
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 06:56:07 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=783958
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 06:57:28 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2154611
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 06:58:39 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1802624
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 07:00:25 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1657678
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 07:25:23 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2116750
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 04, 2017, 08:03:19 AM
How goes the current chaper?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 04, 2017, 01:58:49 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=783958
Could be used as a basis for goblins punishing a female slave or two female slaves punishing another one.  Definite potential for getting written into the story.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 04, 2017, 02:00:01 PM
How goes the current chaper?
It proceeds, I've incorporated a few ideas from the beta of what I have so far.  I'm still leery at this point of making any kind of promise date.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 04, 2017, 05:23:39 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1802624
That could make for an interesting slave punishment for Rose.  I could see a vibrating sound up Harry's cock as part of a similar punishment for him; perhaps with the free head of the sound tightly connected to his nipple rings.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 06, 2017, 11:30:31 AM
How goes the current chaper?
It proceeds, I've incorporated a few ideas from the beta of what I have so far.  I'm still leery at this point of making any kind of promise date.
Just how far off would you say you are? A few paragraphs, a full scene, a page or three? If you let us know, maybe we can help push you past that final hurdle.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 06, 2017, 01:05:17 PM
How goes the current chaper?
It proceeds, I've incorporated a few ideas from the beta of what I have so far.  I'm still leery at this point of making any kind of promise date.
Just how far off would you say you are? A few paragraphs, a full scene, a page or three? If you let us know, maybe we can help push you past that final hurdle.
Roughly a year and a half of Rose's recollections as to how she got where she is.  I'm up through the middle of Sixth Year and matters are diverging from canon, which is part of the problem: working out the effects of the changes as well as getting to where the story started.  I'm not covering everything by a long shot, implying a lot, but somethings do need to be included to set the tone.  I'm at the same point in Harry's version of the story though there are differences.

FWIW, I've already started sketching out the next chapter, "Interrogations", for both stories.  Neither the Dursleys nor Dumbledore will be shown in a good light.   I'm afraid that chapter won't have any sex, but it will have a few characters learning something about their sexual interests.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 06, 2017, 01:25:21 PM
How goes the current chaper?
It proceeds, I've incorporated a few ideas from the beta of what I have so far.  I'm still leery at this point of making any kind of promise date.
Just how far off would you say you are? A few paragraphs, a full scene, a page or three? If you let us know, maybe we can help push you past that final hurdle.
Roughly a year and a half of Rose's recollections as to how she got where she is.  I'm up through the middle of Sixth Year and matters are diverging from canon, which is part of the problem: working out the effects of the changes as well as getting to where the story started.  I'm not covering everything by a long shot, implying a lot, but somethings do need to be included to set the tone.  I'm at the same point in Harry's version of the story though there are differences.

FWIW, I've already started sketching out the next chapter, "Interrogations", for both stories.  Neither the Dursleys nor Dumbledore will be shown in a good light.   I'm afraid that chapter won't have any sex, but it will have a few characters learning something about their sexual interests.
Just how big is this chap likely to be? Perhaps you should focus on one version first, then the other, alternating as you go. It would have the added benifit of allowing you to easily see where the divisions are  between Harry's enslavement and Rose's.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 06, 2017, 02:07:26 PM
It's going to run 15-20 pages when finished and I am alternating on working on Rose's and Harry's stories so that I can be aware of the necessary divergences between them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 07, 2017, 08:58:23 PM
Will Rose undergo bimbofication by the golbins or Fleur/Lily?


What mean by bimbofiation I mean roses mind trapped in her body watching as the goblins slowly make her. Body act like a bimbo
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 07, 2017, 09:11:28 PM
How badly will rose be broken before anyone who interacts with her will start felling any sympathy for her.?

And how long after that will they start trying to do something about it by giveing her emotional comfort and aftercare?


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 08, 2017, 06:18:14 AM
I wonder if there is a goblin clan that will use muggle pepper spray on roses crotch?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 10, 2017, 12:25:00 AM
I wonder if there is a goblin clan that will use muggle pepper spray on roses crotch?
If there is, it would be a human-hating clan using it for a severe punishment.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 10, 2017, 01:44:25 AM
http://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1561811

Fleur gets pay back on rose before she leaves in fourth year
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 10, 2017, 02:27:00 AM
For flogging For each goblin that died I would suggest the goblins might cover the nine tails with a Capsaicin potion.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 10, 2017, 02:41:12 AM
For the Capsaicin potion I have two uses in mind

1. That is used to coat whips and other toys

2.the second use would be when applied directly

The potion would not be able to come off without the counter potion and would not allow the effected area to become numb.

It would not be able to leave the effected area  So the goblin could put it on clit and not worry about getting it on there hands from touching her clit or anything that had been in contact with it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 10, 2017, 02:56:13 AM
Capsaicin Potions coated buttplug for when one of roses tormentors think sticking a ginger root up her ass is not enough.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 13, 2017, 06:25:42 PM
http://rule34.xxx/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1561811

Fleur gets pay back on rose before she leaves in fourth year
Could also happen when the goblins "loan" Rose to Fleur as a "bonus".  I'm thinking it would be after Fleur was Mistress of Ceremonies at the first anniversary celebration of Rose's servitude (she'll likely also get the same role for the second and third anniversary celebrations).

Note: The Harry story will also have Harry loaned to Fleur after the celebration, but it would be a rather less acrimonious (well, as much as Fleur can get away with and please the watching goblins) ceremony.  *wicked grin* She's going to enjoy having two males around her residence to please her and Harry will be able to show her at least some of what he's learned about pleasing females. ;)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 13, 2017, 06:26:54 PM
For the Capsaicin potion I have two uses in mind

1. That is used to coat whips and other toys

2.the second use would be when applied directly

The potion would not be able to come off without the counter potion and would not allow the effected area to become numb.

It would not be able to leave the effected area  So the goblin could put it on clit and not worry about getting it on there hands from touching her clit or anything that had been in contact with it.
Perhaps apply that potion to nipple and clit clamps?  particularly weighted ones or ones used with a Y-harness?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 13, 2017, 09:26:22 PM
For the Capsaicin potion I have two uses in mind

1. That is used to coat whips and other toys

2.the second use would be when applied directly

The potion would not be able to come off without the counter potion and would not allow the effected area to become numb.

It would not be able to leave the effected area  So the goblin could put it on clit and not worry about getting it on there hands from touching her clit or anything that had been in contact with it.
Perhaps apply that potion to nipple and clit clamps?  particularly weighted ones or ones used with a Y-harness?

of course Clamps would come under other toys
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 14, 2017, 12:20:01 AM
I could see some specially-coated cock rings being fitted to Harry, along with coated nipple clamps.  What would really be nasty would be to coat a sound with that potion and slide it into his cock; much as a coated dildo could be slid into Rose's pussy.  Perhaps make it a ribbed dildo and only apply the potion to the high points to make it more effective.  By the same token, make it a ribbed sound for harry and only coat the high points of the ribs.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 14, 2017, 05:33:56 AM
Plenty of good ideas. Now, all that's needed is to get them put to paper.

So, time for the bi-weekly check. How goes progress, cateagle? Have we reached the posting point yet?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 17, 2017, 02:33:53 AM
http://i.imgur.com/NmKRf4B.png
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 17, 2017, 10:21:58 AM
http://i.imgur.com/NmKRf4B.png
I could see a goblin equivalent for Rose, possibly with a second unit in her ass.  For Harry, just a unit in his ass, but with other stimulation to his cock and balls.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 17, 2017, 10:34:47 AM
Plenty of good ideas. Now, all that's needed is to get them put to paper.

So, time for the bi-weekly check. How goes progress, cateagle? Have we reached the posting point yet?
Yeah, and a variation of the capsaicin potioned toys, as well as the direct application, using ginger extract might well be used as a "training aid" before the auction.

Story is progressing slowly, up to mid-March of Sixth Year and things are developing nicely.  Still not ready for posting as I need to finish up through Seventh Year and the battle of Hogwarts.  One thing I'm sorely tempted to do is have someone besides Molly Weasley take out Bellatrix Lestrange.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 18, 2017, 06:13:27 AM
There is could also be a mint potion
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 19, 2017, 05:42:00 AM
There is could also be a mint potion

Eh, I see mint as being something of an anathema to Goblins, given its historical view as a cleansing and revitalizing herb, and symbolic of the open sky. These are cave dwellers after all.

Now,  if you want to be cruel, believe it or not Asparagus is an option. The berries of a ripe apparagus plant are mildly poisonous, and rapid consumtion of several causes abdominal pain and vomiting.

Perhaps, as a severe punishment, forcing Rose to drink a concentration of aparagus berry juice along with an anti-vomiting potion, then forcing her to work the mines in a much tighter harness than usual, one that really constricts the stomach and breasts? I imagine strong abs would be a must for working the mines, and as such would be extremely unpleasant.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 19, 2017, 07:51:51 AM
There is could also be a mint potion

Eh, I see mint as being something of an anathema to Goblins, given its historical view as a cleansing and revitalizing herb, and symbolic of the open sky. These are cave dwellers after all.

Now,  if you want to be cruel, believe it or not Asparagus is an option. The berries of a ripe apparagus plant are mildly poisonous, and rapid consumtion of several causes abdominal pain and vomiting.

Perhaps, as a severe punishment, forcing Rose to drink a concentration of aparagus berry juice along with an anti-vomiting potion, then forcing her to work the mines in a much tighter harness than usual, one that really constricts the stomach and breasts? I imagine strong abs would be a must for working the mines, and as such would be extremely unpleasant.

I was more thinking of how it is painful to drink cold water after using mint tooth past or eclipse mints.

so potion that causes that cold painful felling on her skin. like the Capsaicin potion but instead of hot its cold.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 19, 2017, 07:53:23 AM
if they use a real small brush they could use the potions to paint a pattern of hot and cold on her nipples and clit.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 19, 2017, 06:08:30 PM
Hmm, how about a potion that alternates between firey spicey and "cool mint" cold?  The alternating sensation would have interesting effects.

Thinking of a nasty punishment tool, a vibrator like a rabbit, but with a clamp for the clit instead of a nub and taut chains to nipple clamps; coat the clamps with your preferred potion.  For guys, a vibrating sound with taut chains to nipple clamps with the clamps and inserted portion of the sound coated in your preferred potion.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 20, 2017, 05:47:52 AM
Hmm, how about a potion that alternates between firey spicey and "cool mint" cold?  The alternating sensation would have interesting effects.

Thinking of a nasty punishment tool, a vibrator like a rabbit, but with a clamp for the clit instead of a nub and taut chains to nipple clamps; coat the clamps with your preferred potion.  For guys, a vibrating sound with taut chains to nipple clamps with the clamps and inserted portion of the sound coated in your preferred potion.
If you want to go that route, how about a machine with two dildos, one charmed to be ice and the other red hot, and have Rose strapped to it, alternating between thrusts to her pussy and ass. Or better yet, charm the dildos to switch between ice/fire at random intervals.

Add nipple/clit clamps that provide electric shocks and a ring gag so various guards and goblins can use her mouth and you have a complete set up.

I was also thinking about one of the ways she can be used during a business day. Say during a meeting, she can be tied down with her ass up in the air. During high profile meetings, goblins could insist that wizards/witches sheath their wands in her ass (maybe encouraging them to fire stinging hexes as the do so, right into Rose's rectum). A charm/potion combo can be applied so that not only are the wands kept clean, but with each wand that's sheathed she's forced to have a minor orgasm - building her up to love having her ass tormented.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 20, 2017, 06:56:45 AM
Hmm, how about a potion that alternates between firey spicey and "cool mint" cold?  The alternating sensation would have interesting effects.

Thinking of a nasty punishment tool, a vibrator like a rabbit, but with a clamp for the clit instead of a nub and taut chains to nipple clamps; coat the clamps with your preferred potion.  For guys, a vibrating sound with taut chains to nipple clamps with the clamps and inserted portion of the sound coated in your preferred potion.
If you want to go that route, how about a machine with two dildos, one charmed to be ice and the other red hot, and have Rose strapped to it, alternating between thrusts to her pussy and ass. Or better yet, charm the dildos to switch between ice/fire at random intervals.

Add nipple/clit clamps that provide electric shocks and a ring gag so various guards and goblins can use her mouth and you have a complete set up.

I was also thinking about one of the ways she can be used during a business day. Say during a meeting, she can be tied down with her ass up in the air. During high profile meetings, goblins could insist that wizards/witches sheath their wands in her ass (maybe encouraging them to fire stinging hexes as the do so, right into Rose's rectum). A charm/potion combo can be applied so that not only are the wands kept clean, but with each wand that's sheathed she's forced to have a minor orgasm - building her up to love having her ass tormented.
I like the wand sheath idea.

They could also turn her ass into a money pouch so when rose is made to help with the shopping ever time the goblin she is with wants to pay for something they fist her ass.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 20, 2017, 07:57:57 AM
I can just see rose bent over with a goblin with there arm up to there elbow in her ass saying to the person they are paying "I know my last galleon is in hear some wear"

after finding the coin and pulling it out to pay  rose collapses to the ground panting. After the goblins has paid she struggles to her feet to present her ass to the goblin so that he can put his change in her ass.

Then rose  gets back on all fours and hergoblin master directs her by her clit leash while being happy that she is crawling so that none of the coins in ear ass are in danger of falling out of her gaping ass on the way to the next store.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 20, 2017, 08:47:34 AM
I get the felling that rose is going to get cavity searched a lot By the goblins. With them Useing the excuse that she is a thief. When really they just like seeing the faces she makes as they fist her ass and pussy
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 21, 2017, 03:30:51 PM
I get the felling that rose is going to get cavity searched a lot By the goblins. With them Useing the excuse that she is a thief. When really they just like seeing the faces she makes as they fist her ass and pussy
I suspect this is more likely to happen with clans who are less accepting of humans (goblin equivalents of puerbloods).    Beyond that, I don't know at this point.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on July 29, 2017, 08:40:08 AM
Any update on when the next chapter will be ready?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 04:55:40 AM
https://i.imgur.com/xq5JjP5_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=high
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 05:01:06 AM
https://i.imgur.com/qMlsjhe_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=high
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 05:01:42 AM
https://i.imgur.com/th38IlB_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=high
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 05:30:49 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1763242
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 05:49:12 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2223620
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 01, 2017, 05:58:20 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2039957
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 01, 2017, 08:39:28 PM
Any update on when the next chapter will be ready?
I'm making a bit of progress, but routine, though time-consuming, medical procedures (growing old is not for the faint of heart), one of them a colonoscopy (I swear, the prep and recovery is worse than the procedure), have sucked up a lot of time the last couple weeks.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 01, 2017, 10:24:36 PM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2039957
I've got something like that in mind for part of Rose's training.  She's going to learn a lot about controlling herself and following orders with this bit of training.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 03, 2017, 10:49:41 PM
I'm thinking something like this, but moreso, for one of Rose's punishments.  Her arms would be in an armbinder, a spreader bar to her ankle cuffs would spread her legs, and it would tie to a pole holding a vibrator in her sex and/or ass.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 05, 2017, 04:03:40 PM
I'm thinking something like this, but moreso, for one of Rose's punishments.  Her arms would be in an armbinder, a spreader bar to her ankle cuffs would spread her legs, and it would tie to a pole holding a vibrator in her sex and/or ass.
I would suggest keeping her legs shut instead. This causes a woman to be 'tighter' down there in both holes. This any rod, Dildo, or spiked club would feel much larger. Have the goblins throw a leg locker curse and you're good.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 05, 2017, 10:12:11 PM
I'm thinking something like this, but moreso, for one of Rose's punishments.  Her arms would be in an armbinder, a spreader bar to her ankle cuffs would spread her legs, and it would tie to a pole holding a vibrator in her sex and/or ass.
I would suggest keeping her legs shut instead. This causes a woman to be 'tighter' down there in both holes. This any rod, Dildo, or spiked club would feel much larger. Have the goblins throw a leg locker curse and you're good.
So, legs together and stretched out with a dildo, vibrator, or equivalent in her sex and/or ass?  Perhaps the ankle cuffs locked together with a pole running up to the dildo(s) or whatever to pull her legs straight?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 06, 2017, 12:41:30 AM
I'm thinking something like this, but moreso, for one of Rose's punishments.  Her arms would be in an armbinder, a spreader bar to her ankle cuffs would spread her legs, and it would tie to a pole holding a vibrator in her sex and/or ass.
I would suggest keeping her legs shut instead. This causes a woman to be 'tighter' down there in both holes. This any rod, Dildo, or spiked club would feel much larger. Have the goblins throw a leg locker curse and you're good.
So, legs together and stretched out with a dildo, vibrator, or equivalent in her sex and/or ass?  Perhaps the ankle cuffs locked together with a pole running up to the dildo(s) or whatever to pull her legs straight?

Yeah. A leg-locker curse would do the same without the cuffs, leaving more of her skin free for whips and the like. Using spiked dildo/vibrators would work too.
Hanging her by her tits is a good option, but how about adding a little spice to it? Have the ropes pull her up then drop her down onto the dildos continuously, like a fucking machine. Do this during one of her display days, so people see her being fucked as well as punished. Keep her legs locked like before and its even more intense.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:46:15 AM
http://i.imgur.com/THIRdoD.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:47:12 AM
http://i.imgur.com/msumFHD.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:47:44 AM
http://i.imgur.com/duTYOSy.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:48:16 AM
http://i.imgur.com/3jQzMh5.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:51:11 AM
http://i.imgur.com/9fweyWK.png

I don't know if any of the goblins smoke

the golbins would probably learn to smoke just to do this
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:53:05 AM
http://imgur.com/EjFuAbx
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 02:56:42 AM
http://imgur.com/ggS6YXW
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:18:18 AM
https://i.imgur.com/zyT2X3y.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:25:47 AM
http://i.imgur.com/8J3J8cH.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:26:02 AM
http://i.imgur.com/9zUcnhV.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:26:28 AM
http://i.imgur.com/aV56Ods.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:26:50 AM
http://i.imgur.com/qU05wtF.png
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:27:05 AM
http://imgur.com/3NsQZ61
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:27:19 AM
http://i.imgur.com/Chii6Zn.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 06, 2017, 05:04:21 AM
http://i.imgur.com/8J3J8cH.jpg
Princess Aria of the False Accusation. Classic H game from Black Lilith.

Kept hoping they'd make a hentai of it like they did the Taimanin series and Kangoku Senkan, but alas...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 08:09:14 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2221654
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 08:15:32 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2669303
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 08:16:53 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2248505

Roses seat
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 08:24:07 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2013694
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 06, 2017, 09:39:37 AM
http://i.imgur.com/qU05wtF.png
That could get even more interesting with a blind hood.  Perhaps also vibrators in pussy and ass to keep her stimulated?

I could see something like this used for one of the times the goblins publically display a hooded Rose/Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 06, 2017, 09:41:33 AM
http://i.imgur.com/9zUcnhV.jpg
Nice, I could see this being done to Rose.  For Harry, there would be a parachute ball stretcher on his balls with a weight on each side of the horse, pulling them down hard on the sharp edge.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 11:37:22 AM
Could the goblins create an enchanted a buttplug that Work like a ring gag for her ass so that ass is permanently gaping while is in/on her?

maybe have it be have it work like an Eyelet.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 06, 2017, 03:04:01 PM
Could the goblins create an enchanted a buttplug that Work like a ring gag for her ass so that ass is permanently gaping while is in/on her?

maybe have it be have it work like an Eyelet.
That would be reasonable easy to do and they would enjoy stretching her out before inserting it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 06, 2017, 03:10:15 PM
Could the goblins create an enchanted a buttplug that Work like a ring gag for her ass so that ass is permanently gaping while is in/on her?

maybe have it be have it work like an Eyelet.
That would be reasonable easy to do and they would enjoy stretching her out before inserting it.

A shrinking charm could be used so that when the eyelet is unshrunk it would stretch her open as far as she could go.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 06, 2017, 03:23:54 PM
That could just as easily be used on males, too; both the set-up for the ass and the ring gag for the mouth.

The really nasty move would be using the slave's sex organs to snuff out cigarettes or cigars, say her clit or his cock head.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 01:21:31 AM
http://i.imgur.com/ycY9R1k.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 01:22:13 AM
http://i.imgur.com/J7x35fz.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 04:42:49 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2118176
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:21:52 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2737832
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:22:50 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2650092
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:23:59 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2778018
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:26:25 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2051238
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:31:44 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1825559
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:35:41 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1705027
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:39:43 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2337302
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:40:19 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2352977
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:43:16 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2007571
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:45:27 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1872057
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:46:18 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1897271
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:49:14 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1757176
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 05:49:43 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1723456
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 06:01:37 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/893635
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 06:02:47 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/808380
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 06:20:12 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2646195
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 06:37:18 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/203897
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 07, 2017, 06:38:47 AM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1555025
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 07, 2017, 12:04:17 PM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1872057
Elements of that, combined with elements of http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2352977 could show up later in the story if/when Rose/Harry gets appointed overseer of a couple of other witch slaves.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 07, 2017, 06:36:01 PM
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/1757176
That could be interesting with either a male slave or a goblin (for Rose) or for Harry to do a female slave or a female goblin being punished.  What would really be outre' is for this scene to be Harry and Rose in some mix of the two worldliness.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 07, 2017, 07:54:55 PM
http://i.imgur.com/J7x35fz.jpg
I could see this as a punishment for Rose.  For Harry, something similar but brushing between his balls and brushing against his cockhead, perhaps with his balls full stretched out to make them more sensitive.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 10, 2017, 05:24:05 AM
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=904722519

For something truly unique and humiliating, try this. Jump to 03:08 to see what I mean. Might make a great way for one of Rose's display days.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 11, 2017, 01:52:25 PM
https://www.pornhub.com/view_video.php?viewkey=904722519

For something truly unique and humiliating, try this. Jump to 03:08 to see what I mean. Might make a great way for one of Rose's display days.
Yes, that has potential and I will definitely consider it for a display day, along with something similar for Harry's equivalent display day (wonder how he'd take being dosed with stamina and virility potions and be made to orgasm heavily all day?  if nothing else, his balls would be worn out by the end of the display).  I'm thinking of having the display days be perhaps the day after a birthday celebration that sees Rose/Harry used quite extensively and intensely; not necessarily by a human or goblin, either.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 14, 2017, 07:19:24 AM
https://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Suspension-Bondage-Animation-673861598
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 14, 2017, 07:19:41 AM
https://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Blondie-06-692078900
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 14, 2017, 07:20:18 AM
https://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Blondie-05-692078560
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 14, 2017, 09:34:59 AM
https://crabbyoldman.deviantart.com/art/Obedience-Training-562884420
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 14, 2017, 10:22:08 AM
https://dannapearl.deviantart.com/art/Suspension-Bondage-Animation-673861598
That might be used for either a display day or a special occasion goblin celebration for Rose and Harry; might even get vibrators, both in the ass and in the sex organs, added to increase sensations.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 14, 2017, 10:25:03 AM
https://crabbyoldman.deviantart.com/art/Obedience-Training-562884420
I could see this working with Rose, or Harry, as an overseer to the slave with hands behind her head.  That could get rather interesting for a goblin feast or so.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 14, 2017, 01:51:01 PM
Lots and lots and lots of good ideas. Now we just need them put to words.

So, it's that time again cateagle...how goes the chapter? Are we close? Is the end visible on the horizon?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 15, 2017, 07:20:02 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3624464
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 15, 2017, 07:33:32 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3517279
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 15, 2017, 02:48:09 PM
Lots and lots and lots of good ideas. Now we just need them put to words.

So, it's that time again cateagle...how goes the chapter? Are we close? Is the end visible on the horizon?
Sigh!!  Not much has been happening to it the last two weeks, real life events (including the death of my only living younger brother) have been keeping me rather busy.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 15, 2017, 05:36:42 PM
Damn man. My condolences to you and your family. Stay strong good sir.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 16, 2017, 12:48:45 PM
Thank you very much.  I have to admit that it feels peculiar to be the oldest, and only survivor, of three brothers.  Even more peculiar that both died of natural causes.

I should note that this isn't the only event that's complicated the last couple weeks, merely the most impactful, others have just required road trips to deal with (gotta admit, my 2105 Kia Optima is a great interstate cruiser).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on August 16, 2017, 10:07:19 PM
Thank you very much.  I have to admit that it feels peculiar to be the oldest, and only survivor, of three brothers.  Even more peculiar that both died of natural causes.

I should note that this isn't the only event that's complicated the last couple weeks, merely the most impactful, others have just required road trips to deal with (gotta admit, my 2105 Kia Optima is a great interstate cruiser).

Are you a time traveller, Cateagle? Did you come back to the 21st century from the 22nd century? :o ;D :P

Sad to hear about your brothers. :'( :'(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 16, 2017, 11:34:52 PM
Nope, just a typo in a hurry, that should be 2015.  I'm firmly a resident of the 20th and 21st centuries (let's put it this way, I was out of high school, barely, at the time of the first moon landing).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on August 16, 2017, 11:44:27 PM
Nope, just a typo in a hurry, that should be 2015.  I'm firmly a resident of the 20th and 21st centuries (let's put it this way, I was out of high school, barely, at the time of the first moon landing).

I thought that might be the case!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 17, 2017, 01:49:57 AM
Nope, just a typo in a hurry, that should be 2015.  I'm firmly a resident of the 20th and 21st centuries (let's put it this way, I was out of high school, barely, at the time of the first moon landing).

So about 48 or 49 then, depending on B-Day. Just shows that anyone of any age can write good smut if they put their minds to it. ;)

Hope things are going better now. Admittedly, especially in the writing department, but over all for you and your family as well.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 17, 2017, 08:59:36 AM
You're off a bit.  If I was 18 in 1969 with the first lunar landing (and I just turned that near the end of that year), I'm a bit older now (65, turning 66 in late November).

Yeah, I hope the worst run of events is over now.  Still have at least one "road trip" to make to finish some work up down there, but that's an easy drive and I saw a restaurant on the way I want to check out (Up In Smoke in Hillsboro, TX, a good barbeque place in its earlier incarnation, want to see it now).  Of course, the paperwork on my brother's estate is going to take time (thankfully, there's family friend who's a lawyer down there to handle a lot of it and mail and email make a lot of things easier without a personal presence).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on August 17, 2017, 03:39:00 PM
You're off a bit.  If I was 18 in 1969 with the first lunar landing (and I just turned that near the end of that year), I'm a bit older now (65, turning 66 in late November).

Yeah, I hope the worst run of events is over now.  Still have at least one "road trip" to make to finish some work up down there, but that's an easy drive and I saw a restaurant on the way I want to check out (Up In Smoke in Hillsboro, TX, a good barbeque place in its earlier incarnation, want to see it now).  Of course, the paperwork on my brother's estate is going to take time (thankfully, there's family friend who's a lawyer down there to handle a lot of it and mail and email make a lot of things easier without a personal presence).
Well math was never my strongest subject. I was always better at history and cooking. That's why I'm a chef.
Hope everything with your brother's estate goes smoothly. Good luck man.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 17, 2017, 06:28:22 PM
Whereas I am good at math, as well as English, and am a retired (now) engineer.  Unusually for an engineer, my English SAT and GRE scores were actually higher than my Math ones, but both were so high as to be no problems.

In any case, going on a family holiday from Saturday through Wednesday, but I will take laptop with me in the hopes that I will be able to write.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 20, 2017, 10:08:46 PM
Not going to get any writing done on my trip; startled cat knocked open Diet Pepsi bottle onto my laptop, trashing it. :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on August 20, 2017, 11:08:03 PM
Well,that sucks.

BTW, my internet might be down for few days for the last week of this month.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 21, 2017, 10:15:29 PM
Well,that sucks.

BTW, my internet might be down for few days for the last week of this month.
Majorly, but at least my main computer at home is functional and the laptop looks to be possibly repairable, it looks like the harddrive is scragged.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 25, 2017, 12:08:30 PM
Laptop motherboard was totally shorted out, I'll need to purchase a replacement laptop. :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 28, 2017, 12:28:13 AM
Odd thought for something that *might* show up later, are succubi strictly female or can they be fully hermaphrodite or futa?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 28, 2017, 03:16:54 AM
Odd thought for something that *might* show up later, are succubi strictly female or can they be fully hermaphrodite or futa?

if you add succubi you could also add the Master and Servant Contract from Shinmai Maou no Testament (The Testament of Sister New Devil). you could also use Maria Naruse as the succubi.

http://shinmaimaou.wikia.com/wiki/Master_and_Servant_Contract
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 28, 2017, 06:15:01 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=64009806
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on August 28, 2017, 06:16:32 AM
https://www.reddit.com/r/HardcoreHentaiBondage/comments/6whpz5/forced_to_lay_eggs/
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 28, 2017, 05:38:51 PM
Odd thought for something that *might* show up later, are succubi strictly female or can they be fully hermaphrodite or futa?

if you add succubi you could also add the Master and Servant Contract from Shinmai Maou no Testament (The Testament of Sister New Devil). you could also use Maria Naruse as the succubi.

http://shinmaimaou.wikia.com/wiki/Master_and_Servant_Contract
If a succubus, or incubus, shows up, it will be because Rose (could be either for her) or Harry (succubus, only, to stay within guidelines) are being punished by being given to one for a set period of time.  Nothing like that Master and Servant Contract would be applicable.  However, if Rose, or Harry, is given to one, it will be a very strenuous, though highly erotic, time within the ritual circle used to call the succubus and/or incubus though I suspect the goblins will supply suitable furniture, if required, or it will be conjured for the length of the punishment time.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 02, 2017, 06:13:23 AM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2300659
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 02, 2017, 12:40:44 PM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2300659
Interesting concept though I don't know that I'll use it.  I could see it as a special punishment or goblin entertainment feature.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 03, 2017, 01:12:18 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=658317&pid=0
 :o
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 03, 2017, 02:19:12 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=658317&pid=0
 :o
Okay, I could see that being used on Harry as a punishment.  With the correct charm that would work on Rose's clit like an engorgio, I could see it done with her, too.  Say the arms in a armbinder?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 03, 2017, 04:44:19 PM
For the record, such a charm does exist in zArkham's "Harry Potter and the Rejected Path" on FFN (chapter 23 for the Japanese version, chapter 25 for the Latin-ized version - I could see a succubus using it, too, which case I'd have her use the Japanese version).

I wonder if a succubus using that charm to get extra pleasure from Harry would fit violate the rules of the site?  I don't think it would since there are no males receiving male organs but I do wonder.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 04, 2017, 06:18:13 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=658317&pid=0
 :o
Okay, I could see that being used on Harry as a punishment.  With the correct charm that would work on Rose's clit like an engorgio, I could see it done with her, too.  Say the arms in a armbinder?

I was just looking threw picture under the predicament bondage tag and it came up.just looking at the pic made me wince so,I had to post it hear.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 04, 2017, 04:49:22 PM
That is an interesting tag to look into; some very interesting scenes there.  The artist for this particular work has some fascinating stuff, too, though some is a bit disturbing.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 06, 2017, 08:55:30 AM
Do you think the weasley twins tested why of there more sexual products for the adult section of Weasleys wizarding wheezes  on Rose?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 06, 2017, 04:04:07 PM
Do you think the weasley twins tested why of there more sexual products for the adult section of Weasleys wizarding wheezes  on Rose?
*tilts head*  Possibly, with her permission.  I could see them working a deal with Harry, too; though the testing with Rose would likely be more in depth.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 08, 2017, 09:11:49 AM
Any update on next chapter?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 08, 2017, 12:19:36 PM
No real change; real life has rather overwhelmed me the last couple or so weeks.

OTOH, my imagination is working out a very interesting portion for later, including justification for Rose/Harry to be an offering to a succubus.  It's going to get very hot and heated there.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 10, 2017, 11:44:12 AM
Any chance on you posting something anytime soon? We've had lots of great ideas and scenarios suggested, but we'd all really like to see an actual chapter.
We've come to the end of the tourist season here in Blackpool now, so I'm going to have some more free time myself. And I recently downloaded the Dragon Voice to Text program, so I might be able to write out some more myself, but I'd still like to see some more from you cat. T1p2 seems to have dropped the challenge, so its really on just you and me now, and I really want to see what you've got.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 10, 2017, 05:47:05 PM
It's a matter of binding my muse down long enough to finish the chapter I'm working on and then move on.  To help "encourage" her, I'm playing with some scenarios for later; she seems to love the succubus one. ;)  I've even got a good reason for the goblins to make Rose/Harry an offering to a succubus; the resulting session will produce some results that surprise and please (at least some of) the goblins and those of at least one other sentient magical species (though not one normally recognized as such).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 11, 2017, 05:44:13 AM
I understand about muse being difficult to tie down.The muse for the story that I was righting has completely left me. I had to many story ideas at once across to many fandoms leading to my ideas getting muddled and forgetting most of them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 13, 2017, 02:44:10 AM
(https://i.redditmedia.com/x8BgbkYz6VNZaG_G4Tfyw4vOYqO0jsmfzrZzZfTygmM.jpg?w=575&s=0eabc22de3e891aade15fdfab0483c1c)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 14, 2017, 07:20:40 AM
Hmm, I could see Rose/Harry doing that with a couple female slaves she/he is overseeing.  Could be even more interesting if a goblin later did something similar to all three.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 18, 2017, 10:08:37 AM
Any luck on tying that darn muse down and making her give up the ghost?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 19, 2017, 04:06:31 PM
Not much, so far.  Going to need to get out the nipple clamps and other "toys".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 21, 2017, 07:44:26 AM
Not much, so far.  Going to need to get out the nipple clamps and other "toys".

Got any idea where exactly you're stuck? We might be able to help push through the block and get your next chapter finished.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 21, 2017, 08:02:28 PM
It's more a matter of working out all the consequences of an event and how they flow toward the situation at the start of either story.  I'm starting to get a handle on it, but thinking it through takes time.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 22, 2017, 04:28:25 PM
Are you writing both versions at the same time? If so, that might be part of where your problem lies.

Certain consequences for Rose are obviously going to be impossible for Harry and vice versa. Results of an act by a girl will sometimes be far different that those same acts by a boy.

I'd suggest that if you are going to keep doing both male and female versions of the fic, that you do so on an alternating schedule. Do one chapter for Rose, then one for Harry, and so on. That way, you can see how the plot points develop for one, and will be better able to see how the same points affect the other.

I don't have time right now to actually write, but if you want, I'll look over any outlines or plot ideas for the fics you might have. If there's anything I can offer, I will. I'm very eager to see if you can get this challenge going again. T1p2 seems to have dropped it completely.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 22, 2017, 09:09:56 PM
Alternating between the two stories as I write, one per writing session.  Most of the present working out right now is the same either way, but some isn't.  It will be a definitely different Seventh Year and the end of Sixth Year will be a bit different, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 24, 2017, 04:48:20 AM
Well, the offer for outline consultation is still there. I hope you don't go too crazy with historical backstory. When I originally created the challenge, I was hoping takers would focus more on Rose/Harry/Acacia/Juniper/whatever-femHarry-name's interaction with the Goblins and her time in Tirith Ungol, leading up to her eventual freedom and her mindset after; Do I try and make a new life now? Or, do I go back to Tirith Ungol, where things made sense? Do I want freedom, or chains? What would make me happy - being free, or being a Goblin slave?

That's the kind of psychological study in the fic I was hoping for.

I'm currently on the waiting list for Archive Of Our Own. I'm going to post this challenge there too, as well as a Worm one I have, and perhaps others. Hopefully we'll get some more takers than we have on just HPfanfic.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 24, 2017, 06:11:51 AM
Well, the offer for outline consultation is still there. I hope you don't go too crazy with historical backstory. When I originally created the challenge, I was hoping takers would focus more on Rose/Harry/Acacia/Juniper/whatever-femHarry-name's interaction with the Goblins and her time in Tirith Ungol, leading up to her eventual freedom and her mindset after; Do I try and make a new life now? Or, do I go back to Tirith Ungol, where things made sense? Do I want freedom, or chains? What would make me happy - being free, or being a Goblin slave?

That's the kind of psychological study in the fic I was hoping for.

I'm currently on the waiting list for Archive Of Our Own. I'm going to post this challenge there too, as well as a Worm one I have, and perhaps others. Hopefully we'll get some more takers than we have on just HPfanfic.

sorry probably my fault.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 24, 2017, 10:58:36 AM
I will be looking at his/her interactions and the choice faced at the end as I get farther into my story (though I know the final choice my Rose/Harry will make, and why) and there will be arguments for either way.  There will also be good and bad goblins involved as well as other beings.  The chapter after this will delve into how, despite being "raised" by far from ideal ostensible guardians, Rose/Harry became the person we saw at the start of the story (enquiring goblins want to know) and we will also look at some surprises for others.

Also, I'm not going too crazy with the historical backstory, just enough to show the main points that drive to the opening scenes of my stories.  That's stil a fair bit and you get the sense of a Rose/Harry much more at ease with her/his sexuality than canon!Harry.  That will be needed with what the goblins, and others with their permission, will be doing to and with her/him.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 26, 2017, 10:58:08 AM
I should also note that which society Rose/Harry ultimately chooses will also be affected by which she/he feels more comfortable in and part of the training for the indentured service will include the goblin language along with their history and philosophy.  I have an idea for the training which I've not really seen used much (read one story after I already had the idea that used something rather similar and then one on ficwad that implied a similar approach was possible).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 28, 2017, 11:32:15 AM
Which fics were they? Might drum up some inspiration I can add to the challenge premise when I can finally post it to AO3.

Any update on your progress? Are we getting close to seeing the new chap yet?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 28, 2017, 03:47:44 PM
Well, the story with something similar to what I'm using for some of the training (input of basic knowledge, skills, attitudes, etc.) is Sinyk's "Harry Potter and the Four Heirs" on fanfiction.net.  The other story which has a somewhat similar concept is Scuffy1's "Motorcycle" on Ficwad, though you have to go through a few chapters to find the concept and it deals in single memories at a time.  Both are good stories but rate no higher than PG-13.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 02, 2017, 09:23:10 PM
How goes the story?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 03, 2017, 08:13:24 PM
Moving slowly at the moment, caught an error and am doing some rewriting to fix it.  I don't want to repeat JKR's playing with dates and days.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 04, 2017, 09:50:12 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2224214
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 04, 2017, 09:50:43 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1571302
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 04, 2017, 09:51:17 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1549183
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 04, 2017, 09:58:56 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3846884
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 04, 2017, 11:11:00 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2928986
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on October 05, 2017, 05:35:00 AM
Got my new AO3 account activated now. I've already gone ahead and posted the challenge there.

Cat, I hope you don't mind, but I took the first three chaps you posted, and the 'processing' chap from T1p2, and combined them into one for the initial post prompt. I did some editing, mainly to keep the name as Juniper, though I did give you and T1p2 the credit.

Here's the link to the prompt; http://archiveofourown.org/works/12272790

Hopefully, we'll get some more takers now.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 05, 2017, 07:41:07 PM
Got my new AO3 account activated now. I've already gone ahead and posted the challenge there.

Cat, I hope you don't mind, but I took the first three chaps you posted, and the 'processing' chap from T1p2, and combined them into one for the initial post prompt. I did some editing, mainly to keep the name as Juniper, though I did give you and T1p2 the credit.

Here's the link to the prompt; http://archiveofourown.org/works/12272790

Hopefully, we'll get some more takers now.
Quite, I have no problem with my first three chapters being used.  Hopefully this will inspire others and I may draw some inspiration from them (yes, I'm on AO3).  In the meantime, I continue to work on my stories (actually, working on the Rose story now, then I'll go back and do the Harry story for a bit).

If you get any takers, please post a notice about them here.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on October 12, 2017, 07:37:20 PM
Quite, I have no problem with my first three chapters being used.  Hopefully this will inspire others and I may draw some inspiration from them (yes, I'm on AO3).  In the meantime, I continue to work on my stories (actually, working on the Rose story now, then I'll go back and do the Harry story for a bit).

If you get any takers, please post a notice about them here.

Speaking of, any progress on those fronts? So far all AO3 has generated is a few kudos and two bookmarks.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on October 13, 2017, 06:31:23 AM
And in other news, I've now gone and posted my old 'Warden of Azkaban' challenge to AO3 as well.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/12349245/chapters/28087635

Here's hoping something comes of that, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on October 22, 2017, 08:15:43 AM
Do you have a physical date that you are going to upload a new chapter
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 26, 2017, 08:06:55 PM
With NaNoWriMo almost on us, I'm going to bind my muse in the comfy chair and aim for a posting on my birthday, Nov. 26.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 26, 2017, 09:10:31 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/rivawi/484322/Re-education-part-2
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on November 08, 2017, 12:41:43 PM
With NaNoWriMo almost on us, I'm going to bind my muse in the comfy chair and aim for a posting on my birthday, Nov. 26.

Is that goal still looking feasible? Or has your muse been rebellious as usual.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on November 09, 2017, 01:57:57 AM
https://e-hentai.org/g/1139744/cd45778bdf/

Now we can put the idea to real visuals...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 03:36:04 AM
https://img00.deviantart.net/a9b3/i/2017/103/1/4/slut_ride_by_piroro-db5nen7.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 03:49:55 AM
https://zesteel.deviantart.com/art/Furniture-Girl-Treated-by-Little-House-Slut-695730184
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 03:50:37 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=65447552
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 03:51:12 AM
https://julianapostata.deviantart.com/art/sacrificial-parade-691554926
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 03:54:42 AM
https://imgur.com/gTubHGI
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 04:04:21 AM
https://imgur.com/CbIwg2y
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 15, 2017, 04:04:40 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ktora/47578/Racing-Stripes
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 18, 2017, 03:39:59 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/LindaDanvers/472520/Breaking-Vampirella-3-Heavy-Metal-Milking-Bondage
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on November 18, 2017, 03:47:07 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ktora/85294/Pennyroyal-3
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on November 25, 2017, 04:55:05 AM
Anyone heard from cateagle? He hasn't replied to anything for a while now. I hope he's still on track to update tomorrow, like he planned...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 25, 2017, 06:34:46 PM
Anyone heard from cateagle? He hasn't replied to anything for a while now. I hope he's still on track to update tomorrow, like he planned...
Unfortunately, I'm not.  Real life, in the form of a cold and then plenty of things demanding my attention slowed down writing.  At this point, I don't want to make further promises. :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Alron on November 27, 2017, 12:36:35 AM
might i sugest workin on one of the stories instead of both of them
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 27, 2017, 09:24:28 PM
Actually, I've only been working on Rose's story.  I figure when I get that finished I can transport over what I can to Harry's story and then make the necessary adjustments.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 27, 2017, 09:28:16 PM
https://julianapostata.deviantart.com/art/sacrificial-parade-691554926
Put that frame on a cart, so as to move through Gringotts' tunnels, and my muse tells me you'll have Rose/Harry being brought as an offering to a Succubus as part of an ancient deal between her, or her people, and the goblins.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on November 28, 2017, 12:33:09 AM
Actually, I've only been working on Rose's story.  I figure when I get that finished I can transport over what I can to Harry's story and then make the necessary adjustments.

Need a beta? Blackpool is undergoing some major construction right now, and my hours at work have been cut by 2/3. I'd be happy to help out.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 02, 2017, 03:48:21 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=942831

Edit: is that better
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 02, 2017, 03:49:21 AM
404 Forbidden. No go on that pic Call.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 02, 2017, 10:20:52 PM
It comes up fine for me.  Don't know if that helps anything.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 02, 2017, 10:28:27 PM
It comes up fine for me.  Don't know if that helps anything.

I changed the link
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 03, 2017, 08:29:30 AM
Better. Similar to what I suggested for Rose a while back, during meetings between Daggerok and important clients. Remember, having Rose tied with her ass up in the air, and the clients required to sheath their wands in her asshole? Maybe with a charm that causes her to orgasm every time a wand is pulled from her ass?

How goes the battle anyway, Cat? Any chance we could see a chap before the new year?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 05, 2017, 01:20:34 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=52420847
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 08, 2017, 09:39:04 AM
Came up with a new snippet to try and help inspire some other writers. Posted it to AO3 just now.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/12272790/chapters/29604414

I'll post it to HPfanficarchive in a while. They still seem to be in server maintenance right now.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 09, 2017, 02:07:08 AM
Hey guys, is HPfanficarchive still down for the rest of you like it is for me? Every time I try to load the site, I keep getting this;

http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/index.php

Been two days now. I could see a few hours, even a day, but this is too much.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 09, 2017, 03:17:11 AM
Hey guys, is HPfanficarchive still down for the rest of you like it is for me? Every time I try to load the site, I keep getting this;

http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/index.php

Been two days now. I could see a few hours, even a day, but this is too much.

Its working for me now

http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/browse.php?type=recent

try that link
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 09, 2017, 03:19:42 AM
Tried it. Same result.

Gonna reboot my computer. Maybe its a hiccup in my system...

edit; Nope, still the same result. What the heck is going on with them?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 09, 2017, 04:00:30 AM
Tried it. Same result.

Gonna reboot my computer. Maybe its a hiccup in my system...

edit; Nope, still the same result. What the heck is going on with them?

what browser do you use?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 09, 2017, 04:06:26 AM
Tried it. Same result.

Gonna reboot my computer. Maybe its a hiccup in my system...

edit; Nope, still the same result. What the heck is going on with them?

what browser do you use?

Chrome. Occasionally Firefox. Gonna try that one now.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 09, 2017, 12:12:26 PM
FWIW, I'm using IE and get the HPFFA website without a problem.  There was a bit of downtime Thursday evening (my time) but it was up, for me, yesterday.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 09, 2017, 05:32:05 PM
Finally back up for me now. Just added the new snippet to the original challenge.

Hope somebody picks it up.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 06:30:56 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2734062
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 06:32:15 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/trainerjet/557718/Discipline-Room
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 06:47:18 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=66223728
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 06:48:42 PM
https://blackroseseduction.deviantart.com/art/Elegant-Touch-Waiting-Room-572621392
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 06:57:36 PM
https://blackroseseduction.deviantart.com/art/Mouth-to-Gag-to-Mouth-468248026
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 07:01:30 PM
https://hopee1943.deviantart.com/art/Stuck-Together-588590797
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 07:02:56 PM
https://flockchan.deviantart.com/art/All-wrapped-up-435268800

I prefer the face to face one Especially for a male harry and one of the female goblin slaves
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 10, 2017, 07:09:56 PM
Have Fleur do something like this To Fem got Bill
https://erikson1.deviantart.com/art/ft74-372898185

https://erikson1.deviantart.com/art/ft55-372897314
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 14, 2017, 04:41:32 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1323603
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 15, 2017, 10:04:56 PM
An Manga/Light Novel that might help with this story is "Re:Monster" its  about a Main character that got re-incarnated as a goblin
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 18, 2017, 11:30:11 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=62084854
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 19, 2017, 06:04:50 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=46679190
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 23, 2017, 11:10:45 PM
https://i.imgur.com/fstBzV6.jpg
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 24, 2017, 04:01:36 AM
https://kaockl.deviantart.com/art/Furniture-Girl-Treated-by-Little-House-Slut-695730184

that is one way to keep a Corset down
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 24, 2017, 04:07:33 AM
https://kaockl.deviantart.com/art/Service-Meatchen-klein-683307358
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 24, 2017, 04:18:32 AM
https://a-sennov.deviantart.com/art/Wheel-695263598
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 24, 2017, 10:23:53 AM
https://a-sennov.deviantart.com/art/Wheel-695263598

That one fits nicely with the snippet I added to the challenge recently. Nice Call.

Now, let's hope it inspires cateagle to finish his next chapter...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 24, 2017, 09:38:38 PM
(https://i.redd.it/pblxwj29rb301.png)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 25, 2017, 11:07:54 PM
the Grinch in me would like some Christmas suffering for fem harry any chance for an update anytime soon?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 26, 2017, 12:35:33 PM
the Grinch in me would like some Christmas suffering for fem harry any chance for an update anytime soon?

I've started work on a new snippet. Small spoiler - time in one of the Goblin Forges. Might take a little bit to (heh heh) flesh out, but I'm hoping to get it up before the week is out.

Now, where's cateagle? We need an update man!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 28, 2017, 01:59:31 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=51362397
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 28, 2017, 01:59:52 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=54444349
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 28, 2017, 02:26:41 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=61801294

swap it form a nose ring leash to a clit ring leash  and then you have something the goblins might do to femharry
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 28, 2017, 02:31:57 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=60452263
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 28, 2017, 02:49:30 AM
https://a-sennov.deviantart.com/art/Behind-Bars-7-696357718
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on December 31, 2017, 05:53:09 AM
Any update any time soon?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 01, 2018, 05:47:48 AM
Any update any time soon?

I've got a snip that is about half way done. Just doing the last scene now, I hope to have it up by Wed.

Still haven't heard from cateagle. Hope everything is alright.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 01, 2018, 10:55:09 PM
https://tilly-monster.deviantart.com/art/Your-Not-Playing-Along-276618670
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 02, 2018, 04:08:28 PM
Posted a new snip on AO3 and Hpfanfic. Links below.

AO3; https://archiveofourown.org/works/12272790/chapters/30304692

Hpfanfic; http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/viewstory.php?sid=1705&chapter=6
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 02, 2018, 06:52:01 PM
https://ravenor11.deviantart.com/art/Samus-Aran-1-2-723197971
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 02, 2018, 07:21:37 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=anal_hook&pid=42
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 02, 2018, 07:23:08 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2629134
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 03, 2018, 01:54:16 AM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2884659
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 06, 2018, 09:52:58 AM
Got to thinking the other day about possible endings for this fic, if anyone actually manages to make it into a real one.

I was thinking something like this scenario;

Rose/Acacia/Juniper finishes her term and is released. During her time, Hermione and Luna have 'hooked' up. Others can be paired off or not based on the author's preferance.

For the first few months after her release, R/A/J spends her time catching up with Andromeda and Teddy, helping Kingsley, and basically just recovering. Maybe she goes on a few dates with various guys/girls but nothing happens.

After about half a year, she starts to isolate herself again, going on long solo trips around the world, trying to find inner peace. Finally, she returns to England almost a year to the day of the end of her contract. She sits down with Andromeda, and they talk. Hermione and Luna are there also. R/A/J talks about how, despite the pain, humilation, degredation, and all, she misses the sense of security, even 'normality' of what she endured. For three years, it was her life, and after everything she experienced prior to it, her time in Tirith Ungol made sense.

Luna would, of course, point out that she needs to do what is best for her. R/A/J says she can't just abandon Teddy, and all the great work that needs to be done to help the Wizarding World. Hermione, surprisingly, comes up with a solution, and pulls out a roll of parchment.

A few days later, R/A/J walks into now Senior Director Daggerok's office. He makes some comment about never expecting to see Juniper willingly walk back into Gringotts again. R/A/J pulls out the roll of parchment silently, and hands it to him. He looks down and sees a new slavery contract. There's a sound, and he looks up.

R/A/J will have dropped her robes, standing naked before him. Around her neck will be a simple iron collar with a chain, and her nipples and clit will have been re-pierced.

Further details for the situation would be up to the author/s who take this up, but what do you guys think? Would this make for a possible good epilogue?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on January 07, 2018, 04:17:44 AM
I suggested a similar idea to Cateagle in thread about T1p2's attempt.

Basically the British wizarding world introduces a "marriage law" to help increase the population, R/J/A/whatever, on her release from her initial contract, decides to re-up her contract to avoid being married off to someone she doesn't like. Hermione, being pressured by Ron, and while leary of a "slavery" contract, figures that the Goblins would look after her better than what Ron would. After R/A/J's second term, and Hermione's first they both decide to re-up for the rest of their lives.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on January 07, 2018, 04:31:09 AM
Wouldn't it be amusing if after serving her time Acacia/FemHarry & a possible female friend(Hermione/Daphne?) had decided to stay slaves of the Goblins and had several children.

Cue one(or more) of such children(Eldest Daughter/s of Acacia/FemHarry & female friend) signing up to be a Goblin slave/s themselves.
(perhaps the Goblins could require repayment of any education fees?)

Alternatively said kid/s could end up as a Goblin slave (after they reach 18) in a scenario like above?

Maybe the eldest daughter of Acacia/FemHarry & fellow female slave decide to be Goblin slave for a few years in order to keep their mother/s company.

was part of it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 03:40:35 AM
I could see something like that but I think that Rose/acacia/juniper would not go for a life long contract especially not at first but rather a contract that had to be renewed once every few years. And that her contract would be voided under certain conditions.

I could also see her try other things before she goes back to the goblins like trying to have Luna and/or hermione fill the void and for a time it works. Then have her try with Fleur and Gabriella and then eventually go back to the goblins with a contract that has to be renewed monthly at first and then eventually working up to a contract that is renewed every few year.


Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 03:31:48 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=4554764
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 07:22:17 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1970960

there is the sign of the deathly hallows in this pick see if you can spot it
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 07:31:57 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=773651

some goblin slaves being led up Diagon alley to be returned to the ministry after there sentence is over.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 07:34:58 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3955423
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 07:37:43 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1525900

https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1533696
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 08, 2018, 09:26:46 PM
https://yes-i-did.deviantart.com/art/Look-at-This-473958647
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 01:30:41 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3614086
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 01:33:57 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3019027
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 09, 2018, 04:33:07 PM
I'd like some thoughts as to a scenario where this scene would play out for R/A/J.

https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6256462

I like the pillory design, and was wondering how you guys would use it in a scene.

And some other pics to inspire other writers.

https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6571719
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/3918088

These next two are related...
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6402146
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6402149

Milking duty. I think that, along with vibrators in her ass, this would be another thing that R/A/J would hate. Thoughts?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 05:55:41 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1989542
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2367210
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2838458

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 05:56:49 PM

These next two are related...
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6402146
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6402149

Milking duty. I think that, along with vibrators in her ass, this would be another thing that R/A/J would hate. Thoughts?

maybe do milking Duty as your short chapter or a Cart rider
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:02:51 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/Fallen-Queen-Washing-630365118
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:04:09 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/Fallen-Queen-Serving-Drinks-651892915
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:05:30 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/Fallen-Queen-Victory-Parade-613230659
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:06:15 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/Fallen-Queen-Bow-Decoration-626518148
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:18:53 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/Slaves-Girls-in-the-Mill-House-597885202
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:19:05 PM
https://noone102000.deviantart.com/art/The-Mine-Pushing-a-wagon-576499753
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 09, 2018, 10:20:29 PM
https://www.deviantart.com/art/How-I-spent-summer-59-724662054
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 10, 2018, 09:31:05 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=600117&pid=10
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 10, 2018, 10:05:39 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2259029

what is the thing thats being used on the breasts in this pick there was no tag for it?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 10, 2018, 10:44:44 PM
I'd like some thoughts as to a scenario where this scene would play out for R/A/J.

https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6256462

I like the pillory design, and was wondering how you guys would use it in a scene.


maybe use the pillory to publicly display R/A/j at the end of her time with each Goblin Clan before she is healed to be auctioned to the next clan

maybe have the Goblins take Photo of R/A/J and take the best 12 pics by goblin standards and turn it into a Calendar that they give R/A/J at the end of her servitude.

Maybe have the Goblins sell Calendar of Different girls with the Girls who didn't get same identity protections getting there name on there Calendars.

with R/A/J Calendar still being sold but her identity being hidden

can you just imagine the goblins setting up a Calendar shop in the Gringotts lobby to sell the Calendars and maybe show people buying them.

maybe have a seen of when R/A/J gets out she sees a Calendar that Hermione or Luna own and  she realises that its her in the Calendar.

I don't know if Bellatrix is Dead in this AU but you can just Imagen a scene  were Augusta Longbottom buying multiple copy's of the Bellatrix Calendar in the Middle of the Gringotts lobby in front of everyone

maybe have the Goblin PR team have proceeds from the calendar go toward helping Clean up after The war.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 10, 2018, 11:43:24 PM
give a death eater girl a choice between a muggle or magical punishment she pick the muggle one thinking that it wont be as bad https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1671067
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 12:27:29 AM
the closest tag i could find is dilation belt https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3305245

maybe have a goblins clan use a big ring and labia piercing to hold R/A/J vagina open at all times so she feels even more exposed like the Big metal ring in that picture
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 01:14:08 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1644242
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 11, 2018, 01:40:03 AM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2259029

what is the thing thats being used on the breasts in this pick there was no tag for it?

A breast vice. Old school torture device, basically a super sized version of thumbscrews. Or, for another comparision, a nipple clamp that covers the whole tit.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 04:22:02 AM
https://e-hentai.org/g/664141/61ebed5c0d/ some sleeping arrangements for R/A/J i don't think i have ever seem the sleep arrangement for this group translated before
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 05:15:35 AM
Maybe with magic have the golbins do something like this with R/A/j https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5620914

it would have to work like the other magical tools that the goblins use in that it cant do actual damage and have her pull something along by her clit . maybe have the chain be enchanted so that it will break before it does any real damage

maybe some sort of Slave girl race with the Girls competing to see who can pull what weight over twenty meters the quickest
 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 05:22:06 AM
this one is also for male harry but could be adapted for R/A/J https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3474809

it seem like the Futa in the pic has had there balls bound and then slotted into a grove that goes from the back of the chair to the centre make it so they cant get up with out help because they need someone to reach under the chair and help them free there balls as they get up.

maybe for R/A/J have the goblin attach a metal bar to the end of her clit chain and then run the chain threw the grove so that the bar is pulled up against the bottom of the chair so that someone has to pull the bar to the back and out of the grove to alow R/A/J to get up.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 04:54:06 PM
Maybe with magic have the golbins do something like this with R/A/j https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5620914

it would have to work like the other magical tools that the goblins use in that it cant do actual damage and have her pull something along by her clit . maybe have the chain be enchanted so that it will break before it does any real damage

maybe some sort of Slave girl race with the Girls competing to see who can pull what weight over twenty meters the quickest
As an alternative to using the clit chain, have the rope/chain go to a dildo that the gal has to retain in her pussy using muscle control; with punishment if she allows the dildo to slip out.  Strengthening those muscles could be part of the slave training regime.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 04:56:46 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2259029

what is the thing thats being used on the breasts in this pick there was no tag for it?

A breast vice. Old school torture device, basically a super sized version of thumbscrews. Or, for another comparision, a nipple clamp that covers the whole tit.
If one wishes enhanced torture, the sides facing the breasts can have points on them, perhaps with different degrees of sharpness for different levels of torture.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 06:02:37 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2259029

what is the thing thats being used on the breasts in this pick there was no tag for it?

A breast vice. Old school torture device, basically a super sized version of thumbscrews. Or, for another comparision, a nipple clamp that covers the whole tit.
If one wishes enhanced torture, the sides facing the breasts can have points on them, perhaps with different degrees of sharpness for different levels of torture.

Nice to see that you are still,alive any update on the story's or have you got writers block?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:05:43 PM
By the way I have worked out why I can't even start writing the story it has to do with R/A/J life before. I want her to walk into Gringotts a blushing virgin who has led a similar life to canon Harry. But I know that would extremely unlikely. So because I can't decide on how R/A/J life before would have been like I can't even start getting note down on paper.

The idea of a Fem!Harry who walks into Gringotts a  virgin with about as much sexual experience as canon Harry seems to  have in the books. Does have its appeal.

 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 07:15:09 PM
For Christmas, the muse delivered a way around some things that had blocked me (muse looks cute in a red with white fur trim micro-minikini ;) ).  I am making progress but I want to wait until I've a better feel for things before I make any promises about next chapter postings.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:23:13 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/566397/Happy-New-Year

for slyfer101 since be said he likes pillory's
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:26:40 PM
https://e-hentai.org/g/1030079/6e48185c4a/

https://e-hentai.org/g/749259/9714040f18/

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on January 11, 2018, 07:31:04 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/566397/Happy-New-Year

for slyfer101 since be said he likes pillory's

Nice. And as an added bonus, you posted this on my birthday as well! Good Timing!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:35:51 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/517557/Back-Views
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:36:02 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/531381/WIP-Punishment-Room-No.7
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:38:32 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/339204/Morning-Call-
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:39:16 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/ikelag/566397/Happy-New-Year

for slyfer101 since be said he likes pillory's

Nice. And as an added bonus, you posted this on my birthday as well! Good Timing!

happy birthday then
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:51:00 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=54097235
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 07:57:27 PM
not really a pillory but i fond it under the tag
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=pool&s=show&id=3490

mabye have a goblin pub useing R/A/J to avertise by haveing her come out of the wall about the door like this https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1707308

and have one of the thing she is having to advertise is that everyone who buys a meal at the pub gets a free fuck with her being fucked on the other side of the wall as she is advertising.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 08:13:18 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2891724&pool_id=43967
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 08:40:06 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3987665

there one one story on Adultfanfition that by made cow That had Harry meet a group and in his first meeti they make him sit on a chair made of girls.

maybe the goblins could do something like that like make the king a seat made of living  slave girls
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 09:12:53 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=3790469
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on January 11, 2018, 09:39:01 PM

Snip

there one one story on Adultfanfition that by made cow That had Harry meet a group and in his first meeti they make him sit on a chair made of girls.

maybe the goblins could do something like that like make the king a seat made of living  slave girls

Link? Please.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 10:08:02 PM

Snip

there one one story on Adultfanfition that by made cow That had Harry meet a group and in his first meeti they make him sit on a chair made of girls.

maybe the goblins could do something like that like make the king a seat made of living  slave girls

Link? Please.

it has been deleted by the author they deleted all there story's it was Winds of Change by Madcow (https://www.reddit.com/r/HPfanfiction/comments/55km62/lf_old_madcow_fics/)

from memory during the meeting one of the girls that is part of the chair undoes harry fly with her teeth and starts giving harry a blowjob
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 10:17:54 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=154205&pool_id=43967

R/A/J being used to help one the the goblins animal breading programs or to collect the main ingredient to the gruel that the slaves ate in Slyfer101 latest spinet
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 11:02:51 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2259029

For extra fun in balancing, put her neck and wrists in a stock.

Note that without the breast press and with a parachute ball stretcher, or something similar, and weights on either side of the wedge, this could work for slave!Harry, too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 11:09:58 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=154205&pool_id=43967

R/A/J being used to help one the the goblins animal breading programs or to collect the main ingredient to the gruel that the slaves ate in Slyfer101 latest spinet
Perhaps using a hippogriff instead of a horse?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 11:29:55 PM
do you thing the goblins would do this to R/A/J ass. with magic they would portrayal be able to do it with a put a complete ring in by shrinking it with magic be for inserting it

https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2978780
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 11, 2018, 11:48:40 PM
do you thing the goblins would do this to R/A/J ass. with magic they would portrayal be able to do it with a put a complete ring in by shrinking it with magic be for inserting it

https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2978780
Definitely possible with a temporary shrinking charm on the ring.  This could be an interesting punishment for a slave, either female or male.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 11, 2018, 11:58:10 PM
do you thing the goblins would do this to R/A/J ass. with magic they would portrayal be able to do it with a put a complete ring in by shrinking it with magic be for inserting it

https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=2978780
Definitely possible with a temporary shrinking charm on the ring.  This could be an interesting punishment for a slave, either female or male.
maybe a charm on the ring so that the ring shrinks when a dick goes threw it so that the only time that her her ass is even close to closed is when its wrapped around a dick.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2018, 02:44:10 AM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/kajinman/564560/Jenny-Poussin-squat
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2018, 03:12:37 AM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=55376746
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 12, 2018, 03:41:01 AM
https://e-hentai.org/g/619338/95d90a3950/

some amour the golbins could make R/A/J wear
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 12, 2018, 11:35:06 PM
http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/kajinman/564560/Jenny-Poussin-squat
Instead of a bar connecting the two weights, it's a stock around R/A/J's neck and picking up her wrist manacles.  Could also work for Harry with just one in his ass and, perhaps, something pressing on his balls (double weighted parachute ball stretcher pulling them down on a sharp wedge, maybe?).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 01:56:25 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6510035
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 03:10:59 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/494531
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:17:38 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/4982829
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:28:26 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5490464
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:30:55 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/4249180
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:51:25 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/563247
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:53:50 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6587156
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 06:59:53 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6588190
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:08:17 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6377496
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:11:43 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6510624
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:14:52 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6397044
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:17:09 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6144648
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:17:36 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5763967
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:18:57 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5573153
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:23:00 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5851554
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:34:06 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6188564
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:44:01 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5171230
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:48:28 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6330028
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:51:09 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5794613
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 07:53:30 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6002957
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 08:14:37 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5378380
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 08:19:15 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/1754256
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 08:25:00 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/30900#
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 08:55:11 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/389781
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 09:02:34 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5140597
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6476596
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5964986
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5993697
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5465464

something that R/A/J could do in the muggle world maybe the goblins make bets with her that if she can do it she gets time off her sentence but if she fails she gets another year
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 09:10:59 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5177083
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5465457
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5465456


another type of gamble to lower her sentence but if she fails she gets permanent tattoos

you could use it to show how bad R/A/J at spoting loop holes in contracts again

maybe have her make it so that she has to actually have a chance to win the challenge but have her not specifie how much chance she has to have so she thinks that she has a 50:50 chance to win but the Goblins make her change to win as low as they possible can by giving her a 1 in a billion chance to win.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 09:18:50 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6410693
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5116007
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 09:29:55 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6523066
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2018, 01:19:28 PM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6510035
Multiple slaves used in a ritual?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2018, 01:24:19 PM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/4982829
I could see R/A/J in something like this for a special occasion; during which she gets restrained and then taken repeatedly as part of the "festivities".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 13, 2018, 01:27:41 PM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6144648
Could be interesting to bind two female slaves head to crotch.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 13, 2018, 08:34:12 PM
http://anime2.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600021065
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 12:19:54 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6497842
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 05:59:25 AM
http://www.hpfanficarchive.com/stories/viewstory.php?sid=1483

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 06:29:58 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6144648
Could be interesting to bind two female slaves head to crotch.

or harry and a girl and then cover them in an Aphrodisiac and lock them in a small box like that so they keep rubbing against each other but can never move enough to actually get each other to orgasm.
 
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 06:33:57 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/6510035
Multiple slaves used in a ritual?

make how the golbins cuffs might work by giving them the ability to lock R/A/J  cuffs in mid air. sort of shackles without chains but use magic instead. after all actual chains just get in the way
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 06:59:48 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/4351653
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 07:02:35 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/5048993
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 14, 2018, 07:03:45 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/3276718
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 14, 2018, 05:26:49 PM
R/A/J in a position like http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/BenMorbez/567148/Hanging-around-II but with the cords from the toes running through the nipple rings to a clit ring.  For added stimulation, vibrators in her pussy and/or ass.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2018, 06:33:31 AM
Any update on the next chapter cateagle

or

snippet chapter  slyfer101?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2018, 06:46:42 AM
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/KinkyDept/507180/Slave-Annie---Page-11---Bondage-Comic1
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 15, 2018, 06:56:09 AM
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/KinkyDept/508303/Slave-Annie---Page-12---Bondage-Comic1
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 17, 2018, 12:18:41 AM
A query, would it seem reasonable that a copper-lined lead box would be able to hold a horcrux without the horcrux being able to affect anyone around it?  The copper lining gives you a Faraday cage and the lead walls should block anything equivalent to radioactivity; I know magic is different, but since it appears to affect electronics like an EMP, I would think such a container would isolate the horcrux.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2018, 12:42:30 AM
A query, would it seem reasonable that a copper-lined lead box would be able to hold a horcrux without the horcrux being able to affect anyone around it?  The copper lining gives you a Faraday cage and the lead walls should block anything equivalent to radioactivity; I know magic is different, but since it appears to affect electronics like an EMP, I would think such a container would isolate the horcrux.

I,assume you are trying to work out if the goblins knew if there was a horcrux in Bellatrix vault?

I don't know about lead and copper box but I am sure that there is some way to smuggle them with out them Being detected.

Although cutting a horcrux off from the outside world might be counterproductive.

And when it comes to horcrux remeber that haveing an emotional connection to it is what allows them to effect people.

I rambled a bit but I hope what typed helped
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2018, 03:33:55 AM
There are also times were I want to go full on evil and have Lily,James,Sirius,Dumbledore,Fred,ect alive after faking there deaths and have R/A/J find out ether during her enslavement or afterwards. but I feel like that is to Evil.

Maybe not have all of them alive but some of them and have her Find out by one of the Goblins throwing A copy of the Daily Prophet with the Announcement that such and such is alive on the front cover into her sleeping area. or when they walk into a meeting with the Goblins with R/A/J being used as the wand holder.

How much do the Golbins hate R/A/J ? would they go as far as time Travelling to Save the lives of Lily, James, Sirius, Dumbledore, Fred,ect just to Make R/A/J think that she was abandoned by them to the "mercy" of thegoblins?

how evil is to evil for the golbins?

will the Goblins just make R/A/J a Woobie or take R/A/J into full on Break the Cutie ?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2018, 06:32:54 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/4165386
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 17, 2018, 08:05:37 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/?tags=examine
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 17, 2018, 11:10:52 AM
A query, would it seem reasonable that a copper-lined lead box would be able to hold a horcrux without the horcrux being able to affect anyone around it?  The copper lining gives you a Faraday cage and the lead walls should block anything equivalent to radioactivity; I know magic is different, but since it appears to affect electronics like an EMP, I would think such a container would isolate the horcrux.

I,assume you are trying to work out if the goblins knew if there was a horcrux in Bellatrix vault?

I don't know about lead and copper box but I am sure that there is some way to smuggle them with out them Being detected.

Although cutting a horcrux off from the outside world might be counterproductive.

And when it comes to horcrux remeber that haveing an emotional connection to it is what allows them to effect people.

I rambled a bit but I hope what typed helped
It helped.  In this case, it is more of a method for containing one without concern for its survival (locket found earlier than in canon).  It is going to allow a certain trip to be cut short with the overall result that someone else is "cut short".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 18, 2018, 05:06:33 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=66304195
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:19:08 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=46679190
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:19:45 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=46375701
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:23:59 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=47177223
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:25:33 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=46549715
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:26:17 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=56210936
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:28:36 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=47673735
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:35:03 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56308236
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:36:03 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=56662546
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:38:25 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=64028141
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:41:11 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 10:47:34 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 19, 2018, 11:02:31 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 20, 2018, 12:02:35 AM
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Given the piercings on Rose, this is definitely a possibility for a future event or more than one future event.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 22, 2018, 04:54:16 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 23, 2018, 02:37:02 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 25, 2018, 10:47:23 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 25, 2018, 11:25:35 PM
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Could be interesting with two female slaves; also has potential with one male and one female slave, particularly if there is a relationship between them.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on January 25, 2018, 11:36:19 PM
How goes the chapter ? Are you more than 90% done?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on January 30, 2018, 11:24:42 PM
Holding at 80-85% due to real life, got a slew of "honey-do's" to deal with in Real Life.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: thatguy343 on February 01, 2018, 05:28:35 PM
Holding at 80-85% due to real life, got a slew of "honey-do's" to deal with in Real Life.
Just declare the fic dead and be done with it for God's sake, you've been saying '80% done' for over a year. Wait 14 days and it'll be 1 year 5 months since the last update. I've been checking in here from time to time and it's seriously annoying. If you haven't finished it in a year you aren't going to. As for you saying 'got to flesh out backstory and figure out how female Rose fits in at Hogwarts'....It's porn! Why the heck are you thinking so much? Anyways it became pathetic quite some time ago and now you're headed off into uncharted territory to find out what exactly lies beyond pathetic. Declare the fic dead and stop stringing people along.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on February 02, 2018, 08:53:19 PM
Er...No.  I'm working through my writer's block on this chapter and already have chunks of future chapters written.  I will not be giving up.

Now back to our regularly scheduled programming....
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 03, 2018, 07:00:07 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 04, 2018, 08:54:33 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 05, 2018, 11:01:21 AM
Er...No.  I'm working through my writer's block on this chapter and already have chunks of future chapters written.  I will not be giving up.

Now back to our regularly scheduled programming....

I am glad to hear that, and hope you are about to hit that 100% mark. I can understand thatguy343's frustration, though I certainly would have said it differently. Still , I encourage you to push forward. Good luck.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on February 21, 2018, 12:14:31 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on February 25, 2018, 03:23:07 PM
I see you're here today, cat. Any word on your progress?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 07, 2018, 03:56:45 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 09, 2018, 12:48:41 PM
Decided to post the challenge on Adultfanfic finally as well. Nobody seems to want to take it up still on AO3 or Hpfanfic. Shame.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 14, 2018, 03:14:21 AM
Decided to post the challenge on Adultfanfic finally as well. Nobody seems to want to take it up still on AO3 or Hpfanfic. Shame.

Any chance of another snippet anytime soon?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 14, 2018, 04:38:58 AM
Decided to post the challenge on Adultfanfic finally as well. Nobody seems to want to take it up still on AO3 or Hpfanfic. Shame.

Any chance of another snippet anytime soon?

Trying to think of one. I have a thought for a finale snippet, but I don't want to try that till I'm totally certain this challenge will never get off the ground.

I'll be honest now, after all this time I too feel that cateagle has given up. Shame, his version had potential...but after so long, I just can't see any more coming from him.

I can't post anything new myself for a while. I'm currently job hunting, as my restaurant is closing down come April while the owners begin changing it over to a hotel, so my time has to be spent seeking employment. I actually have an interview today, so hopefully things go well. We'll see what happens.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 14, 2018, 04:56:17 AM
To be fair, I think as Authors we need to post our ideas and challenges in a better way. Perhaps a Snippet(following the rules of the site regarding length and content of the work) as well as a general overview of what we would like to see included. If posting an idea as a snippet isn't workable perhaps a thread on these forums might be a better way?

Either way, I know that I'll be making use of a number of the ideas presented by cateagle, T1p2 and Slyfer101.

Slyfer101 can also congratulate himself for giving me the push to try writing my own stuff instead of just reading everyone else's work.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 14, 2018, 08:50:57 AM
To be fair, I think as Authors we need to post our ideas and challenges in a better way. Perhaps a Snippet(following the rules of the site regarding length and content of the work) as well as a general overview of what we would like to see included. If posting an idea as a snippet isn't workable perhaps a thread on these forums might be a better way?

Either way, I know that I'll be making use of a number of the ideas presented by cateagle, T1p2 and Slyfer101.

Slyfer101 can also congratulate himself for giving me the push to try writing my own stuff instead of just reading everyone else's work.

So, does that mean you'll be taking up the challenge then? I'd be quite happy to see what you might come up with, and am willing to offer any help you might need.

I know this idea has some real potential. It just needs someone to bring it out.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 14, 2018, 09:06:08 AM
As much as I'd like to have a go at the challenge, A) I've got work at a major International Sporting event for the last 2 weeks of March and first 3 weeks of April. I could certainly have a look at it after that point if nothing else comes up. B) I'm not sure that I have the skills to write at that level yet. C) If I was to have a crack at it, I may need some help with ideas for Fem!Harry's tortures.

(it seems I've already got some......)

I know what you mean about fic's potential - the fact that it was the Goblins who were taking Fem!Harry as a slave meant that they wouldn't have any reason to hold back (much) in their torment of their prisoner.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 14, 2018, 01:00:01 PM
As much as I'd like to have a go at the challenge, A) I've got work at a major International Sporting event for the last 2 weeks of March and first 3 weeks of April. I could certainly have a look at it after that point if nothing else comes up. B) I'm not sure that I have the skills to write at that level yet. C) If I was to have a crack at it, I may need some help with ideas for Fem!Harry's tortures.

(it seems I've already got some......)

I know what you mean about fic's potential - the fact that it was the Goblins who were taking Fem!Harry as a slave meant that they wouldn't have any reason to hold back (much) in their torment of their prisoner.

As much as I'd like to see you drop everything and do it, work must come first after all (what even btw? I'm not much of a sports fan, but some I do like to watch).
As for skills, part of writing the fic is developing your skills as you go. Just look at TheLemonSage's Eroninja fic...his writing was 'okay' to begin with, but as the years have gone by he's steadily gotten better and better! I'm sure you would as well.
And as for how to properly torment dear Juniper/Rose/Acacia/Whatever you name her? I'm sure we'd all be willing to help out with those. I thought my bit with Daggerok having visiting wizards/witches sheath their wands in her pussy and ass to be a good one, especially with them casting tickling and stinging charms as they pull them out...
...I truly have a depraved mind, don't I? (insert evil perverted grin).
Even if you only post short snips, I'm sure you could bring something good to the challenge. I'm willing to help as a sounding board/beta. Feel free to message me whenever you need. I'm cure Call0015 would help too.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 14, 2018, 05:23:11 PM
what even btw?

I'm set to work as a Security Guard at the 2018 Gold Coast Commonwealth Games, the Gold Coast being my home city.

As for skills, part of writing the fic is developing your skills as you go. Just look at TheLemonSage's Eroninja fic...his writing was 'okay' to begin with, but as the years have gone by he's steadily gotten better and better! I'm sure you would as well.

I'm slowly getting there - it helps if I don't try to get to detailed - nothing gives me writers block quicker than that.

And as for how to properly torment dear Juniper/Rose/Acacia/Whatever you name her? I'm sure we'd all be willing to help out with those. I thought my bit with Daggerok having visiting wizards/witches sheath their wands in her pussy and ass to be a good one, especially with them casting tickling and stinging charms as they pull them out...
...I truly have a depraved mind, don't I? (insert evil perverted grin).


From the office segment? That could be a fun idea.

Even if you only post short snips, I'm sure you could bring something good to the challenge. I'm willing to help as a sounding board/beta. Feel free to message me whenever you need. I'm cure Call0015 would help too.

Sure will do.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 14, 2018, 05:42:09 PM
Africa, huh? Truly, we are a multi-cultural bunch of pervs, aren't we? Lol.

Hope things go smoothly at the games.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 14, 2018, 05:46:39 PM
Africa, huh? Truly, we are a multi-cultural bunch of pervs, aren't we? Lol.

Hope things go smoothly at the games.

Huh?

No, not the Gold Coast in Western Africa, the Gold Coast on the East Coast of Australia!

I hope they go smoothly as well!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 14, 2018, 11:55:20 PM
Africa, huh? Truly, we are a multi-cultural bunch of pervs, aren't we? Lol.

Hope things go smoothly at the games.

Huh?

No, not the Gold Coast in Western Africa, the Gold Coast on the East Coast of Australia!

I hope they go smoothly as well!
Ah, my mistake. Darn Google...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 15, 2018, 12:02:39 AM
Africa, huh? Truly, we are a multi-cultural bunch of pervs, aren't we? Lol.

Hope things go smoothly at the games.

Huh?

No, not the Gold Coast in Western Africa, the Gold Coast on the East Coast of Australia!

I hope they go smoothly as well!
Ah, my mistake. Darn Google...

Lol

Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 15, 2018, 02:21:10 AM
To be fair, I think as Authors we need to post our ideas and challenges in a better way. Perhaps a Snippet(following the rules of the site regarding length and content of the work) as well as a general overview of what we would like to see included. If posting an idea as a snippet isn't workable perhaps a thread on these forums might be a better way?

Either way, I know that I'll be making use of a number of the ideas presented by cateagle, T1p2 and Slyfer101.

Slyfer101 can also congratulate himself for giving me the push to try writing my own stuff instead of just reading everyone else's work.

What type of storie have you been trying to write?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 15, 2018, 02:26:10 AM
BDSM stuff mainly, not much of which i'd care to share, some of it may be not to everyone's taste.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 15, 2018, 03:12:31 AM
BDSM stuff mainly, not much of which i'd care to share, some of it may be not to everyone's taste.

Honestly, that's pretty much the main focus of how this challenge was going to be played out, so I dont think you have much to worry about. All I ask was that there was no gore/vore, and no disfigurement (other than nipple/clit piercing and maybe some light branding).

As far as anything else? Its open game, though I shy away from scat and water-sports myself. That I'll leave to you, if its your thing.


Does that help?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 15, 2018, 03:23:16 AM
BDSM stuff mainly, not much of which i'd care to share, some of it may be not to everyone's taste.

Honestly, that's pretty much the main focus of how this challenge was going to be played out, so I dont think you have much to worry about. All I ask was that there was no gore/vore, and no disfigurement (other than nipple/clit piercing and maybe some light branding).

As far as anything else? Its open game, though I shy away from scat and water-sports myself. That I'll leave to you, if its your thing.

Does that help?

Scat and Watersports, If I had my way they'd be sent into a black hole.

I generally prefer "light BDSM" - Mainly the B&D side of things. the odd stuff basically is my interest in transformative(Female Human to Genie, for example), Cyborgs, Ponygirls, Milking, Cryo/Stasis, Fornophilla, etc
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 15, 2018, 03:47:20 AM
BDSM stuff mainly, not much of which i'd care to share, some of it may be not to everyone's taste.

Honestly, that's pretty much the main focus of how this challenge was going to be played out, so I dont think you have much to worry about. All I ask was that there was no gore/vore, and no disfigurement (other than nipple/clit piercing and maybe some light branding).

As far as anything else? Its open game, though I shy away from scat and water-sports myself. That I'll leave to you, if its your thing.

Does that help?

Scat and Watersports, If I had my way they'd be sent into a black hole.

I generally prefer "light BDSM" - Mainly the B&D side of things. the odd stuff basically is my interest in transformative(Female Human to Genie, for example), Cyborgs, Ponygirls, Milking, Cryo/Stasis, Fornophilla, etc

No worries then. We're in total agreement.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 17, 2018, 11:30:52 PM
BDSM stuff mainly, not much of which i'd care to share, some of it may be not to everyone's taste.

Honestly, that's pretty much the main focus of how this challenge was going to be played out, so I dont think you have much to worry about. All I ask was that there was no gore/vore, and no disfigurement (other than nipple/clit piercing and maybe some light branding).

As far as anything else? Its open game, though I shy away from scat and water-sports myself. That I'll leave to you, if its your thing.
Your dislikes pretty much mirror mine and those won't show up in my story (got my muse bound, getting more written - only way to control the flighty thing).  In addition to goblins, I will have Rose, and Harry for that matter, having sex with other sentient species (so not going the zoophilia route), though one of the species will not be recognized as sentient by most magicals.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 18, 2018, 02:02:43 AM
Same and considering I made this challenge thread over on adult fanfiction challenge forums(http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/topic/66268-femharry-emslave-by-weaslys/)

And am the one who linked this pic https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=1888012 to this thread

As you can see I don't have a problem with trasformative stuff at least in the Harry Potter world were there is magic to fix any accidents.

You should have a look at http://www2.adult-fanfiction.org/forum/forum/396-harry-potter/ there is a few trasformative challenges on there.

The main thing I care about is the magic so I mainly stick to hentia
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 20, 2018, 11:00:09 PM
Appropo of nothing here, I spent a large chunk of the day at the local branch of the bank my deceased brother had his IRA with.  I was his beneficiary and had a load of paperwork to go through.  My amused thought was that I was glad it wasn't Gringott's where I would have to use a blood quill.

I am also finding myself very glad that I have a lawyer down there to take care of most things and I don't have to run down there often to deal with matters (same state, just a good 400-mile drive, or an hour's drive to the airport plus a half-hour flight plus another hour's drive - I think I'd almost rather drive since it would be freeway almost all the way).
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: thatguy343 on March 22, 2018, 05:43:28 AM
@Slyfer101


Was just re-reading In Servitude to the Dark and was interested in knowing whether you'd be continuing it anytime soon. I'd love to see more of it.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 22, 2018, 01:36:17 PM
@Slyfer101


Was just re-reading In Servitude to the Dark and was interested in knowing whether you'd be continuing it anytime soon. I'd love to see more of it.

I do still want to continue it. I actually even have some of the next chapter after all the current one's written out. Problem is mostly that I've been trying to find new work - the restaurant I'm at currently is closing down at the end of the month - and a lack of motivation (yes, I'm honest enough to admit that I'm lazy). That said, I'll be working on it on my next day off (either Monday or Tues, depending on my bosses rota), so keep an eye out.

Now, if only someone would jump on my Warden of Azkaban or Goblin's Debt challenges...
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 23, 2018, 03:41:02 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 23, 2018, 04:35:10 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 23, 2018, 05:40:24 AM
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2065617

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2065613

How the Goblins collect sexual energy for succubus and Rituals
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 23, 2018, 06:22:57 AM
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...the pics are all well and good, but we need story for them now. I'm stuck with work for the next two weeks (the only other chef we have is leaving today, and Easter Hols start next week), so it'll be up to someone else to try the fic.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 23, 2018, 08:28:24 AM
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...the pics are all well and good, but we need story for them now. I'm stuck with work for the next two weeks (the only other chef we have is leaving today, and Easter Hols start next week), so it'll be up to someone else to try the fic.

I'm in the same boat.....

4 x 7:30am > 7:30pm

&

1 x 7:30pm > 7:30am!

5 days in a row!
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on March 23, 2018, 09:57:36 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on March 23, 2018, 09:59:34 PM
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I like that one, but would like their bodies erect, hands behind their heads and arms back; thrusting their breasts out.  Might make it a bit more "interesting" for them with a hooked Y-harness on their piercings.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on March 27, 2018, 01:52:47 PM
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...the pics are all well and good, but we need story for them now. I'm stuck with work for the next two weeks (the only other chef we have is leaving today, and Easter Hols start next week), so it'll be up to someone else to try the fic.

I'm in the same boat.....

4 x 7:30am > 7:30pm

&

1 x 7:30pm > 7:30am!

5 days in a row!

Been there, done that, got the T-shirt, used it as an oil rag...

That chef I mentioned? Never even turned up for his last shift. Came in four hours later only to ask where his pay was for the week.

THEN the jackass tells me he spoke to a few 'chef friends' of his, whom I'd sent my CV to. Said he told them I lied about my experience, and that I'd never cooked before meeting him.

Never mind the fact that I was hired at that restaurant a year before him.
Never mind the fact that I've actually got a Bachelor's of Culinary Science degree.
Never mind the fact that I worked at the Grand Canyon, Norwegian Cruise Lines, 3 hotels and 3 pubs here in England.
Never mind the fact that I SAVED HIS ASS once when he tried to send out a T-Bone steak, that was supposed to be Medium Well, still rare bordering on blue (seared on both sides and the meat still raw), on top of the fact that the steak was so SPOILED IT STANK UP THE WHOLE F@"£ING KITCHEN!

I seriously was within an inch of shoving his ugly mug into one of our deep fryers. My manager booted him from the building before I could say/do anything that would have got me arrested.

...so, yeah. It hasn't been a good couple of days folks. I wanted to get that ISttD chap done, but honestly? I've just had no enthusiasm for it. Hopefully that will change next week, as we get ready for the final close. I've got three potential job offers, and two more interviews lined up, so here's hoping.

Thanks for reading my rant, if you have. I just needed to get that out.

...so, cat? Any progress?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on March 28, 2018, 06:34:52 AM
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...the pics are all well and good, but we need story for them now. I'm stuck with work for the next two weeks (the only other chef we have is leaving today, and Easter Hols start next week), so it'll be up to someone else to try the fic.

I'm in the same boat.....

4 x 7:30am > 7:30pm

&

1 x 7:30pm > 7:30am!

5 days in a row!

Been there, done that, got the T-shirt, used it as an oil rag...

That chef I mentioned? Never even turned up for his last shift. Came in four hours later only to ask where his pay was for the week.

THEN the jackass tells me he spoke to a few 'chef friends' of his, whom I'd sent my CV to. Said he told them I lied about my experience, and that I'd never cooked before meeting him.

Never mind the fact that I was hired at that restaurant a year before him.
Never mind the fact that I've actually got a Bachelor's of Culinary Science degree.
Never mind the fact that I worked at the Grand Canyon, Norwegian Cruise Lines, 3 hotels and 3 pubs here in England.
Never mind the fact that I SAVED HIS ASS once when he tried to send out a T-Bone steak, that was supposed to be Medium Well, still rare bordering on blue (seared on both sides and the meat still raw), on top of the fact that the steak was so SPOILED IT STANK UP THE WHOLE F@"£ING KITCHEN!

I seriously was within an inch of shoving his ugly mug into one of our deep fryers. My manager booted him from the building before I could say/do anything that would have got me arrested.

...so, yeah. It hasn't been a good couple of days folks. I wanted to get that ISttD chap done, but honestly? I've just had no enthusiasm for it. Hopefully that will change next week, as we get ready for the final close. I've got three potential job offers, and two more interviews lined up, so here's hoping.

Thanks for reading my rant, if you have. I just needed to get that out.

...so, cat? Any progress?

Ouch, that sounds rough.

I gotta wait until next week for my pay.
Fortunately, most of my shifts have been pretty cruisey, except for the few twats now and then.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on April 30, 2018, 06:38:01 PM
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=manga&illust_id=59379613

...the pics are all well and good, but we need story for them now. I'm stuck with work for the next two weeks (the only other chef we have is leaving today, and Easter Hols start next week), so it'll be up to someone else to try the fic.

I'm in the same boat.....

4 x 7:30am > 7:30pm

&

1 x 7:30pm > 7:30am!

5 days in a row!

Been there, done that, got the T-shirt, used it as an oil rag...

That chef I mentioned? Never even turned up for his last shift. Came in four hours later only to ask where his pay was for the week.

THEN the jackass tells me he spoke to a few 'chef friends' of his, whom I'd sent my CV to. Said he told them I lied about my experience, and that I'd never cooked before meeting him.

Never mind the fact that I was hired at that restaurant a year before him.
Never mind the fact that I've actually got a Bachelor's of Culinary Science degree.
Never mind the fact that I worked at the Grand Canyon, Norwegian Cruise Lines, 3 hotels and 3 pubs here in England.
Never mind the fact that I SAVED HIS ASS once when he tried to send out a T-Bone steak, that was supposed to be Medium Well, still rare bordering on blue (seared on both sides and the meat still raw), on top of the fact that the steak was so SPOILED IT STANK UP THE WHOLE F@"£ING KITCHEN!

I seriously was within an inch of shoving his ugly mug into one of our deep fryers. My manager booted him from the building before I could say/do anything that would have got me arrested.

...so, yeah. It hasn't been a good couple of days folks. I wanted to get that ISttD chap done, but honestly? I've just had no enthusiasm for it. Hopefully that will change next week, as we get ready for the final close. I've got three potential job offers, and two more interviews lined up, so here's hoping.

Thanks for reading my rant, if you have. I just needed to get that out.

...so, cat? Any progress?
My sympathies, I can relate.  On one program, I was loaned to assist another team and the manager praised me to my face but badmouthed the heck out of me to my home manager.  Then, when I was going to switch to another program within the company, this back-stabbing manager tried to get me to come work for him.  I barely managed to restrain my laughter until out of his sight and earshot.  Some co-workers who later had to work with him told me, afterwards, that they then understood why I didn't care for him.

I'm making progress on Rose's story (despite being dragooned into the heavy lifting for "spring cleaning" - peril of being retired) and then I will use that as a template for finishing the matching chapter for Harry's story.  Beyond that, a simple dental check up lead to several findings (tooth needing extraction and replacement by implant; a spot of cancer in a salivary gland) that are going to see me in several rounds of surgery the rest of the year; it's going to be one of THOSE years again.  Good news is that this was all caught fairly early before problems could develop to dangerous degrees.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on May 29, 2018, 09:16:41 PM
For what it's worth, I go in tomorrow for an operation to remove that cancer.  Once I recover from that, we'll schedule the extraction and bone build up and three months after that will come the implant.  Not one of my better years :(
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on June 12, 2018, 11:25:27 PM
Haven't had a chance to check the thread for a bit. How you doing, cateagle? Surgery go alright?

I'm working on what would be like an epilogue chap for the fic series right now. I'm hoping to get it online by Friday, on my next day off.

Hope things are getting better for you, my friend.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 16, 2018, 05:05:19 PM
Operation went okay, but they needed to move a major nerve bundle and I've temporarily lost control and most sensation over the lower left quadrant of my face; the operation has also left me tiring rather easily and resting more than I'm used to.  I need to get the tooth extraction done before the chemo starts, so there's lots of "interesting" times ahead.  Good news is that the PET scan shows only a few potential trouble spots, in my neck, and the rest of me looks good.

I am making progress on this chapter Rose's story, which I will then use as a template for fleshing out this chapter of Harry's story.  Already have bits of the next chapter of each written; need to explain how Rose/Harry developed a code of honor, one that's almost goblin-esque, while having guardians who are vicious, amoral bigots.

Oh, and to keep the writing gears lubed, I'm also editing The Rose Paradox that's on HP fanfiction archives.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on June 17, 2018, 01:26:53 AM
Posted the 'epilogue' chap on HPfanfic and on AO3. Hopefully it helps others get inspired to write the fic.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on June 17, 2018, 01:53:20 PM
Posted the 'epilogue' chap on HPfanfic and on AO3. Hopefully it helps others get inspired to write the fic.
Interesting ending and epilogue; though not exactly what I have in mind for Rose.  Still, 'tis definitely interesting and plausible.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 05, 2018, 11:28:26 AM
For what it's worth, it doesn't appear that I will need chemo at this time; need to wait for body to recover before seeing if I need radiation therapy.

Meanwhile, writing continues and I'm working on a few chapters ahead to get it out of my head and written down.  Rose is going to have a most interesting first birthday as an "indentured servant".
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on July 06, 2018, 08:31:22 AM
Good to hear. Glad things seem to be looking up for you.

Any chance on you posting one or two of these chaps soon? I'd really like to see how it's working out so far.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on July 07, 2018, 05:06:34 PM
Good to hear. Glad things seem to be looking up for you.

Any chance on you posting one or two of these chaps soon? I'd really like to see how it's working out so far.
Yeah, got more medical to go through (tooth extraction and bone graft to jaw on the 17th) but matters do seem to be looking up.  I can't complain, matters seem to be caught before they go too far.  Second round with cancer and the first appears to be remaining clear (note to guys, I heartily suggest and support yearly PSA checks, that's a nasty cancer to deal with).

My aim is to get the birthday chapter finished and posted here within a month (so, mid-August or earlier); it's going to be a rather different birthday than Rose expects and than the goblins expect.  Once I get that done, I'll start working on the alternate version for Harry and the fun that will be.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 20, 2018, 07:10:47 PM
Didn't quite make mid-August, extraction and bone graft took a good bit out of me after the earlier surgery.  The birthday chapter is coming along nicely, though, and should be up here, for review and beta no later than Labor Day.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on August 21, 2018, 05:50:55 AM
Good to hear that your still alive!

Great to hear that the next chapter is coming along.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on August 26, 2018, 01:08:17 AM
Well, it's more a few chapters out.  My muse insisted that I write Rose's first birthday as an "indentured servant"; it's rather more than she or the goblins expected.

I'll be posting it here before the end of Labor Day for review and comment.  it's getting me back to finishing the next chapter to go up.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 04, 2018, 12:42:49 PM
Okay, this is a few chapters out from where the story is now, but my muse insisted I write it for Rose.  It is un-betaed so I'm open to comments and suggestions.
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Main Goblin Corridors, Tirith Ungol, Evening of July 31, 1998

Rose was breathing hard as she walked fast behind the goblin guiding her.  Yeah, I'd better walk fast if I don't want to fall and be dragged by the chain on my clit ring, she groused as she took rapid strides, though not as long a stride as she would wish, the set of chains from her ankle manacles to her pussy lips certainly limited how long her stride could comfortably be.

She had been removed from her work detail early and sent for a thorough cleansing, much like that from when she was first processed, bound to the pillars and all, then weights on metallic cords were attached to her three ring piercings and then additional chains were affixed to her ankle manacles to a fan of clamps on each adjacent pussy lip.  The basic sensations aroused her, but the tug and pain of trying to walk with too long a stride forced her to walk quite swiftly while the hanging weights forced her to do so smoothly.

I wonder what's up, she thought as they entered the halls for higher ranking goblins; I don't think I've done anything to get very official punishments.  Ahead, she could see some very large doors on one side of the corridor and her guide was slowing down.  He stopped in front of the doors and turned to her, “Rest here while I tell those inside that you are here.”

Rose assumed a submissive posture and replied, “Yes, Master goblin.”  The goblin nodded and entered through a smaller door inset in the larger one.  He returned shortly, opened lower portions of both large doors, bowed, and announced, “King Kilgrave and the other leaders await you inside with a special treat.”

Aw. fuck!  Thought Rose, This is going to be “interesting” but very much a mix of pain and pleasure.  Steeling herself, the slave witch moved through the doors onto the floor of a large banquet area.  The tables were arranged in tiers with King Kilgrave, Director Ragnok, Senior Teller Dggerok, and other high-ranking goblins, and their mates, seated on the lowest tier while clan leaders and their mates were seated on the ascending tiers according to a hierarchy she did not yet understand.  Moving to the center, between two pillars as directed by hand signs, she assumed the appropriate position, sitting down on her knees, legs spread, and reclining with her hands on her ankles, leaving her full exposed to the goblins' gaze.  Despite herself, Rose felt a trickle of arousal in her pussy and hoped it wouldn't show; that would just make things more difficult.

King Kilgrave looked at her.  “Slave, do you know today's date above the ground?”

Puzzled, Rose replied, “No, your majesty, I do not.  I have lost track of time here in your kingdom.”

The goblin grinned, “It is now the evening of July 31st, your birthday.  Since you have a degree of notoriety among us, we have decided that a celebration of sorts should be held.”  He nodded to two guards who approached Rose and took her over to the pillars.  They attached her wrist manacles to the upper chains which retracted, spreading her arms wide as she was lifted off the floor by them; chains were then attached to her ankle manacles and her legs spread wide.  That explains the extra chains to my pussy lips, she realized, this spreads my pussy open wide for all to see and strike.

“We understand that, in the non-magical world, it's a tradition to spank someone as many times as they are years old,” continued the powerful goblin.  “we will be doing something similar here.  I, Director Ragnok, Senior Teller Daggerok, and the head of each clan will each lash you 18 times with the implement of our choice.  When that is over, we have a present of sorts for you which we will tell you about then."  Rose shuddered, This is not going to be fun!

Two hours later, Rose was panting and shuddering at the blocked climaxes building in her as the last goblin finished.  Some of them had used sensual tools, like a soft leather flogger, while others had used canes and whips and the head of the Hook clan, who seemed to really hate her, used a barbed cat-o-nine-tails with great care to catch her nipples, breasts, and the inside surfaces of her pussy.

King Kilgrave approached her.  “You took that well, as befits your captured warrior status.  You deserve a boon for good behavior.”  He touched the ring in her clit and lifted the block on her orgasms,; then stepped back and watched as she writhed and cried out from the mixture of pleasure and pain hitting her all at once.  The audience watched in amusement as she squirted hard in her orgasms.  When Rose subsided, and hung there panting, the king unveiled the next portion of her participation.

Directing other human slaves to clean Rose up and the fluids she'd put on the floor, King Kilgrave waited until Rose was again clean and attentive.  He motioned to other slaves and a low stone bench was brought out.  “This is sometimes called a breeding bench,” he informed her.  “Slaves are bound to it and breed by selected males as a punishment.  For you, now, it will be more of an intimate learning experience about a species I am certain you have, at most, only read about.”  He gestured again, and she was taken down from being spread, the hanging weights were removed, and she was bound to the bench.  Her legs were spread and bound and the chains to her pussy lips opened her completely.  Her upper arms were bound to the front legs of the bench and hooked chains to her nipple piercings pulled taut and aroused her.  Fully bound, she looked up at King Kilgrave.

“I know that you took Care of Magical Creatures at Hogwarts, so you should have read Newt Scamander's book.  Did you read all of it?”

Rose nodded and replied, “Yes, your majesty; even the portions that didn't apply to what we covered in class.”

“Excellent!” beamed the goblin.  “I regret to tell you, though, that he was wrong about the wampus species; they are fully intelligent, sentient, and social beings.  Which brings us to what's going to happen next.  The head of the primary wampus clan has been invited to attend tonight to give you an intimate understanding of his species.”

Rose blinked. In this position, an intimate understanding can only mean a through fucking; I'm in for quite a time.

“And,” continued the king, “here he is now, the clan leader.

The smaller doors opened as a large feline shape moved through them.  As he came into the light, Rose could see where some of the legends Scamander had reported came from.  He resembled a cougar, enlarged to match some of the larger African and Asian cats, but with a larger forehead that clearly showed intelligence.  His fur was a reddish copper, much as she had heard native Americans' skin was, save for a black pompom of a crest on the top of his head that quickly dropped to a mane that went halfway down his back.  The newcomer bowed, {Greetings, King Kilgrave and goblin leaders.  I am here to sex the human as agreed to}  Looking around, he spotted the bound Rose.  {Ah, she is attractive, and such an unusual mindglow!}

Rose shook her head, she hadn't heard spoken words.  With a boldness unbecoming a slave, she spoke up.  “Master wampus, what do you mean 'mindglow''?”

The feline's head snapped over to look at her, as did those of most of the goblins. {You heard?  It has been ages since a human has heard us; not since the shamans were forced away for our territory}

Yes, Master wampus, I heard you,” Rose responded, adopting as submissive a pose as she could.  “I apologize for interrupting you.”

{No apologies necessary, it was just quite unexpected.}  The wampus looked her over again.  {Yes, the mindglow – that is our term for how we perceive other minds; most humans, even most with magic, can't perceive this and only the rare human can understand us mind to mind.  On the other hand, most goblins and other magical sentients can; I have been able to converse with merpeople who came up our river and with a dragon who politely passed through our territory.}

Rose couldn't help but chuckle, “Story of my life, the improbable always happens to me.  Even with that piece of Riddle removed, I can still talk with snakes; that seems to be part of my Peverell inheritance.  Too, it seems that parseltongue allows conversing with dragons.”  She turned to King Kilgrave, “I was able to converse with the dragon I departed on; gave him directions to the Romanian reserve.  If it please Your Majesty, I would be willing to see if I could talk with your other dragons.”

The goblin nodded, “That might be something for the future, slave.  But we are more interested in the present events.

The wampus nodded, {Understandable, Your Majesty.  You should know, though, that it will not be a simple sexing with her mind glow and her ability to “hear” me.  We shall blend and share.  If you would be so kind, please remove her climax inhibitor for the rest of this night, I wish to share fully with her.}

“Agreed!” the King replied and one of the goblins on an end table moved to touch the ring on Rose's clit.

The wampus stalked around the bound witch, carefully observing her; finally he turned to her. {What is your name when you are not a slave here?}

“Rose, Master Wampus.”

{My name, as it would be pronounced among your people, is Illyan.  Please call me that}

“Yes, Master Illyan,” replied Rose with a bit of a smile.

The large feline just shook his head and, his feline cock growing fully erect, started prowling around her, licking her face softly, then laving her breasts and nipples with his raspy tongue and causing Rose to shiver in pleasure.  Moving behind her, he proceeded to lick her clit, pussy, and asshole, before concentrating on her pussy and clit.  Rose shuddered to a climax when his tongue, after thoroughly working over her clit, pressed in and caught her g-spot.  When she recovered from that climax, she spoke.  “Master Illyan, if you stand in front of me and put your forepaws on my ass, I should be able to orally pleasure you to return the favor.”

The large wampus moved to that position and pressed his large cock against her mouth.  In response, Rose opened her mouth and took him in, fleshy barbs, large veins, and all, working it with her tongue as she adjusted her throat to fully accommodate him having long since lost any gag reflex she might have once had.  When his cock finally throbbed with his orgasm, the young witch managed to swallow all of his seed; finding the taste distinctive, but not unpleasant.

The felinoid panted as he eased his cock out of her mouth; before he could say anything, Rose smiled at him and offered, “Thank you Master Illyan, it was my pleasure to please you.

{And you did it well, witch Rose.  We shall fully enjoy each other.  Now, I believe I need to get you ready for my full attentions}  The wampus moved behind her and again starting licking her clit, sex, and asshole, once he realized how that aroused her, with his raspy tongue.  Once she was aroused and wet, his forepaws went on her back and he slowly eased his barbed cock into her.

Rose shuddered at the sensations, particularly after the earlier lashings had sensitized her so.  She did manage to internally morph to best fit him and enjoyed all the sensations he was giving her.  He then commanded {Open your mind to mine, Rose, feel me and open to me}

{but how?} she managed to send mentally.

{Follow my voice with your mind, Rose.  You will find me and we will join our minds as we join our bodies}

Rose struggled for a moment, then managed to find him and was surprised.  The wampus was starkly intelligent, starkly male, and starkly aroused.  {I'm here, Master Illyan, and I wish to fully blend with you}  With that, she could feel him fully joining with her.

{Now, witch Rose, let us fully join!}

The feline started thrusting in Rose's pussy, the fleshy barbs teasing her like a textured condom might; from her experiences in goblin service already, both the pain and pleasure quite aroused her, and her arousal fed his.  He started to thrust harder and fast until he was pistoning in her and burying himself to the balls with every thrust; that these balls were bouncing off her exposed and sensitive clit just added to her growing arousal.  The feelings grew more intense and their combined minds held off the climax as long as they both could; but they finally climaxed together with her pussy flooded with his fluids.  Remaining hard, he resumed moving within her, varying the speed and angle to maximize the pleasure he could feel from her.  A second mutual orgasm passed for both of them, then a third, and finally they slowly worked up to a fourth extremely intense mutual climax.  Rose was panting after that.  {Master Illyan, I think my pussy needs a break after that last one}  The witch thought privately for a moment. {Master Illyan, I have taken you in my mouth and you have taken me in my pussy, I offer myself completely to you and ask that you take me in my ass so as to take all my hole}

{As you wish, Witch Rose, this will complete our joining}  To the surprise of the watching goblins, who had quite enjoyed her cries and his roars, the wampus eased his still rampant member out of the witch's pussy, fluids dripping, positioned it at her rosebud, and started pressing it into her.  {Relax, Witch Rose, let me in gently that I may fill you}

Rose managed to relax her sphincter and felt the large feline cock start to fill her, she moaned at the sensations while shuddering at the stretching she was getting.

{That's it, Rose, you're letting me fully in and you are so tight}]/I]  Rose did an internal morph to accommodate him while giving him a tight passage to work in, something she'd already learned from taking various goblins and toys.

His balls now resting on her pussy and clit, the wampus started to work back and forth, slowly thrusting back deep into Rose's bowels.  As he felt Rose's arousal and pleasure through their joining, he sped up his movement until he was pistoning in her ass, his large balls slapping against the witch's pussy and clit, as she cried out in pleasure.  {Your pleasure is my pleasure, Rose, our minds are joined in this}

{Then, Master Illyan, please take me hard, you can tell how much pleasure I get and I can feel your pleasure in my tightness}

The feline pounded Rose's ass until, with a roar from him and a cry of pleasure for her, he flooded her bowels with his fluids.  As their mutual climax subsided, the wampus eased himself down on top of her.  {that was magnificent, Witch Rose, you showed as much stamina as one of our females; I have thoroughly enjoyed sharing this with you}

{And I with you, Master Illyan; but I think that last one finished me}

{Then let us unjoin and be two again}  Rose couldn't tell how, but she felt the separation occur, and the loss of being alone in herself.  “Master Illyan, thank you for quite a lessoning.”

{My distinct pleasure, Witch Rose}

The wampus eased his cock out of the bound witch's ass, to her moans, and dismounted from her.  Turning to face the goblin leadership, he bowed.  {King Kilgrave, thank for a far more fascinating experience than I expected.  I quite enjoyed myself.  Knowing that this slave will have two more birthdays while in your realm, I politely request that I be able to attend and participate both of these times}

A rather surprised King Kilgrave thought for a moment, and then responded.  “It shall be as you ask, and the payment shall be the same each time.”

{My thanks, Your Majesty.  Now, I must needs clean myself and rest; that was quite a joining!}

“Then, good night Master Wampus.”  The wampus nodded and padded out the small door.

King Kilgrave turned his attention to Rose.  “After all that, you will be cleaned up feed a nourishing potion and food mix.  I suggest you rest after that as you will need it.  The Hogwarts letters were delivered today and the Alley will be swarming with people tomorrow.  We will be putting you on anonymous display from dawn to dusk, complete with your swollen sex.

Rose nodded as she was released from the stone bench.  “Thank you, Your Majesty.  I look forward to yet another new experience.”

The top goblin waved a command to the slaves and they led her out.]

The wampus as described takes elements of American folk lore, James H. Schmitz's Jontarou Crest Cats and Dave Weber's Sphinxian Tree Cats.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: rannorgana on September 04, 2018, 06:44:44 PM
Excellent work, Cateagle!

I look forward to more of your work, as always.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 04, 2018, 11:58:28 PM
Thanks.  It has provided inspiration for getting back to the immediate chapters of both stories that I'm working on as well as the intermediate ones between them and where this one occurs. 

I'll have to find the picture I commissioned for this one; it's a good one.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 05, 2018, 04:35:54 AM
Thanks.  It has provided inspiration for getting back to the immediate chapters of both stories that I'm working on as well as the intermediate ones between them and where this one occurs. 

I'll have to find the picture I commissioned for this one; it's a good one.

Was this it?

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470327/COMMISSION--Pulled-in-Place

I agree, it is a good one. Nice snippet btw. Now I really want to see what you have for Rose's other chaps. Any chance at a preview for one or two? I still can't seem to get anyone else to take the challenge. I get plenty of kudo's over on AO3, but no takers.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 05, 2018, 09:28:04 AM
Thanks.  It has provided inspiration for getting back to the immediate chapters of both stories that I'm working on as well as the intermediate ones between them and where this one occurs. 

I'll have to find the picture I commissioned for this one; it's a good one.

Was this it?

http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pictures/user/SarahSalanica/470327/COMMISSION--Pulled-in-Place

I agree, it is a good one. Nice snippet btw. Now I really want to see what you have for Rose's other chaps. Any chance at a preview for one or two? I still can't seem to get anyone else to take the challenge. I get plenty of kudo's over on AO3, but no takers.
Actually, that one was more for a bit from her introduction and display to the goblins as well as her submission to them for all to see.

Here's the one specifically for this scene:
https://www.furaffinity.net/view/28292257/

Realistically, this will probably be a chapter on its own when I get to when it occurs in the story.  The day after is another thing entirely as between the hood and the changes to her body, no one realizes who she is while she is on display in front of Gringotts.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 11:25:14 AM
Looks fine although I think that they were being a bit to nice to her.

Also not a fan of the captured warrior stuff, mainly because being a captured warrior was not a good thing an example of what would happen to a captured warrior is the English longbow man when the French used to capture them they would cut there middle and pointer fingers off to make it so they could never use a bow again.

A wizard or witch captured by goblin would probably have there hands permanently crippled so they could never hold a wand or brew a potion again
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 11:35:28 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/toBm7kM.jpg)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 11:36:28 AM
(https://i.imgur.com/mcXMhqi_d.jpg?maxwidth=640&shape=thumb&fidelity=medium)
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 12:02:59 PM
https://nhentai.net/g/226212/
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 12:04:03 PM
https://nhentai.net/g/230124/
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 12:05:57 PM
https://nhentai.net/g/170264/
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 12:16:49 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4322576
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 05, 2018, 12:17:28 PM
https://gelbooru.com/index.php?page=post&s=view&id=4345137
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 05, 2018, 07:15:39 PM
Looks fine although I think that they were being a bit to nice to her.

Also not a fan of the captured warrior stuff, mainly because being a captured warrior was not a good thing an example of what would happen to a captured warrior is the English longbow man when the French used to capture them they would cut there middle and pointer fingers off to make it so they could never use a bow again.

A wizard or witch captured by goblin would probably have there hands permanently crippled so they could never hold a wand or brew a potion again
I appreciate the input.  In this case, the status is equivalent to a captured goblin warrior (the hows and the whys will be explained before I get to this chapter).  They respect what she has come through and yet developed the honor she's shown.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 13, 2018, 12:25:21 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 14, 2018, 10:36:02 PM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 03:47:28 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 03:47:47 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 03:48:01 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 04:01:35 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 04:03:26 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 04:15:40 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 04:16:17 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 04:18:27 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 15, 2018, 05:47:03 AM
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/post/show/7098992
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 16, 2018, 12:19:36 AM
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That one has considerable potential for showing up in both stories, both for Rose and for Harry.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 16, 2018, 10:18:27 PM
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(For this one, I would imagine the Goblins replacing the bucket with a braiser of hot coals)

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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 17, 2018, 10:06:46 PM
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(For this one, I would imagine the Goblins replacing the bucket with a braiser of hot coals)

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Some definite possibilities there.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 19, 2018, 09:53:21 PM
https://www.deviantart.com/plasma-dragon/art/Stolen-764360678

That's an idea The goblins use Orgasm denial of Fem!Harry but instead of Letting her have the Orgasm in the end they take her Orgasm and sell it to the Highest bidder.

I wounder if they could turn that into a product with Goblins slaves being farmed for Orgasms that the Goblins can sell, maybe even go into Business with Weasley's Wizarding wheezes selling an adults range first product orgasm in a bottle.

Instructions for Orgasm in a bottle simply get comfortable on your bed and them take an Orgasm pill in your mouth and experience the best orgasm of your life with none of the work.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 20, 2018, 07:08:50 PM
A possibility I'll need to think about.  I could see some clans using it, but not others.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 22, 2018, 05:57:57 AM
The Gringotts inheritance test could be a trap for muggleborns with the Ministry giving Gringotts the approval to Enslave anyone that tries to take it.

Just because its a trap for muggleborns don't mean that Half-bloods and purebloods wouldn't be caught out by it.

or if the Ministry want to depose of someone they could send then a notice to please take a Gringotts inheritance test
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on September 22, 2018, 01:00:44 PM
A good new story on adultfanfiction you might like http://hp.adult-fanfiction.org/story.php?no=600099846
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on September 26, 2018, 12:42:59 AM
https://e-hentai.org/g/1292145/81c4897440/

Edit; and this one - https://e-hentai.org/g/1292981/a35ebef505/

...some eldritch abominations to this one, but I could see the Goblins doing some of these to some of the more disobedient slaves.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on September 30, 2018, 05:02:23 PM
Yeah, I could see possibilities there.  I do plan an encounter with a succubus that should prove "interesting" but not sure if any other otherworldly beings will show up.  I don't especially want a situation such as occurs in "Descent Into Madness" on FFN where various Elder Powers are awakened by events.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: Magic on October 12, 2018, 02:22:15 AM
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Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on October 20, 2018, 12:41:15 AM
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I could see that either during Rose's training or as punishment by a clan that did not like her much, if at all, to begin with.  I can imagine something similar in intent happening to Harry, too.

*grin* Perhaps this is her introduction to the "Hook" clan's control.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on November 19, 2018, 07:50:56 AM
Well, I've now added the challenge to Questionable Questing, though I doubt I'll get anymore reaction there than I have anywhere else. Shame really - I still feel that this idea has great potential as a good smut fic, one that could have actual plot and not just be about sex.
Haven't heard anything from you gonna while cateagle. Any chance on a chapter before the year is out, or should we all just move on?
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on November 30, 2018, 06:56:08 PM
Well, been dealing with a nasty cold that developed into bronchitis; still working on things but Fall has been busier than expected.  I don't feel confident making any promises at this point, but there is a possibility.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: slyfer101 on December 19, 2018, 06:38:51 PM
Well, been dealing with a nasty cold that developed into bronchitis; still working on things but Fall has been busier than expected.  I don't feel confident making any promises at this point, but there is a possibility.

So, no then.

I'll be honest, I'm not surprised. Months back I made allowances for it, but even with that 'Wampus' snippet, you've had almost 2 years to do an actual chapter. At this point, even I have to say that I can't believe you're actually going to continue the fic, and that the challenge is pretty much dead.

Its a shame, really. While the writing needed some work, your ideas had potential. I really wanted to see where you would have taken the idea.

Now, I know some people will try and call me out on this, asking why I don't just do it myself. I honestly would like to, but my job as a chef in a nursing home means I'm working a minimum of 11 hours a day, on call 7 days a week, and I have 50+ lives in my hands every day. By the time I get off work, I'm mentally and physically exhausted, and while I have many interesting ideas, I just have no energy to bring them to life.

I post occasionally on Questionable Questing now, and Cambrian (one of the more prolific smut writers on the site) likes the ideas I come up with, so he might try his hand at one or two of them. We'll see what happens.

Thank you for at least trying, cateagle. I wish you luck in your future endeavors.
Title: Re: Discussion Thread for Rose/Harry Potter - Settling the Goblins' Debt
Post by: cateagle on December 21, 2018, 02:27:36 PM
I'm still working on it, got some written last night.  Didn't help that I had a nasty fall that messed me up a fair bit (11 stitches on the forehead in the ER among other things).  I just don't want to promise what I can't deliver.  The holidays look to be quiet and I hope to get writing done then.